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Posted: Thu Apr 06, 2017 5:25 am
by Rafael Warrick
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5th Vhalar - 716

There was little time to feel pride at the compliments directed at him. No sooner than the last rope had been undone did the whisp-like shadow move towards them. Rafael didn’t hesitate for a moment and seized Godric's outstretched hand as he was being hoisted aboard in a clumsy pile. There was no time to recover and dust off, no time to look back at what fate would befall Malcolm. Godric barked one command after the other at him and he darted about the ship in a frenzy. Rope burned his skin as the line rushed up while the sail rolled down and unfolded itself. The wind billowed the cloth and Rafael only just managed to duck as the sail swung overhead from one side to the other with a loud creak. As he jumped back to his feet, he heard the sounds of a struggle followed by a low impact to the dock-side of the vessel. Without a moment's pause he rushed over to kick down any Shadow that dared try to clamber aboard. Instead his eyes found Malcolm, hanging on for dear life. Rafael dropped to his knees and leaned forward, seizing the Knight's arms with fierce determination. The man was heavier than he looked and his grip on the side of the boat appeared to be slipping, but Rafael refused to let him go. Pulling with all his might, he hoisted Malcolm aboard and let out a hard breath when he finally succeeded.

The ship slipped out of dock in almost complete silence, save for the quiet lapsing of the water around it. Yet, in a stroke of nightmarish misfortune, the wind had almost completely died down and they were distancing themselves from the many-faced monster at a snail's pace. Like Malcolm, he held his breath and prayed to all that was good in the world that the mishapen blob would not take notice of them.

A mighty force jerked him downward and his back smacked against the woodwork. Dark tendrils slithered around his limbs like snakes, pulling him downward and restraining him as a a shadow with a mouthless face loomed over him with a mirthless eyes.

Father...?

His heart jumped to his throat as he stared wide-eyed at the twisted face of Ned Warrick, contorted by pure and utter hatred for the disappointment that was his son. For a trill, all the muscles in Rafael's body grew limp as atared back at his father's wicked face and saw just how unwanted he was, how hated he was by all in his family, how Ned wished he'd never been born...

The thought ended there as a shadowy claw stabbed into his shoulder. It was only by virtue of a sharp reflex that the sharp appendage missed his heart and yet, no sound escaped him as the cold, black void buried itself into his flesh. Biting down with all his might he struggled in silence against the shadow as it prepared to strike again, a mouth appeared on the distorted face, grinning at him with malintent. This time, it would not miss.

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Posted: Tue May 02, 2017 10:41 pm
by Malcolm
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The ship was steered out of the dock by Godric, who crouched low, didn't see the small vessel in their path. Saved by a lull in the breeze, the two older men were distracted momentarily as they decided on a new path, while a shadow materialised before Rafael and put him on his back, digging into his shoulder with razor-like claws.
Perhaps struck dumb by terror or pulled under the creature's spell, Rafael had suffered in silence, and by the time Malcolm had noticed the intrusion, it was almost too late. The monster opened its mouth to take a piece out of the lad, just as Malcolm swung his sword through the creature’s head. The shadow dissipated, and Malcolm took Rafael by the scruff of his shirt and pulled him to his feet.
“Come on, little lord,” he said, “you're okay.”
But was he?
Avari got to her feet and took off her scarf to press and hold against the young man’s shoulder. “Sit,” she encouraged, “try and relax.
“We will sail up the coast,” Godric told them. “Stay out at sea until the trouble dies down.”
“Do we have any food or medical supplies?” Malcolm asked.
“I hope you all like rice,” Godric grumbled, accustomed to a sailor's diet of fish and white food.
Malcolm sat down on a crate beside Rafael as Avari worked to stitch his shoulder wound. He didn't know what the man had seen, but he knew the magic of the shadows, how they used a man’s fears against him. Malcolm didn't say anything, just sat in silence, there if Rafael needed an ear.

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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2017 11:41 am
by Pegasus
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Rafael

Overview

I really enjoyed this thread, it was great fun to read. The way you write Rafael is truly impressive in my opinion ~ he's possessed of a deep well of emotion and yet I can see the stubborn and determined set to his chin when he has to act. He's a great pc and I always love being able to read your threads. He certainly was brave here - and made lots of clear and tactical decisions. As always, beautiful detail and really nice writing all the way through. Great stuff! If you've got any questions, feel free to drop me a quick pm.

Points

XP: 15

Fame: +12 (good deed, mistmen, helping etc)

Loot

Injuries as detailed, dealt with!

Knowledge

Stealth: Hiding in an attic
Tactics: Keeping Your Blade Within Reach
Endurance: Surviving Multiple Cuts And Bruises
Tactics: Smashing A Window To Provide An Escape Route
Acrobatics: Dodging by leaping back
Acrobatics: Ducking dodge and rebound
Acrobatics: vaulting over an edge
Blades (Longsword): Catch an attack on the guard and counter
Tactics: It's better to retreat when outnumbered

Non-skill
Ne'haer: Route to the docks
Mistmen: Appear to be made of fog
Avari: Malcolm's Friend
Godric: Malcolm's Friend
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