Burning Winter Snow

A settlement east of Rynmere across a stretch of water called 'the eastern trench' broken into three regions: Welles, Oakleigh, and Berwick.
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Shadows stirred overhead as the forms of the Volareon and their rides overtook the dark skies and dropped their payload on the camp. Flaming arrows cut through the darkness and lit up the tar and oil, making flames of the encampment. For a moment, Violet wondered if there would be much of the fight, though she thought she could see through the darkness the glints of shields and weapons and the clatter of them being hastily picked up. The smoke burnt her nose as their first volley of arrows flew right over her head and the tower shields.

Violet knelt down as return fire came in, loud bangs of steel tipped arrows crashing against the large tower shield in front of her. Though this was her first true battle, she felt a strange sense of calm humming through her body and settling in her nerves. Confidence had flooded into her, confidence of their victory and confidence in the men around her. Armor clattered as the ropes were pulled and the charging men tripped. Bracing for the incoming assault, she rose to her feet, the soft creak of her black leathers lost among the noise of battle.

In came the first assault and they were met by the tower shields, most of them blocked and thrown back. Then the line wavered and forces slipped between the impenetrable wall of steel. A Qe’dreki warrior had moved on her with a hefty longsword. Her hands felt for the pommel of her longer and thicker melee daggers, the sing of metal seeing them relieved from their sheaths. The blades crossed in front of her and caught the blade coming toward her, a strong shove sending the man stumbling to the side with his sword arm flailing. It didn’t take long for him to come back for more.

She was careful to stay on the defensive, parrying attacks and not rushing any openings. Malcolm had wanted as many alive as possible. The last parry sent his blade falling to the snow, and Violet moved her foot to firmly step on it and keep it down on the ground. Without a weapon, the warrior had sunk down with his hands behind his head, just as many around him were doing the same. Her sight did not catch the glint of a fallen throwing dagger in the snow. As she kicked the blade further away, there was a flash of silver and the blade dug into her leathers. Luckily it was not thick enough to make it to her flesh.

Violet’s gaze had widened as she took the pommel of one of her daggers and struck him across the head so hard that he lost consciousness, the blade disappearing into the snow. “Stupid bastard,” she swore as she examined the small slice in the leather left behind by the blade. She looked up to see others, a very tall blonde man and a smaller darker haired man, rounding soldiers up. “This one is accounted for. I’ll gladly help you round them up.”
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Elyna
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It was a crossbow bolt that struck. Skimming the tree tops, Elyna had hoped that she and Myst were far enough away from the melee to be safe; they weren’t. It was as they turned, banking hard to the west that she saw the black dart, before the Volareon scream split the sky and burst over the sound of combat. Arms thrown around its neck, she tried reaching back as they plummeted. Fingers grazing against the bolt, trying to wrench it free. They broke branches as they tumbled together through the barren trees and landed on the rigid and unforgiving world.
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Two of the taller combatants were better dressed than most of the rebels. They exchanged glances as they watched their comrade shot through the foot and then the knee. A young woman advanced with throwing knives in their hands, and they were all too aware of the approaching warden. The older of the two men, gestured to the treeline and the pair started to run. Unwilling to surrender and hoping to avoid a fight if they could help it.

The snow proved a treacherous ally to the pair. It disguised a host of hazards and traps, one which snapped up and around the leg of the younger man. He dropped to his knees, hands wrapped around the snare of his leg. With every movement, the wire pulled tight and his face turned pale then green with pain.

“Ed!” The taller man turned back, his gaze scanned the approaching army and he growled. He returned to his friend, knife pulled against the snare as they worked, frantic in their actions to save the circulation of the younger man’s leg. The knife graze through the metal and the snare gaze way beneath the blade. Looking up, he realised that they were surrounded. Marcus discarded the knife, tossing it away in the snow where it sank. His sword was unfastened and set aside.

Ed, remained pale, fingers pressed to a leg that bled in a perfect circle.
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Some say that battle is glorious. Great tales are told of such things as the campaign against the Qe'dreki on those fateful trials. In one sense, the glory of the battle was true. Songs might be sung of the victory, for a victory it most certainly was, against the forces there. It was well planned, well implemented and the troops did, mostly, what they were supposed to.

But in the end it boiled down to a small group of people, huddled together and kneeling in the snow in surrender.

There were dead on both sides ~ some of the Qe'dreki had died in the blazes, others had been decapitated on the field or killed whilst they had knelt in surrender. Such, after all, is the way of war. There were certainly less Qe'draki dead than there would have been had the Warden's orders been different.

Once it was over, they tied together the Qe'dreki who could walk and secured the place. But whatever intelligence they had been given about the numbers turned out, in the breaks and trials that followed, to be false. They returned to the camp where they learned about a group of scouts who had attacked ~ four very obviously and a fifth one who had returned to the main Qe'dreki groups to tell of their location.

So, they moved out.

Leaving the camp, they went to the small fort which they prepared for attack.... but none came. Those captives, taken that trial, they were the last and only Qe'dreki anyone saw on that campaign. Scouts went out, returned each group of them with the same story.

They just weren't there.

Unwilling to leave the job half done, they searched and they made sure that they had covered all of their bases, those who stayed with the campaign. Eventually, though, there was no other course of action available and they returned to Andaris. Where the remaining Qe'dreki were was, and would remain for some time, a mystery.
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So, since this thread has been languishing for some time and is so significant to a number of pc's, we had a chat about it amongst the staff and decided that I would offer a number of solutions to the pc's concerned. I sent out a pm to all concerned and they agreed the course of action they'd like taken. I hope that this "epilogue" wraps it up and deals with it sensitively and with respect to all concerned both in this thread and the wider plot. If there are any questions, please do feel free to drop me a pm. Apologies for how long it took to wrap this up, but I wanted to make sure that we'd given everyone involved a chance to discuss. Thanks, all, for your patience and I'll be posting a review directly.
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Thank you all for your patience with the completion of this thread ~ and for those of you who responded to my pm, thanks so much for the clarity, good humour and willingness to work with us. You are very appreciated. :)

Malcolm


Story: 4/5 (unfinished)
Collaboration: 3/ 5 (two posts)
Structure: 5/ 5

Knowledge:
Blades (Sword): Decapitating move.
Leadership: Hear all viewpoints, then take decisive action.
Leadership: Giving clear orders.
Logistics: Plan for every contingency
Tactics: Ensure that you cover all bases in an attack.

Loot: NA
Fame: +5 (involvement in the campaign)
Devotion: None
Magic: These points may NOT be used for arcana

Atashi

Story: 4/5 (unfinished)
Collaboration: 3/ 5 (two posts)
Structure: 5/ 5

Knowledge:
Endurance: Slithering through the snow
Endurance: Forcing yourself to continue when you are freezing
Endurance: Moving despite pain & numbness
Etiquette: Military ~ chain of command.
Shield Combat: Defensive positions
Shield Combat: Attacking with a shield

Loot: NA
Fame: +5 (involvement in the campaign)
Magic: These points may NOT be used for arcana
Devotion +1 (prayer to Ethelyndra)

Kylar

Story: 4/5 (unfinished)
Collaboration: 3/ 5 (two posts)
Structure: 5/ 5

Knowledge:
Etiquette: Military ~ chain of command
Ranged Weapon (Crossbow): Brief aim in large combat.
Tactics: An army marches on its stomach.
Tactics: Defend the civilian you are protecting
Velduris: Familiar: Can be spirit or solid
Velduris: Familiar: You can communicate in either form.

Loot: +3 modified bolts
Fame: +5 (involvement in the campaign)
Magic: These points may NOT be used for arcana
Devotion: +1 Karem (prayer), +2 (dedicating action)

Padraig

Story: 4/5 (unfinished)
Collaboration: 3/ 5 (two posts)
Structure: 5/ 5

Knowledge:
Discipline: Retaining focus amidst distractions
Discipline: Not reacting to slaughter of the surrendered.
Endurance: Dealing with extreme cold
Logistics: Planning for contingencies

Loot: NA
Fame: +5 (involvement in the campaign)
Magic: These points may NOT be used for arcana
Devotion None

Violet

Story: 4/5 (unfinished)
Collaboration: 3/ 5 (two posts)
Structure: 5/ 5

Knowledge:
Bladed Combat (Daggers): Crossed defence to 'catch' attacks
Bladed Combat (Daggers): Pommel strike
Detection: Discerning relationships from watching.
Endurance: Dealing with extreme cold
Shield Combat: Defensive positions

Loot: NA
Fame:+5 (involvement in the campaign)
Magic: These points may NOT be used for arcana
Devotion NA

Elyna

Story: 4/5 (unfinished)
Collaboration: 3/ 5 (two posts)
Structure: 5/ 5

Knowledge:
Endurance: Dealing with extreme cold
Etiquette: Military: Formal and informal structures
Flying: Balance and weights add a whole new level of complicated
Flying: Controlling a plummeting fall
Tactics: Considering not just the outcome, but how you will deliver it.
Tactics: Information gathering vs being a target

Loot: NA
Fame: +5 (involvement in the campaign)
Magic: These points may NOT be used for arcana
Devotion +1 Vri (prayer)

Please note: I have opted to award marks out of five for structure even though this thread is abandoned. I've done this because the unique nature of this thread means that it is the moderators turn to post, therefore, the pc's could not bring it to a close. The unanimous vote amongst the pc's who responded to my PM has been to wrap it up and review, so I've done that.
Please do PM me if you've got any questions, comments or concerns. Thank you again for your patience.
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