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Qit'ria heard the compliment her mother gave, a first, or at least a first she could recall. She was certainly wondering if she'd misremembered her childhood, forgotten certain things. Her mother was still cold, but she wasn't the monster Qit'ria seemed to remember. To read and write. Qit had always considered such a skill to be useless to a huntress such as herself, something that fat and lazy city folk learned. But there was sense in what her mother said. Reading and writing was no different than following animal tracks and listening to their calls. Though she'd never considered people to be prey. Not before now.

And if she learned, she could teach Caza.

These were all good reasons. And she knew her brother knew how to read and write. And she would get him to teach her. She'd hate every moment of it, she was sure, but she'd do it. And do it well. For Yeye and for Caza. Her mother continued to talk, and Qit'ria was eager to learn how to combat these bastard mages. She was already firmly of the mindset that any Aberrant was a guilt one.

Then everything happened really fast.

A man came a knocking, and then barged straight in. The moment he said that Yeye was taken, Qit was moving for the door, hand reaching for her spears in the corner, when she saw Caza in her brother's arms. And was instantly reminded of something Faith had told her, many trials before, when she'd gone to the woman to confirm her pregnancy. She'd not gone into the blaze to save Aeon because she was with child. Because it would put the children in harm's way. Qit stopped, turning to look at her mother, when the man spoke those words.

"Tell Lat'ora, Mantis knows."

Mantis, what was Mantis? Who was Mantis? But Qit'ria saw the color rush from her mother's face. Was it fear? Her mother wasn't afraid of anything. But what her mother said next confused Qit'ria. This was her mission? What did she mean by that..? Then the look that her mother gave Qit'ria answered everything. Her mother hadn't changed, and Qit'ria hadn't misremembered anything. Her mother was a monster after all. And she'd organized this. Somehow, she had wanted to take Yeye, but someone else had done it first. Why? For what purpose?

Qit was slow to react, and suddenly her mother was gone with a click of the heels. And Caz'aria began to cry. Qit'ria's world was in slow motion as she tried to fathom what just happened. Her mother was... trying to capture her father. Did that mean... was she being nice to Qit'ria to lure her in as well? Why? There was nothing to gain from them. They couldn't be more different. He was an old and tired healer, she was a huntress long since gone and only recently returned. Outside of being Sev'ryn they had no similarities.

Then it hit her.

They were mages.

Could that be it? Was he taken because he was a mage? Was her mother trying to lure her in to capture her as well? Why? Why would anyone want to capture a mage? For what purpose? Her mother was always a huntress with a purpose. Survival, tools, food. What did hunting mages serve? It made no sense, and yet was the only thing that made sense. Through the fog she heard words, and her brother was there, offering up Caza. Qit'ria reached out and held her baby, cooing and comforting her.

She couldn't act now. Or rather, couldn't react. Her mother might be a monster, but she had been right about one thing. To act in ignorance was to put her life, and thus, Caza's life at risk. She had to be smarter. Careful. She went through what she knew. She knew her father was taken by four men. She knew her mother was involved. She knew the word "Mantis" was uttered. And she knew they could disappear. Like that woman she met in the cave on Scalvoris. Were they mages too? But a kind she didn't know.

There was only one clue that might suggest where her father was taken to. That word. She didn't know it, but someone would. Someone would have to. She looked at her brother with a calm coming over her. He looked panicked and confused. "Do you know what Mantis is?"

He shook his head.

"Okay. You're going to help me write a letter. Then you're going to start teaching me how to read and write, and to speak Common better. I need this to find Yeye. We will then both ask about town to see if anyone knows what this Mantis thing is. Get your paper. We have to get to work."

She walked over to her belongings and picked up an empty box with her free hand and set it on the table. Her brother moved slowly, still not fathoming the situation, but he found some paper and some ink. "What do you want it to say, and to who?"

"Faith.

My father has been taken. The men said the word Mantis. Do you know what this is? I need to know, to find him. Quickly, please.

Qit'ria"


He wrote it down, and handed her the letter, "Where are you sending it?"

"Rharne."

"That will take too long."

"No, it won't."

Qit'ria stuck the letter inside her echo box and closed it.

"Now we go to ask anyone what this means. You ask your friends, I will seek out the elders. Return here at sunfall. Lessons start then."

Qit tightened her cloak around her naked form, adjusted her hold on Caza, grabbed her spears, and went outside. The man who'd mentioned Yeye's kidnapping was her first person to question. It was simple, "Do you know what the Mantis is?" She started with him, and made her way to the city center. She asked every person she saw on the way, working her way to the Desnind Elders. They knew everything. She was sure they'd know this.

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Sydney Stanton ~"When Worlds Collide"


In the aftermath of events, especially significant ones, there is an air - an atmosphere - which settles on the house where it happened. It was as though someone had died, the same sort of experience and the parallels didn't end there. Other people, those outside the immediately bereaved of Qit and her brother, they treated them with gentle calmness, yet they kept a distance just in case the Reaper turned his eyes on them.

No one knew what Mantis was and the letter sat in the Echo Box until the next trial when an answer came. Not an answer which gave any closure, of course, nor one destined to reassure the troubled souls. Caza seemed to sense the unease and she was restless and fitful, not keen to settle and cantankerous, difficult to persuade to feed. She clung to Qit'ria too, arguing loudly with anyone who tried to hold her.

People in Desnind didn't know Mantis. They didn't know much of a lot of things outside the confines of their woods and forests, but they knew that this family had been cursed. They didn't say it to Qit'ria or her brother, of course, but they said it. What had happened, all those arcs ago, they had been a curse - a blight - on the family. It had split them in twain and each one of them had shattered when the girls had died. Everyone knew it, no one said it.

And in that, there was an underlying feeling. The curse had returned. It had returned with Qit'ria and she had brought it back to Desnind. Her and her bastard child who was obviously half monster.

Slowly. Subtly. Backs turned to her. Help was not forthcoming. Her brother got distant sympathy. Qit? She got cool, polite refusal over the next few days. But then, when had she ever got anything else, here?
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Qit'ria and Caza returned back to her father's hut, hands shaking with angry, holding the little girl close to her chest. Desnind had been a mistake. All of it had been a mistake. Clearly terrible things followed her, and this home was no home without her father here. This city did not want her, so she didn't want it either. The people were of no help. They didn't offer support, nor answers. She'd never seen so many backs turned in her life. To the Beneath with them. Desninders could keep on living their life in fear, hiding from the outside world. It didn't matter to her anymore. Desnind was dead to her now.

Her brother was there when she returned. With a shake of the head, she knew they had nothing. It was all on Faith now. She had no leads other than that letter she'd sent. She set Caza down in her basket and immediately began packing. "I'm not staying here tonight. I'm taking my things. I'll stay in the forest tonight. I can't be here. Get rid of this house. Yeye will never return here. When I find him, he's never coming home, not with her hunting him. If Faith knows the Mantis, I leave tomorrow on one of the Flutterbuses. If not, I'll fly myself to somewhere else until I can discover them. I will save him."

It didn't take her long to pack up, she was always ready to move, part of her life at this point. Her pack was heavy but she left the unnecessary things behind. Things could be replaced. She picked up Caza's basket, the little girl restless. Qit'ria picked her up, cooing at her, holding her close into her neck to calm her, hooking the basket on her pack. She looked over at her brother. "Destroy this house. Get rid of it. Give away everything. Leave nothing. Anything left is just another way for mother to find Yeye after I get him back, just another thing to make Yeye want to return home. I will send word to you when I have him. But you should leave too. You might not be a mage, but with her out there, you're not safe."

She walked out of the hut and down the ramp, heading for the forest, and she turned one last time. She looked at her childhood home. With her father gone, there were no pleasant memories anymore. Aside from the one she held in her arms now. Her brother stood in the doorway, still a bit shell shocked. But she knew he'd do what she'd said. The men in her family always listened to the women. It was simply how things worked. And with a swift turn away, the part of Qit'ria that cared for Desnind no longer existed. She began walking for the shore, intending on making camp near there.

And Caza finally calmed a bit, looking up with her big, crimson eyes, smiling. And Qit'ria smiled back, "We'll get Yeye back. And slaughter anyone who gets in our way. Because we're the mightiest huntresses on Idalos."




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Re: When Worlds Collide

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I had such a blast with this thread! Thank you so much for asking me to mod it for you - I always think it's a real privilege when a player allows you to mess with their family and you have been such a good sport. I look forward to seeing what Qit does with the information here. Hope this review is ok - and if you think I've missed anything, just let me know!

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The most dangerous thing. Knowledge.

Knowledge

Caregiving: Babies like to tug and play
Caregiving: How not to be a mother
Caregiving: Soothing a distressed child
Caregiving: Babies pick up on emotions
Detection: Noting a lack of scent
Detection: Spotting minute differences in facial expression
Detection: Noting an absence
Discipline: Protective instincts over ride almost everything. Use them.
Discipline: Breath control to alleviate fear
Discipline: Doing what needs to be done
Discipline: Don't lose your temper at a verbal assault
Discipline: Obeying your father
Endurance: A slap to the face from a much stronger opponent
Endurance: Ignoring a throbbing head
Interrogation: Fire off questions
Investigation: A process of elimination
Investigation: Multiple questions
Investigation: Consider historical facts
Investigation: Taking in a lot of information can change your perspective
Investigation: People tell you more when they don't think you're cursed.
Leadership: Giving orders and expecting them to be followed
Leadership: Knowing who to delegate tasks to
Psychology: Recognise your own flaws
Psychology: Analogy is a powerful thing
Research: Can be a useful tool
Research: Facts are hard to remember
Tactics: Be able to live in your enemy's life
Tactics: If you can't be faster, be stronger
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Attacking while defending a babe
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Body positioning is vital for balance and defence
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Dealing with overbalancing
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