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Lei'Lira

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Guilt remained a heavy burden to shift and the man rested his hands on his knees as he crouched beside the bed. He let out a slow sigh before nodding, sympathetic, “if she asks you directly, then you must do what you think is correct. My advice is that such a truth will only cause you pain; and those you love. It is a secret better kept.”
The fragile bird broken down in desperate sobs and his heart was pulled in different directions. He was relieved he she gave the fearful, reluctant permission to touch her. He moved carefully, as though approaching a frightened horse and from the side. Sliding onto the bed beside her, the man wrapped a single arm around the thin shoulders. He held her then, fingers gently squeezing and trying to offer comfort and support. Her nearer shoulder pressed against his chest, she could likely feel the rapid beating of his heart as he lifted his head, staring blank at the wall.
The Baron considered his words with care. How to comfort the girl who had been through so much? He did not want to fill her head with false promises but surely there had to be something he could say? Something to ease the sting of her pain and stop the tears. Immortals, he wondered if, in that moment, there was anything he wouldn’t do to stop the tears. Tears of his making. Fury rose up again in his throat, like a bile that wouldn’t quit. He swallowed the sensation, eager not to display it and frighten Lei’Lira. He was furious with himself, and the child’s grandmother for concocting such a poorly executed scheme.
“If there is a child…then we will deal with that trial by trial,” he kept his voice low. How likely was it though, that she had conceived. It was a possibility yes, but not a certainty. He gave a gentle squeeze of his arm once more, “do not cry for what you do not know and cannot predict. Daughter of my Brother, you have enough woes on your table without searching for more.” He lent forward keeping the motion slow as he pressed a kiss to her hair and withdraw again. “There is a woman I can bring to you. She can see if you are with child, but she would need to examine you.”
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She shuddered violently under her uncle's touch. Terror stopped her breath as she sat frozen in place. Her heart beat painfully in her chest, and she bit back a ragged sob of sheer terror. Lei'lira tried to tell herself that it was only her uncle. She tried to tell herself that she was safe. She even believed it...in her head. Mostly.

But knowing that didn't help. Knowing that the touch was coming didn't help either, not even after giving permission for it. Experience had taught her that a man's touch meant only one thing; pain, and humiliation. She had internalized that concept to the point where it had become akin to instinct, and the reaction was the same. Many animals feared fire because their instincts told them it was dangerous. It wasn't something that could be reasoned with, or explained away. And Lei'lira feared a man's touch in much the same way as an animal feared fire. "Knowing" that it wouldn't hurt meant nothing to the terror that left her feeling sick, and light headed with its intensity, and threatened to send her fleeing into the depths of her mind to escape.

"I'm sorry..." she whispered brokenly, still trembling under the man's touch.

Her uncle told her that he knew someone who would know if she was with child or not. Lei'lira considered the offer. Could she bear to be examined? As long as it was a woman, she thought she could. And if it were possible to know for certain if she was pregnant, she needed to know. Knowing for certain one way or the other would be better than months of not knowing...wouldn't it? If nothing else, it would give her time to prepare. A child would need things she could spend the next seasons making or gathering if there was to be one, rather than having to rush and get them all at once after the fact. She might even be able to prepare herself mentally to accept the idea...maybe. And it would be an incredible relief to know for certain that she wasn't pregnant if that were the case.

"That...that would help. Knowing would help." she said at last.

"Thank you, Uncle Victor. If it's possible to know now...it would be better than wondering for months. And if I knew...if there is a child...maybe I could stay on my farm until after the child was born. Pretend that...that I found it somewhere, or that it was the child of a friend, and I adopted it after her death. Or something. Lazuli might help me with that..."

It was a wild plan, at best. Lei'lira didn't know if it had any real hope of working. But it was all she could think of at the moment.
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The obvious discomfort of his embrace caused him to soon drop his arm and move away. He returned to what he hoped Lei’Lira would consider a ‘safe’ distance and back to the table. He rested his hands in site on his legs as he lent back. His own expression blank as he considered the terrible fear in the girl.
“I will make enquiries,” he promised, “it may be a few Trials before she is available. She’s not usually one to remain within the compound, she prefers the wilderness really.” He considered his thoughts with care. Under different circumstances, he wondered if the wise woman was someone Lei’lira could have grown to emulate. She was a gentle soul but pragmatic and wouldn’t stand for any nonsense.
“Tomorrow we will take our walk,” he suggested with the hope of bringing some light back into the darkness of her thoughts. “You can see your horse and some of the sunshine over the landscape. Once I have word from Erelda, I will let you know.”
He touched his fingers to his mouth then. If there was a child then it was unlikely the woman’s naïve dreams would surface. She would need to wed. Why frighten her now though, why terrify the girl with thoughts of what might be or might never come to pass. “The future will come as it does. We will take our decisions when they arise before use Lei’Lira. It is all we can do.”
He gathered up any empty bowls and plates, stacking them together and tucking them against his arm, “get some rest brother’s daughter. I will return tomorrow at noon.”
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Lei'lira felt more than a little relieved when her uncle moved away from her. She felt as though she had failed. She understood that she needed to learn how to hide her reaction to a simple touch if she were ever to be able to hide what had been done to her. She knew that, and yet she had been utterly unable to do so. Not even knowing that Victor was her uncle, and that he meant her no harm had helped. Lei'lira hoped that time would bring distance to the memories of her captivity, and that in turn might help her be more able to endure the touch of a man. But time wasn't a luxury that she had. Sooner, rather than later, she would have to go to her grandmother's house and try to see her twin again.

Victor told her that it might be a few trials before his healer would be able to see her. Lei'lira nodded, and thanked him again. They made plans to take a walk the next trial so that she could make sure that Star had recovered from her ordeal. Then he took his leave.

When Lei'lira was certain that he would not return any time soon, she locked the door behind him. Then, overcome by the desperate need for a bath, she filled the tub with water. It didn't matter that the water wasn't heated. She couldn't wait. Lei'lira stripped quickly, and stepped into the tub. Then, she proceeded to scrub herself raw, focusing particularly on her shoulder where her uncle had wrapped his arm around her. It didn't seem to help. She felt impossibly dirty, and no matter how hard she scrubbed, or how many baths she took, it was never enough for her to feel clean again. Tears of anger, and despair trickled down her cheeks as she promised herself that she would overcome her fear of touch...or at least make it look as though she had...no matter what it took.
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Name: Lei'lira

Knowledge:
Self: Disgraced
Fear: A man’s touch
Lazuli: Tortured by the King’s men
Lazuli: Expected to guide the Warrick family to greatness
Lazuli: News of your assault could destabilize her power
Lazuli: You have a responsibility to protect her
Victor Warrick: Will keep news of your assault a secret and requires you to do the same
Erelda: Midwife
Deception: The best lies are those that do not stray far from the truth
Deception: The danger is in the details
Deception: If you cannot lie, do not let your actions give you away
Politics: A noble’s actions and experiences can impact their entire family
Politics: A noble’s reputation is their most important tool
Tactics: A smaller space means less possibility of threats
Endurance: Painful memories lessen over time, but they must first be endured
Animal Husbandry: The best caretaker is an animal’s owner
Philosophy: Men only inflict pain and humiliation

Loot: N/A
Injuries: Lei’lira is suffering from Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder as a result of her ordeal.
Fame: +1 good deed for showing courage in the face of trauma, +2 for supporting a popular cause (Lazuli Warrick)
Devotion: N/A

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
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Comments: Oh my goodness, Lei'lira. This thread was beautiful and so very heartbreaking. You did such a wonderful job of illustrating your character's pain and the lasting effects of her horrific assault. I really enjoyed the interaction between you and Griffin, and the way in which Lei'lira is being slowly pushed towards a future that may not be to her liking. Really lovely. I look forward to reading your next thread, and I hope that Lei'lira has some happiness in her future. She's been through too much. </3

One small note - don't forget to update your CS with your Zi'da expenses. :)

If you feel I've missed anything or if you have questions about your review, please don't hesitate to send me a quick PM. Thanks!
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