[Scalvoris Mountains] Distance

[Aegis]

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Just can't seem to get rid of pesky ol' Arlo. One day he'll know what's good for him... This was a lovely, emotional thread. I particularly enjoy Vega's justification for everything. At least she'll get some more sleep now. Her and Arlo both are going to need it. Also, I greatly enjoy the particular parallel of Vega seeking solitude in the mountains, just as Xiur himself does. And in doing so, it seems, hope was never truly lost. Well done the both of you.

Vega

Pre Review Checklist

Requirement	✓ or X	Comment
Approved Character	✓	--
Updated Thread List for Previous Season	✓	--
Updated Skill Point Ledger (Raw, Adjusted, Thread Earned)	✓✓✓	--
Updated Purse (Seasonal Expense, Wage, Thread deductions)	✓✓✓	--
Updated Renown Ledger & Table for threads	✓✓	--

Review

Requirement	Fulfillment	Comment+
Solo or Collab	Collab	+8 Skill Knowledges
How many posts?	5	+2 Skill Knowledges
How many requested?	10	--
Are all posts greater than 250 words?	✓	1044 1037 1235 1009 907
Is the thread greater than 1500 words?	✓	5232
Knowledges appropriate?	✓	--
Loot appropriate?	N/A	--
Renown appropriate?	N/A
Injuries appropriate?	N/A	--

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Loot

Reward	Amount	Comment
Skill Points	+15	--
Magic Points available?	N/A	--
Renown	N/A	--
Injuries	N/A	--
Favored Nalos Ability	Night Torch	The Blessed can touch any item and cause it to glow with a bright, starry light. This light can be directed away from the holder, so as not to dazzle night vision. If no other Nalos abilities are used, this can be maintained as long as the item is held by the Blessed.

Knowledges
Skill Knowledge:

1. Discipline: Managing emotions when exhausted is difficult.
2. Discipline: Keeping distance from a loved one to protect them
3. Discipline: Keeping hope even when it's desperate
4. Endurance: Staying awake through exhaustion
5. Endurance: Fighting exhaustion is more difficult when warm and comfortable
6. Meditation: Focusing on a point
7. Meditation: Being confident that your surroundings are safe aids focus
8. Meditation: Hopefulness is helpful
9. Psychology: Making an emotional plea when being a stubborn and obnoxious person hasn't worked
10. Storytelling: The tale of Vega and the Fire Demon

Non-Skill Knowledge:

Arlo

Pre Review Checklist

Requirement	✓ or X	Comment
Approved Character	✓	--
Updated Thread List for Previous Season	✓	--
Updated Skill Point Ledger (Raw, Adjusted, Thread Earned)	✓✓✓	--
Updated Purse (Seasonal Expense, Wage, Thread deductions)	✓✓✓	--
Updated Fame Ledger & Table for threads	✓✓	--

Review

Requirement	Fulfillment	Comment+
Solo or Collab	Collab	+8 Skill Knowledges
How many posts?	5	+2 Skill Knowledges
How many requested?	9	1 skill knowledge not requested
Are all posts greater than 250 words?	✓	721 529 490 501 478
Is the thread greater than 1500 words?	✓	2719
Knowledges appropriate?	✓	--
Loot appropriate?	N/A	--
Renown appropriate?	✓	Helping, refusing to leave.
Injuries appropriate?	N/A	--

Below is your well deserved loot. If you have any questions, please PM me. Also please add the provided stamp to your review request found here and please update your CS with all of this information.

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Loot

Reward	Amount	Comment
Skill Points	+15	--
Magic Points available?	N/A	--
Renown	N/A	Hmm being so isolated I'm not sure how I'd see Renown being increased at this point.
Injuries	N/A	--

Knowledges
Skill Knowledge:

1. Discipline: Not jumping to conclusions
2. Discipline: Simply saying it how it is, time and again.
3. Persuasion: Having an absolute bottom line and not moving from it
4. Persuasion: Logical, factual statements about your behaviour.
5. Persuasion: Encouragement works
6. Storytelling: Putting together two stories to make a larger one
7. Storytelling: Trying to persuade via a story
8. Mark Ability: Sojourn: Safe Camp: Requires blood and concentration
9. Mark Ability: Sojourn: Safe Camp: A safe, warm space

Non-Skill Knowledge: