Name: Luo
Knowledge:
Location: Ne’haer Marketplace
Ne’haer: Vhalar 716 Shadow Attack
Symbri: Dancer
Symbri: Acrobat
Symbri: Comparable to a vulture
Symbri: Chatterbox
Symbri: Has a tendency to exaggerate the truth
Symbri: Performs in public to lighten people’s moods and give them hope
Symbri: Full of energy
Symbri: Kind
Symbri: Gullible
Symbri: Optimist
Detection: How to identify basic emotions from body language
Etiquette: Honorifics are used in polite society
Acrobatics: A combination of balance and agility
Psychology: Everyone has an ulterior motive
Psychology: A morale boost can be helpful after hard times, depending on the person
Psychology: How to identify a gullible or naive personality
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: +1 good deed for assisting others during the shadow attacks
Devotion: N/A
Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
If you feel I've missed anything or if you have questions about your review, please don't hesitate to send me a quick PM. Thanks!
Knowledge:
Location: Ne’haer Marketplace
Ne’haer: Vhalar 716 Shadow Attack
Symbri: Dancer
Symbri: Acrobat
Symbri: Comparable to a vulture
Symbri: Chatterbox
Symbri: Has a tendency to exaggerate the truth
Symbri: Performs in public to lighten people’s moods and give them hope
Symbri: Full of energy
Symbri: Kind
Symbri: Gullible
Symbri: Optimist
Detection: How to identify basic emotions from body language
Etiquette: Honorifics are used in polite society
Acrobatics: A combination of balance and agility
Psychology: Everyone has an ulterior motive
Psychology: A morale boost can be helpful after hard times, depending on the person
Psychology: How to identify a gullible or naive personality
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: +1 good deed for assisting others during the shadow attacks
Devotion: N/A
Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
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Comments: Another lovely thread, Luo! I really liked your character's interaction with Symbri in this one and the contrast between their two personalities. Luo's calculating personality shone through, and it's clear that he makes a point of being aware of his surroundings and using them to his advantage. I also loved the hints you made of potential future plots with Symbri's character (using Symbri to help distract while Luo robs those around her? You dastardly fellow!). Fun stuff! I hope to see these two interact again in future threads. There's definitely a lot of potential here for awesome plots!If you feel I've missed anything or if you have questions about your review, please don't hesitate to send me a quick PM. Thanks!