Re: The Imperial March
Posted: Sat May 07, 2022 9:01 pm
Review Rewards
Points Awarded: 15
Lorogh
Magic Applicable: Nurp
Renown: +5 for participating in a public event
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Knowledges:
✓ - Appropriate to level!
Wrap-up: Lorogh is such a sweet little fellow! I was impressed with your descriptions of the march and the characterizations - there was such much to see and enjoy and you portrayed that very well. I would say you teetered the edge of skill overplay - I would suggest to put some skill points in psychology just to be safe! That said, you've done a wonderful job breathing life into this jolly cadouri!
Renown: +5 for participating in a public event
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Knowledges:
- Socialization x2
- Endurance x2
- Etiquette x2
- Detection x4
✓ - Appropriate to level!
Wrap-up: Lorogh is such a sweet little fellow! I was impressed with your descriptions of the march and the characterizations - there was such much to see and enjoy and you portrayed that very well. I would say you teetered the edge of skill overplay - I would suggest to put some skill points in psychology just to be safe! That said, you've done a wonderful job breathing life into this jolly cadouri!
Russel
Magic Applicable: Nurp
Renown: +5 for participating in a public event
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Knowledges:
✓ - Appropriate to level!
Wrap-up: Wow, you guys did amazing. Russel is going through a lot, goodness. As I was reading I couldn't help flinching; the way you described the pain and the stems in his skin felt real! I'm so glad that someone is playing a curse (especially so well) but I'm a bit sad it's Russel going through it, haha. I appreciated the panic attacks realism too, I enjoyed how it brought Russel to life amongst the other faceless soldiers. Hopefully I get to see more from him!
Renown: +5 for participating in a public event
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Knowledges:
- Endurance x3
- Socialization x2
- Intelligence x5
✓ - Appropriate to level!
Wrap-up: Wow, you guys did amazing. Russel is going through a lot, goodness. As I was reading I couldn't help flinching; the way you described the pain and the stems in his skin felt real! I'm so glad that someone is playing a curse (especially so well) but I'm a bit sad it's Russel going through it, haha. I appreciated the panic attacks realism too, I enjoyed how it brought Russel to life amongst the other faceless soldiers. Hopefully I get to see more from him!