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Kasoria
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Posts: 1541
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2016 3:34 am
Race: Lion Person
Renown: 935
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Re: 1. Ars Magna Lucis et Umbrae

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Name: Laures

Points awarded: 15

Knowledge:
Psychology: x3
Cosmetology: x3
Detection: x2
Intelligence: "Lord Charon," the alias
Intelligence: Lord Charon, blessed by the Immortal of Intelligence

Skill Review: All Skills used appropriate to level

Name: Llyr

Points awarded: 15

Knowledge:
Seduction x4
Logistics x2
Psychology x2
Deception x2

Loot: +1 gold-silk good quality outfit (anchored).

Skill Review: All Skills used appropriate to level

Notes:
This was... unusual. But in a good way! Very much removed from the corporeal reality of Etzos, and I don't just mean the setting. This meandered between psychology and philosophy and magic all at once. Exploring character motivations and reservations while still crafting quite the... well, trippy background for the discussion, haha. No critique for either of you; both spelling and grammar was spot on, times two. Oh, Llyr. Always collecting students, friends... assets.

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word count: 159

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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