Name: Vega
Knowledge:
Arlo: Wants revenge for the dancing
Arlo: Getting rusty
Discipline: Practice makes perfect
Strategy: Putting a hat out to collect money
Arlo: Two and a half arcs younger than you
Acting: Telling a story through motion
Acting: Impersonating a drunk
Acrobatics: Forward somersault
Strength: It takes strong legs for momentum
Strength: Holding a headstand
Acrobatics: Working together for a complex trick
Acrobatics: Headstand on someone’s shoulders
Acrobatics: The appropriate place to put your hands for a headstand on someone else
Detection: Noticing when someone is upset
Acrobatics: Working together for balance
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: N/A
Story: 5
Collaboration: 5
Structure: 5
Name: Arlo
Knowledge:
Vega: Wants to practice before performing
Vega: Thinks you’re getting rusty
Discipline: Practice makes perfect
Strategy: Putting a hat out to collect money
Vega: Two and a half arcs older than you
Acting: Telling a story through motion
Acting: Impersonating a drunk
Acrobatics: Walking handstand
Strength: It takes strong arms to support your body
Acrobatics: Working together for a complex trick
Strength: Being the base for a headstand
Vega: Thinks you’re a good teacher
Vega: Thinks you cook well
Acrobatics: The appropriate place to put your hands for a headstand on someone else
Acrobatics: Positioning yourself right to be the base of a headstand
Acrobatics: One handed headstand
Acrobatics: Working together for balance
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: N/A
Story: 5
Collaboration: 5
Structure: 5
Comment:
This was an enjoyable little post and I learned a thing or two about acrobatics and all the factors that go into determining the success of them. These two are super cute together and I love their bantering relationship. You both have similar writing styles. My only changes I would make is to be careful how many interjections such as “she supposed” you use.
If you feel that I've missed anything or have any questions or comments, please PM me!
Knowledge:
Arlo: Wants revenge for the dancing
Arlo: Getting rusty
Discipline: Practice makes perfect
Strategy: Putting a hat out to collect money
Arlo: Two and a half arcs younger than you
Acting: Telling a story through motion
Acting: Impersonating a drunk
Acrobatics: Forward somersault
Strength: It takes strong legs for momentum
Strength: Holding a headstand
Acrobatics: Working together for a complex trick
Acrobatics: Headstand on someone’s shoulders
Acrobatics: The appropriate place to put your hands for a headstand on someone else
Detection: Noticing when someone is upset
Acrobatics: Working together for balance
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: N/A
Story: 5
Collaboration: 5
Structure: 5
Name: Arlo
Knowledge:
Vega: Wants to practice before performing
Vega: Thinks you’re getting rusty
Discipline: Practice makes perfect
Strategy: Putting a hat out to collect money
Vega: Two and a half arcs older than you
Acting: Telling a story through motion
Acting: Impersonating a drunk
Acrobatics: Walking handstand
Strength: It takes strong arms to support your body
Acrobatics: Working together for a complex trick
Strength: Being the base for a headstand
Vega: Thinks you’re a good teacher
Vega: Thinks you cook well
Acrobatics: The appropriate place to put your hands for a headstand on someone else
Acrobatics: Positioning yourself right to be the base of a headstand
Acrobatics: One handed headstand
Acrobatics: Working together for balance
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: N/A
Story: 5
Collaboration: 5
Structure: 5
Comment:
This was an enjoyable little post and I learned a thing or two about acrobatics and all the factors that go into determining the success of them. These two are super cute together and I love their bantering relationship. You both have similar writing styles. My only changes I would make is to be careful how many interjections such as “she supposed” you use.
If you feel that I've missed anything or have any questions or comments, please PM me!