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Never Not Trouble [Patrick, please]

Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2017 1:19 am
by Pegasus
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Pash

Overview

Love Pash in this thread! It's great to see him in a Tavern, but still a little out of place somehow. Love the way you write your NPC and how you explore the relationship with her, yet equally maintain the overall story. I really enjoyed your contribution to this thread and I had a great time reading it. Great pc, really well written!

Points

XP: 15 (no magic!)

Devotion: Ilaren: +2
Fame: +7 (bard-ing, gift-ing)

Loot

Nope

Knowledge


Etiquette: Buying a round of drinks for the crowd
Persuasion: Forgiveness before permission even with a chair
Psychology: It’s hard to say no
Rhetoric: Make some small talk while waiting for your drink
Rhetoric: Everyone likes a story
Seduction: The more the merrier
Seduction: Tell a good story
Seduction: Sometimes you’re the performer, sometimes you’re the audience


Non-Skill Knowledge:

Location: Rharne: Earth Quarter
Location: Rharne: The Harlot ’n’ Hound
Immortal: Ilaren
Immortal: Ilaren: When in Rharne, buy her a drink
Patrick: From Rharne
Patrick: Works at the Bronze Boar
Patrick: Invited you “places”
Patrick: Makes great stew, apparently


Patrick

Overview

Great fun thread, I really enjoyed the way that you wrote Patrick in here. It's like he's arrived home! Lots of fun, lots of good interaction and a couple of snorts of laughter from me. Scarlet and Patrick seem like a good match! Drop me a pm if you've got any questions!

Points

XP: 15

Devotion: Ilaren +1 (drink in her name)
Fame: None

Loot

Nope

Knowledge

Skill Related
Socialization: Accepting Free Drinks
Rhetoric: Implying To Personally By A Drink
Persuasion: Suggesting "Fun" Later
Generic
Pash: The Minstrel
Pash: Praises Ilaren
Pash: A Traveling Sailor
Scarlet: A Noblewoman
Memory: Taking Home A Noble's Daughter