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Max
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Thread Name: Ruined Soil
City/Area: Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language and Violence
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Knowledge:
Max:
Deception: Confusing Scent with Blood Patterns
Detection: Muscle Movements Can Indicate Next Attack
Detection: Predicting the Next Strike by Maintaining Contact
Detection: Tension Often Precedes Action
Leadership: Motivating Your Allies with a Challenge
Stealth: Testing For Sturdy, Quiet Footing Before You Step
Stealth: Attacking Your Opponent Under the Cover of Dark
Unarmed Combat: Downward Stomp


Mercedes:
Meditation: Remaining focused on the task
Meditation: Do not break concentration
Meditation: A state of deep thought
Discipline: Fighting the Blood-rage
Discipline: Resisting the Berserk state
Endurance: Teeth-grinding pain.
Discipline: Resisting the urge to kill.
Discipline: Do not move

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nah
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
word count: 129
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Alistair
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Thread Name: Clinging to the World
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Some violence

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alistair
Rupturing: Blinking into a blind-spot
Polearms: Spear - A blink into a leg sweep
Medicine: Treating a lethal battlefield injury
Medicine: Time sensitive treatments
Medicine: Failing your patient due to distractions
Discipline: Acting on your ethics, regardless of anyone else

Mercedes
Defiance: Dancing With Fire
Defiance: Elements can take various shapes
Defiance: Combating a Rupturer
Defiance: Zametat Flame
Tactics: Distracting an opponent
Rhetoric: Brutal honesty
Detection: Hearing an opponent from the rear
Tactics: Miscalculations can be deadly

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Slight at best
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes, for Mercedes
word count: 114
Kohan Wulfbjorn
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Review Requests 2.1.5

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Thread Name: One Fish, Two Fish, Mer Fish, Drunk Fish
City/Area: Bay of Synnefa south of Viden
Notes/Warnings: Mild sexual humor.
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Zweihander: It's heavy to hold it up for a long time!
Strength: Holding heavy objects at harsh angles makes muscles sore quickly
Intimidation: Yelling
Intimidation: Giant Swords Are Scary
Intimidation: Happens Accidentally
Running: In The Snow
Location: Viden
Location: Bay of Synnefa
Location: Academy of Viden
Race: Mer

Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 84
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Thread Name: Bloodbored (Part 3)
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Vulgarities. Some Suggestive content. Boredom.
Requested Rewards:
Nah
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 32
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Doran Cooney
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Thread Name: Happy Birthday, Dear Mother
City/Area: Rynmere, Andaris
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
I gave up pretending there's knowledges in these.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Doran Cooney on Tue Jun 12, 2018 2:40 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 43
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Patrick
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Profession: Trouble
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Thread Name: A Love That Hurts Long After
City/Area: Rharne, Memory Thread
Notes/Warnings: Heartbreak Warfare near the end
Requested Rewards:
  • Endurance: Exhausted From Long Nights At Work
  • Endurance: Walking From Rharne's Earth Quarter to Sky Quarter
  • Discipline: Calming Your Nerves By Taking Walks
  • Meditation: Reflecting On Situations While You Walk
  • Personal: Lexi Left
  • Personal: The Feeling of Abandonment
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Renown: You decide
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Patrick on Tue Jun 12, 2018 11:05 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 78
"Freedom is everything."


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Thread Name: Salt & Pepper
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Vulgarities and stuff
Requested Rewards:
Pepper
Dreamwalking : Key to taking control of your dream is belief
Dreamwalking: Returning to the homebase
Dreamwalking: Waking yourself up
Nyvora: Sauntuary: Able to expel unwanted guests from the dreamscape
Nyvora: Sauntuary: A protective barrier surrounding the dreamscape
Nyvora: Sauntuary: Forcefully throwing someone out would almost certainly give them a headache

Zipper
Dreamwalking: Trespassing
Dreamwalking: Trespassing: A uninvited guest of a foreign dreamscape can be ejected by certain types of hosts
Dreamwalking: Trespassing: Able to seek out specific dreamers within range
Dreamwalking: Trespassing: No permission needed to enter a foreign dreamscape
Dreamwalking: Walking
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
word count: 121
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Doran Cooney
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Thread Name: Ain't No Party Like This Birthday Party
City/Area: Rynmere, Andaris
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Nun.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Doran Cooney on Tue Jun 12, 2018 2:40 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 39
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Nightshade Eld
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Thread Name: Swordswoman's Blade
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: A quick memory thread to push up a couple blade knowledge that somehow turned into Night getting a very important plot item from her dad.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blade: Keeping a weapon properly sharpened
Blade: Caution when near the blade's edge
Blade: Polish and oil the blade
Blade: "Care for your blade and it will care for you"
Storytelling: The living blade
Storytelling: Why you name a sword

Loot: A large silver pendant with strange markings on one side and an odd portrait on the other. Inside the pendant is a note written completely in Avrielian Script.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A

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Last edited by Nightshade Eld on Tue Jun 12, 2018 4:16 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 126
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Arlo Creede
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: I'm Fixing A Hole, Where The Rain Gets In....
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Knowledge:
Psychology: Change can make you feel out of sorts
Psychology: Associating strange feelings with someone is disconcerting
Psychology: Considering why you're feeling what you are.
Psychology: Arguing leaves you feeling discombobulated
Psychology: Sometimes, it's hard to work out why you do and say what you say and do..
Woodcraft: Making ladders
Woodcraft: The tools for making hatches.


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope
Arlo
Knowledge:
Construction: Replacing a doorknob
Construction: Setting a hatch in the right place so as not to weaken a structure
Construction: Repairing damage you've done.
Fishing: Minnow are good bait
Fishing: The back of a ship is a good spot
Fishing: Late afternoon is a good time.
Woodcraft: Making ladders and hatches.
Woodcraft: The tools for making hatches.
Woodcraft: Fixing doorknobs


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Arlo Creede on Thu Jun 14, 2018 12:20 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 178
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