The Two Naughty Granitees

[Banshee]

Ugh, they're so sweet, I think I might be sick! By which I mean, I love them very much and can I have them? Might they come to Viden after all? *Covets*

Arlo

Overview

XP: 15

Renown: No.

Consequences

Injuries/Overstepping: No.

Loot:

• +1 North Pointing Gem
• +1 Glowing Staff
• +5 Books of Travelers' Tales
• +1 copy of "Geoupagus & The Two Naughty Granitees"
• +1 Quill of Engraving
• +1 Duplicity Suit
• +1 Cloak of Hiding
• RIng of Earth: Tier reward for Renown Tier 1.

Expenses: Nope!

Knowledge

• Skill:
  • Detection: Recognising handwriting
  • Navigation: Working out alternative routes.
  • Navigation: Different kinds of charts
  • Navigation: Ratio of different kinds of charts
  • Navigation: Key for small details.
  • Storytelling: Changing a story can make a new tale entirely
• Non-Skill:
  • N/A

Comments

I'd encountered Vega before but never Arlo so I didn't really know what to expect from him. He has more seriousness to him that I really think balances Vega and I enjoy your writing style. Simple, not overly flowery but still conveying much. Just be mindful of slipping code tags and grammar/spelling errors and such.

Vega

Overview

XP: 15

Renown: +5 for good deeds

Consequences

Injuries/Overstepping: No.

Loot:

• +1 Duplicity Dress
• +1 Cloak of Hiding

Expenses: All taken care of already.

Knowledge

• Skill:
  • Detection: Spotting when Arlo looks just too innocent
  • Navigation: Working out alternative routes.
  • Navigation: Different kinds of charts
  • Navigation: Ratio of different kinds of charts
  • Navigation: Key for small details.
• Non-Skill:
  • N/A

Comments

Vega's such a sweet lil thing, I really enjoy her. Every time I encounter her, I enjoy what she comes out with, I really do. Given that all her gifts for Arlo required a lot of interaction with NPCs, I've assumed that she'll have some renown because of it. No good deed goes unnoticed! On a side note, I think "From my freckles to my frowns" is my new favourite phrase. Although "Audrae's skimpy knickers" is up there too.

If you think that I missed anything or you have any queries about your grade then don't hesitate to PM me!