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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Following the Lights
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Joseph's odd Harvester gives him a crash course in Flaying.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Aberration: Harvesters must be fed.
Aberration: Ether is the currency of magic
Aberration: Stealing ether
Aberration: Drain
Aberration: The Harvester and mage are a team
Aberration: Listening to voices from beyond

Loot: N/a
Injuries/Overstepping: Cat scratches on Joseph's arm.
Renown: I dunno, are a bunch of dead flayed animals on a beach news?
Collaboration: No

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Magic EXP: (Yes) Aberration
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Novice
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Nah
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Orientation
City/Area: Rynmere, Andaris, The Barracks
Notes/Warnings: Foul language
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Ranged (Shortbows): How a noble shoots
Ranged (Shortbows): How a soldier shoots
Ranged (Shortbows): How an outlaw shoots
Ranged (Shortbows): Can't aim angry
Ranged (Shortbows): Extended shooting leads to injury
Discipline: A soldier doesn't smile

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Ray: Commanding officer of the Barracks
Ray: An asshole
Trixie: Ranged weapons expert
Trixie: Hidden temper
Trixie: Likes me, but not like that
The Barracks: Shooting range
The Barracks: Iron Hand base
The Barracks: Lowtown

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Exhaustion, Eye Strain, Finger Blisters
Renown: +5 (being chewed out by a commanding officer in front of new Airman)
+5 (Enlisting in the Skyriders as a Kane)
Collaboration: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: The Strangest Party in Idalos
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Devin
Knowledge: 7 Posts = 12 Knowledge
Deception: Luring someone to your shrine with the promise of a party
Deception: Promising someone unimaginable riches if they help you
Endurance: Washing a door
Etiquette: Saying "please" helps
Leadership: Telling someone what you want them to do
Linguistics: Sometimes something can be both a name and an adjective
Linguistics: Common Sign: Sign language is useful for conversing with deaf people
Linguistics: Common Sign: Signing your name
Negotiation: If you help me, I'll help you
Persuasion: If things don't go your way, appeal to someone's pity
Rhetoric: Holding a speech about your favourite Immortal
Tarouz Ability: Wings of Steel: Great for showing off

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Collaboration: Yes

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:

Mute
Knowledge: 7 Posts = 12 Knowledges
Deception: Deflecting with Half-Answers
Etiquette: Responding to a Greeting
Intelligence: Priests are Useful to Learn About Immortals
Interrogation: Asking Questions Pertaining to Another's Passion
Intimidation: Using Silence to Put Off-Guard
Leadership: Knowing how to Follow Instructions
Linguistics: Common Sign: Signing Name
Linguistics: Common Sign: Negotiating Favors
Navigation: Following Posted Directions
Negotiation: If you help me, I'll help you
Psychology: Man's Need for Faith in Something
Rhetoric: Saying No

Non-skill Knowledge:
Delroth: Immortal of Vanity, Birds, Wind, and Greed
Devin: Marked by Delroth
Devin: Priest of Delroth
Location: Shrine to Delroth in Scalvoris Town

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Collaboration: Yes

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Woe eats Crow
City/Area: Fields west of Yaralon.
Notes/Warnings: Meh, beast attacks Woe. Not really.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Endurance: Surviving a beast attack.
Strength: Fending off the animal's razor teeth.
Unarmed Combat: Chokehold.
Fieldcraft: Locating areas that were spoken of.
Detection: Telltale signs of a predator.
Endurance: Reopening an old wound.

Loot: 5 gn, a cattle-driver hat, a large, black leather coat.
Injuries/Overstepping: Scratches on his face will take time to heal, will scar. The wounds in his shoulder will need treatment.
Renown: slight for inadvertantly helping a Yari hunter catch his quarry.
Collaboration: No

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Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Poisoning the Water
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Aberration: Using emotion and the bond to help flaying
Aberration: Pain makes it easier to not think about flaying
Aberration: The Harvester's role as tutor
Endurance: Powering on through pain
Endurance: Knowing one's limits
Endurance: Using cool water to deal with muscle cramps after pushing oneself.


Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: Joseph will regret walking so much. He'll be restricted to only a few breaks of walking for the next few days.
Renown:
Collaboration:

Domain Magic Only - Yas queen
Magic EXP: (Yes) Aberration
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Novice
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Not yet.
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Shielding Memory 1
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
abrogation -
breaking a fall with a barrier
maintaining focus on a field with medatative counting
maintaining focus on a field while bracing against magical attacks
higher level replicated shields are strong even when thin
the feel of the abrogation spark

meditation-
finding a steady rhythm in one's own footfalls

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Memory, but bruising, a headache that lasts for seven trials, and a slight concussion
Renown: None
Collaboration: No

Domain Magic Only -
Magic EXP: Abrogation
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Novice
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Yes
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Chrien's Wrath
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Dream thread.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Collaboration: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: It's Famously here
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Nauta is not around anymore, and Dru has left for a bit, so I wrapped this one up and put it up for review.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Walking on a tightrope
Acrobatics: Catching a hat with your foot
Acrobatics: dodging a barrage of snowballs
Acrobatics: landing on a cluttered table
Acting: playing judge of a competition
Acting: potted plant
Acting: making a show out of trying to find the right angle
Deception: the fine print (spoken form)
Deception: promising things you have no control over
Deception: claiming your abilities are mere 'parlor tricks'


Loot: Money!
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Renown: probably
Collaboration: Yes
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