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"Grip", she offered, and he considered the word. He had been thinking more along the lines of grab but she had no way of knowing that and he had no way of explaining. Eventually, thinking about it, he cautiously nodded his head. For his purposes, "grip" was nearly as good a word as "grab".

Then they set to practice, and for a long while the only sounds in the little room were of the fancy metal dagger meeting the shield's metal and wood. Attacks that first started out a bit uncertain became stronger, quicker, more finessed. Quio began having to grip the shield harder, holding it steady against the onslaught, and even though she had seemed momentarily terrified of him just a few bits before --which he hoped had to do with the idea of fighting more than anything else?-- Lei'lira now worked into a steady rhythm, step-slash step-slash.

"Feet more out, like shoulders," he grunted out once, not having much other criticism to give. When it came to simple dagger work, the young woman, with a little practice just like this, would soon become just about as good at wielding the little blade as Quio was himself.

When she was ready to let up, Quio switched the shield from his left arm to his right, grimacing slightly and working the kinks out of his shoulder and hand. "Good," he told her, giving a smile...

...which then completely froze, stunned, as she mentioned his name.

"Thank you for helping me, Quio. Do you want to practice, too?"

Quio. She had said Quio. His real name.

He hadn't been thinking. He had given her the wrong name.

The freeze lasted probably only a trill or two before Quio unstuck himself and tried to regain his previous smile and ease. "U-Um, yes, practice," he said, perhaps coming across as flustered when he handed her over the shield. His heartstone was beating, beating, beating but he tried to ignore it. It was a little mistake. It was a little mistake.

It was a mistake that --as a child-- he had made, among others... and whether it was the name's fault or not, his mother had ended up killed.

Just a little mistake, he lied to himself.

Just don't think about it. Just focus on the lesson.

The Yludih took a calming breath. He reminded himself he had a sword in his hand, right now. He was safe as he could be. He was armed. He was not a child. He was with Lei'lira, whom he hoped would not want to hurt him. She seemed nice. He was okay.

"Sorry," he muttered if the woman looked like she had noticed. He rubbed at his face as if tired. "Long day." Quio worked his smile to something that felt more natural. Then nodded that she should lift the shield and prepare herself.

Then he readied the sword in his hand and got to work.

Like Lei'lira before him, his first few swings were that of a complete amateur, a mixture of inexperience and perhaps a bit of hesitation as well. The hesitation was twofold; he didn't want to frighten or overpower the young woman, but he couldn't help but let his eyes flick to her face, once and then again, again. Measuring her reaction. She had seemed frightened of him before, hadn't she? Was that because she knew-- she had figured out what he was?

Stupid. It was stupid to think like that, she couldn't possibly have guessed, but still he couldn't help but wonder. And fear. And perhaps it showed. Perhaps to Lei'lira's eyes Quio was suddenly looking a bit more pale.

He gritted his teeth and tried to focus more intently on what he was doing.

Within a few bits the sword in his hand felt a lot more natural, and a few bits after that he was striking with apparent ease, slashing forward at the shield much as Lei'lira had done with the dagger. The shield, which had been nearly perfect before they had started on it, was now scarred and pitted with hundreds of marks.

A few bits later yet and he started to feel the strain of the exercise in his shoulder. And after that he quickly began to breathe a bit harder. He tried to practice controlling his breath and swung on the exhale. Swing, retreat. Repeat. Swing, retreat. Repeat.

Eventually he gasped out, "Stop," to let the woman know he was finished and then bent at the waist, breathing hard. Hefting a sword could be hard work, and following a day of hauling ropes and adjusting sails... well, he may be crystal but his body still had its boundaries.

Still, "More practice?" he asked after he had his breath back, straightening up, just in case Lei'lira wanted another go. Or if she wanted to try something else, perhaps like a quick spar. He thought he might be up to that.

OOC: Oh my god I totally didn't realize that I accidentally gave Quio's real name until like, waaaaay too late. Oh well, makes things interesting, right? ^_^
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When Quio asked her if she wanted to practice some more, she hesitated. Did she? Her arm wasn't sore any more, but it had that tired, rubbery feeling that let you know that you that you had put in a good day's work. She needed to get as much practice as she could, if she wanted to learn. But would pushing herself too hard do more damage than good? If she strained herself too much, she risked injury. How many times had she proved that by trying to do "just one more thing" on the farm? If she injured herself before going into battle, what good would she be? Then again...what good would she be if she didn't know what she was doing in the fight?

Finally, she nodded. The need for more practice won over her worries about potential injury.

"Yes. More practice would be good. Thank you."

Once Quio was ready, she began striking at his shield once more. As she did so, she paid attention to where she was putting her feet, taking Quio's earlier advice to heart. She could feel the difference it made in her attacks immediately. But her previous efforts quickly took their toll, and her blows lost strength as she tired. Before too long, she stopped, thanking Quio again for teaching her what he knew, and giving her the chance to practice.

"I think I'm done practicing for now. If I strain myself too much, I'll be useless when the battle starts."

Thoughts of the battle made her nervous, but knowing that she was doing something to help prepare herself helped somewhat.

"Would you like to practice some more, too?" she offered politely.

It was only polite to ask. And she felt that she owed it to Quio for helping her as much as he had. But deep down, part of her hoped that he would say no. Her arm had started aching again from practice, and she wasn't certain that she would be able to hold out for long under the strength of his blows. Still, she would try her best if he said yes.
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OOC: Sorry for the short post, but I'd thought I'd wrap things up?

Thanks for threading! I really like Lei'lira. ^_^


The second time around, Lei'lira, though starting out strong and correcting her stance, quickly began to tire. Quio let her go on for as long as she wanted, however; she would know better than he would where her limits would lie.

Eventually she broke off, and the Yludih nodded at the reasons she gave, simply accepting them. It made sense. Overexertion could make a person practice poorly, too, which in theory might be worse than no practice at all.

And even though the woman had not seemed to notice his reaction, earlier, the Yludih was still happy to bow out of a second bout when she asked if he wanted to practice again. "No, no," he said, trying to smile. "I'm good. Tired." He stretched his arms to make sure they weren't too sore.

After that there was little to do but excuse himself for the night. The crystal man scooped up a squirming Jack from where she had been lying in the corner of the room, watching them with her head on her paws. That way the dog couldn't follow Lei'lira back to her room again and make more trouble for them both.

"Thank you," he said one last time, before heading off.

Quio had found a cabin and settled in before he realized that the sword he had been using, sheathed carefully in its scabbard, was still in his hand. He looked at it for a moment, then shrugged and figured-- either he would need the weapon, or he wouldn't.
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[Global Event] Swords, Axes, Daggers Oh My [Side Challenge]

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Points!:

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:

Jack: Followed you on the ship
Detection: Watch someone's eye movements carefully to help determine their thoughts
Tactics: Small weapons in a confined space
Tactics: Dagger fighting is different than sword fighting
Combat: Shield: Defending against dagger strikes
Combat: Dagger: Basic stance
Combat: Dagger: Grip
Combat: Dagger: Slashing attack
Endurance: Practicing is tiring
Common: Word: Katana
Common: Word: Hand
Common: Word: Memory / Memories
Common: Word: Grip
Lei'lira: Knows more Common than you
Lei'lira: Had a dream
Lei'lira: Father is dead.
Lei'lira: Knows your real name.

Loot:
1 x sword
Fame:
NA
Magic:
These points may NOT be used for arcana
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Points!:

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:

Detection: Hearing movement while resting
Endurance: Practicing is tiring
Tactics: Dagger fighting is different than sword fighting
Tactics: Areas to attack
Combat: Blades, Gladius: Basic stance
Combat: Blades, Gladius: Grip
Combat: Blades, Gladius: Slashing attack
Rakahi: recogniseable but incomprehensible
Rakahi: ship language
Rakahi: word: 'sorry'
Rakahi: nautical terms for areas of ship.
U'frek: Immortal of the sea
U'frek: Biqaj Immortal
Quio: Knows Ne'haer
Quio: Has a dog called Jack

Loot:
1 x gladius (as described)
Fame:
NA
Magic:
These points may NOT be used for arcana

Overview:

General comments. Ohhh I love a bit of intrigue in a thread, and you got that in there. I was really surprised when I saw Quio give his real name, and I'm glad that came out later. Good, fun thread, I enjoyed reviewing it, thanks!
Story All good - great fun. Enjoyed it and allowed two pcs to have an interesting and intriguing meet and greet.
Structure No worries, all good.

Please do PM me if you think I've missed anything or you have any questions!
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