• Graded • [Starter Quest] Discretion is the better thing of something

Where Genuvah has a run-in with the past.

Almund is a thriving township with a dark side. With houses made from the wooden bodies of decommissioned ships, there are many opportunities here, coupled with many dangers.

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They were in a situation, both of them, of wanting to trust the other, but not being able to. After arcs of searching and hoping, the elderly woman almost dared not hope any more. He spoke to her in their shared language and she looked at him with hope and desperation but then she breathed in and a frown creased her brow. "Alright, so assuming that neither of us are lying, there are things we'd know," she whispered back to him in their language.

Thinking for a moment, she smiled and nodded. "There was a trial, I remember it clearly. She was there with her boy, you. It was a party of some kind, a celebration. But the boy got into trouble that trial, for a very specific reason....." She raised an eyebrow and waited for him to finish the story and then did the same again, and one more time. Then, the final time she told him about a discussion between her and her daughter, his mother. Martha had spoken to Genuvah the trial before, about something and he'd asked her for advice it seemed. She'd given it but was doubting the advice now. So, she went back to her own mother and asked for her advice.

Everything added up, each memory of hers fitted with one of his and vice versa. If he questioned her, then she knew.

As they spoke,she held on to his hand and she smiled in delight at every time where they concurred."Oh boy, I'm glad to have been found," she said and she sighed. "They took her, and I don't... I don't know. I couldn't get to her, but friends who went to question, they said she'd been killed. I tried for so long, but I had to try and find you. It's what she'd want, I know." His grandmother, for such she was, was clear. As far as she, or anyone, knew, Martha was dead.

Her name? It had been a long time, she told him, since she had told anyone that. Or the truth of it. "My name is Tamar, and it is good to meet you,"
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It all came pouring out at once, and to be honest Genuvah was surprised to see such candid admission in one of his own kind, and one of his relatives. He lowered his voice as he answered, "Careful, Grandmother. We shouldn't speak so candidly in public." He said it in the Common Tongue. Then he reached out to take her hand, and smiled and nodded, "It's good to see you too. Family needs to stick close by, I agree. Lest insanity take us and betray our nature." He added the last part in a barely audible voice.

So saying, he looked around, and asked her, "Do you have a place to stay? I admit my rent has run out on the nearby Inn, and I'll be out of a place to stay until I find someplace."

She nodded, and then clasped his hand in her own cold hand, "Yes, I have a cottage near the Wytchwood. It's nice and quiet, nobody will bother you there."

So saying, the old woman stood from her seat, and gestured for him to follow her, as she walked out the door. Idly, Genuvah considered, perhaps he was being naive. But he didn't care. He missed having family, he was almost willing to be deceived. So he started after her, walking through the streets of Almund to it's very outskirts. Thankfully, she wasn't some ill-conceived witch straight out of a fairytale, and soon enough he'd learn she really was all she claimed to be. His Grandmother.

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I really enjoyed this thread and I'm glad that you've decided to resurrect Genuvah. He's an interesting and well written PC and I enjoy how you explore the nature of Yludih with him. Your writing here is lovely and I hope that you really enjoy bringing him back. Thanks for your patience here, and enjoy your very well-earned rewards!
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