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Vega, Woe

25th of Saun 721

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Re: [Hopetoun] Six Hands Help Better Than Two... Maybe

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25th Saun, 721
"Depersonalises the plight of the lower classes?" Vega looked at him and grinned. "I think that's the problem righ' there with all this nonsense you lot talk about. Lower class is as stupid a notion as upper class, or middle class. It's like the military all talkin' about superior officers. I'm not lower than anyone, an' no one's superior to me. I'm also not higher than anyone, an' no one's inferior. I don't know what it is with folks need to put themselves into a hierarchy, but it's stupid," she said, firmly. "Implied notions of a person bein' better or worse than another, on account of how much money they've got, or because they happened to be born into a certain family or not?" She shook her head. "It's an illusion, all of it. An' a temporary one at that. All it takes is one eruption, or docks collapse, an' you'll see how much difference there is between one of us an' another. That's what I think anyhow. "

They started looking at flowers and such, and she was keeping an eye on things while chatting to him when Woe gestured to a flower he had found. "What's that?" He explained and Vega nodded. "A corpseflower? I've heard of them. They're not uncommon, but they reckon that, if it grows on a grave, yeah, you can dry the leaves an' then when you eat them you flop into a trance an' stay there for half a day or so. When you wake up," she shrugged slightly. "Well, apparently, people report that they've seen ghosts of those who've not passed over. But I dunno how accurate that is, or whether they give specific hallucinations." Vega had no wish to speak to anyone who had died and those who had - namely her mother -she very much hoped that she had passed over and gone to whatever was next.

Reaching out to touch the plant, Vega considered it. "Only way to know for sure, I guess, is to give it a try." Glancing at him, though, she was sure to make the point. "But like I said. Apparently, it knocks you cold for a good ten to twelve breaks, so be prepared." The heat was coming close to unbearable and she looked at him. "I'm sorry, I'm goin' to have to go an' lie down. Pregnancy is makin' me overheat, you know, an' I run hot to begin with because of Faldrun's curse." Heaving herself up, she looked at him with a smile. "I'm sorry. I want to stay an' chat, but I need to rest." She didn't want to be rude, that was the last thing she wanted, but she had listened to her body all the way through this pregnancy and, right now, it was telling her to rest.
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Re: [Hopetoun] Six Hands Help Better Than Two... Maybe

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Woe:

Knowledge:
Gardening: A Lovalus oasis can grow domestic as well as wild breeds of flowers and plants.
Gardening: Spirits of Scaltoth are drawn to interact with wild gardens.
Gardening: Categorizing flowers by color.
Gardening: Asking plants permission before picking them is just good practice.
Gardening: Plants think nothing of damage done to them, but only appear to want to be consumed and used, in order to propogate their kind.
Gardening: Corpseflower: A yellow and red flower that if planted by a gravesite it will communicate their thoughts and wishes if their ghost remains in the world.
Psychology: x 2

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Comments: It’s a pity that Kori‘än’s visit to Faldrass ended after one post. I would have loved to find out what his experience in Hopetoun would be like. I commend you, Woe and Vega, on continuing and finishing the thread without him. You did a good job at it in my opinion!

I thought that Woe’s interaction with his children – and Toutouye’s aversion to civilization – was described very well. In my opinion, the boy is getting better at dealing with it though!

I also like how both boys have their own unique personalities!

And what more, Sod is a great addition to Woe’s threads. I loved the scene where he crawled down from Woe’s arm in order to have a word with Vega’s garden, for example!

I appreciate the fact that Vega’s curse isn’t just there, but that it regularly affects her threads. Saun with Faldrun’s curse – while you are pregnant – sounds really unpleasant, and you described that well in my opinion. It’s also good to know that Joy is adjusting to Faldrass.

After the Forging, she deserves a normal life!

I love how Vega doesn’t want to exclude anyone and uses signs on top of spoken language. She gives me the impression of being very good with children!

I really enjoyed Woe’s and Vega’s conversation that encompassed a number of different topics.

Vega’s reaction to Woe’s willingness to sacrifice Elisabeth and her statement that she would have offered herself anyhow was especially interesting. Vega always has opinions, and you conveyed that well in your posts!

Woe, you requested 8 numbered Gardening knowledges. While this thread is worth some Gardening knowledges in my opinion, I wasn’t sure where exactly you acquired 8 of them. Could you give me named Gardening knowledges instead, please?

With that being said, enjoy your rewards, and let me know if you have any questions, please!
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