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In which Doran and Oberan meet!

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The guardsman seemed very pleased that Doran was willing to show off his famed blade, and he puffed himself up a little, eye gleaming with awe. The man admired the naked steel for a couple moments, his face uncomfortably close to the blade as he elevated “getting a closer look” to a whole different level. Doran was quite right; the man would indeed tell friends and family, even acquaintances and colleagues –anyone who’d listen, really- about the encounter. He was going to blow up the story quite a bit, as was only natural to do.

In his tall tale the museum had been overrun by monstrously deformed people, all sporting claws and fangs, driven mad by bloodlust. An evil Immortal had manifested through an ancient artefact, the newest piece of a temporary and limited time only exhibition. To destroy Etzos, fair city at the heart of the rebellion against the Immortals, they had created an impromptu army, twisting people’s appearances and mind controlling them. He and a few other guardsmen rushed to the scene, only to find Doran, Hero of Oscillus, with his trusty blade “Fang of Despair – Crusher of Hope” raised, stained with Immortal blood.

He had been able to stave off the mind control, and had fought off the army of slaves singlehandedly, knocking them on the head with the pommel of his blade. Mind controlled or not, they were still Etzori citizens, and Doran couldn’t kill them. So instead he’d knocked all of them unconscious. Without an army standing between him and the Immortal, Doran could now reach them fairly easily. The Immortal had tried some of their Immortal-tricks and wonky powers, but “The Blade That Slices Stars And Dices Hope” cut all attacks apart with ease. With the Immortal knowing they were cornered, they made the Hero temping offers of power, knowledge, wealth and everlasting fame, but Doran lent them no ear, approaching menacingly. And then -- swoosh, zzzzing, sha-shing – he cut them to ribbons! He sliced them up so finely that they practically turned to dust. Then he diced that dust up even finer, because that is the only way to kill an Immortal. Doran, master swordsman was extremely capable, but the Legendary Blade “That Which Is Capable Of Even Cutting The Wind Itself, Blast Away Thunder, Split Lightning, And Make It Rain Blood” –but then in the Ancient Language—enhanced his abilities even more. That’s why it was a legendary blade –In fact, Doran had only acquired it after a very long and arduous series of quests… but that was a story for another time. So with the Immortal cut into a collection of fragments tinier than dust, the artefact shattered and fell to pieces, and all people were freed from the mind control. Their bodies were still warped though, and Doran tasked the guardsmen with the task of safely transporting the victims home, so he could start working on a cure. With the blood of the Immortal on his blade that was an easy task, in fact, it took Doran only three trails, and then he called all monstrous people into his office, one by one, and made them drink a strange potion, after which they turned back into people.

And so, yet another legend of Doran the Hero came into existence, changing faces just a tiny bit more every time someone else told it, being blown out of proportion even more. Oberan himself would be told this tale several dozen trials later, pleasantly drunk and fuzzy in the head, much to his own amusement.

For now though, the Mortalborn watched the guardsman leave as fast as he could, off to complete the task assigned to him. He offered a grin to the man next to him, inclining his head slightly in agreement. ”To make things more impressive, yes. I don’t know if I can agree on the easier to remember part. I was forgotten easily enough.” As soon as he stopped reminding people of his existence, the infamous phantom thief had slipped from the minds of the people rather quickly, no longer the topic of rumor and gossip, becoming old news instead. Some had even begin to question whether he’d actually been real at all, which had been a major blow to his ego while in jail. As far as he knew there weren’t any legends about him either. Then again, he wasn’t a supposed hero.

A moment later the guardsman was back, panting and red in the face, but looking rather pleased with himself. He’d found a carriage post-haste, it seemed, and had it stationed right outside of the museum entrance. Beckoning Doran –and by extension, Oberan—to follow him, he proudly led the Hero of Oscillus to his transport, obviously showing off for his peers a little. Oberan remained silent until they were in the carriage, heading wherever Doran had instructed the driver to bring them to.

”You mentioned you could do wonderous things with alchemy,” the Mortalborn spoke, a childlike excitement twinkling in his eyes. It was clear he’d been thinking about it ever since Doran had brought it up. ”That you could replicate similar effects as this --” he waggled his clawed fingers ”—if you had a drop of blood.” Bran waited a moment for affirmation, continuing immediately when it came. ”I was wondering… I’m quite curious to what the results of such an experiment would be. I would gladly donate some of my blood in return for seeing you and your alchemy in action…” There was a certain hunger in his voice, an eagerness. As well as the gleam of mischief in his eye, though that was nothing new, really.
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It took the Mortalborn a certain amount of self-restraint in order not to do something as the guardsman came so close that his face was almost touching the sword. He had to remind himself that he still needed these people, that he needed them to admire him and respect him and tell stories about his supposed heroic deeds if he wanted to have any hope of defeating Xiur and his allies. If he gave in to the rage that Syroa had put into his soul, there would be none of that. For that reason he gave the guardsman ample time to inspect his weapon and even offered him something that almost looked like a smile.

“That’s probably a good thing considering what you did”, he remarked as Oberan mentioned that he had been forgotten easily enough. He could not help but wonder if that was another one of the man’s powers, if he could make people forget, if he could erase memories, if perhaps he was the Mortalborn of Oblivion whereas Doran himself was the Mortalborn of Knowledge. He did not have time to think about the matter in more detail though for it was just then that the guardsman returned, informing them that he had found a carriage.

Doran immediately followed him. He walked with his head held high, like a proper hero, but also slightly behind the guardsman, having come to the conclusion that it would only work in his favour if he gave the mortal his own moment of fame. Once he had informed him that he wanted to be taken to the Tower of Ministers where he lived and climbed into the carriage, he turned to Oberan again.

It seemed strange to him that the man would be so willing to give him some of his blood, considering how powerful it was. Doran himself would never do such a thing, out of fear that somebody might use his own powers against him. But then again, Oberan seemed to be a man who was easily excitable and did not always think things through. It made sense that he would find donating his divine blood exciting, and it would give Doran the opportunity to conduct a few experiments that he would not easily have been able to conduct otherwise.

“I might be able to replicate some of your powers”, he replied. “You will need to tell me exactly how they work though and what their limits are. I also need to know if you have been initiated into a domain of magic or if your soul is still pure as that might change some aspects of the process. In order to replicate what you just showed me I need to be intricately familiar with every aspect of it – or the item I make will inevitably have some sort of undesired effect – or not work at all.”
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Oberan’s grin widened significantly as Doran confirmed he could, in theory, replicate his powers. That would be absolutely magnificent. Imagine being able to use the Sphere without actually using the Sphere at all. He could just throw a flask of the alchemic brew at people, and get the same effects as per usual! Better yet, he could remain out of range, avoiding getting caught up in the blast. Was that an improvement though? Being affected as well was what made the Sphere fun to use; Bran never knew what was going to happen, and the fact that he would be subjected to the Sphere’s whims just made it even more exciting. If he wasn’t in range anymore, it would just be watching the results from a distance instead of up close, hidden in the chaos by not being exempt from the effects.

Ah well, it was worth a shot. Perhaps Doran could surprise him with something like a liquid Shenanigan Sphere, one that could be poured in drinks and stuff, triggering strange transformations upon imbibing. Perhaps he could make it a poison to smear on a weapon, transforming the target when it had spread through the bloodstream… Though he wasn’t too sure if the latter was a good idea. For some reason, the idea felt a little… wrong.

”Sure thing,” the mortalborn agreed, honestly more interested in what kind of wonky undesired effects would occur if he did not tell Doran of his powers at all. Or gave him wrong information. That might be a fun avenue to explore as well. Besides, his Shenanigan Sphere could be described as an undesired effect in and of itself. An inconvenience, in most cases.

”I’ll see you around then,” he stated, ”I’ll come find you.” Not a hugely difficult thing to do considering he now knew where the alchemist resided. He gave the man a wicked grin, then opened one of the carriage doors and stood in the opening, seeing the driver turn to look over his shoulder at the sound. ”I’m getting off here, kind ser,” the Maker of Mischief explained. “Don’t mind me. No need to slow down either, I’ll be fine.”

Grabbing the edge of the roof, the mortalborn hung down, having no footholds to support him. No matter though, he wouldn’t be here for long anyway. He moved a little, then slammed the carriage door shut with his foot, nodded at Doran through the little window, and jumped off the side. He landed in a tangle of limbs, trying to roll to compensate for the excessive momentum, but he just kind of flopped on the stones instead, a little scraped up. Nothing new, nothing serious. ”I’m okay, I’m okay,” he let the curious and the shocked people know, only remembering a couple trills later they were probably taken aback by his fangs and claws. He grinned a shark’s grin at them as he got back on his feet and dusted himself off before heading back home, whistling out of tune.
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Knowledge: Bran

Knowledge:
-Climbing: Clinging to the side of a carriage
-Climbing: Hanging from your arms
-Acrobatics: Jumping from a moving carriage
-Acrobatics: rolling to disperse excessive momentum
-Stealth: dress like the people around you to be inconspicuous
-Stealth: stuck-up nobles purposefully ignore people who look like peasants
-Stealth: blend in by acting like everyone else
-Stealth: people don’t notice you when you’re around someone famous
-Pickpocket: don’t do it when watched
-Deception: if you are affected by your own abilities, you might not be suspected
-Detection: Studying a face
-Detection: searching a good spot to activate your abilities

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-Doran: Alchemist
-Doran: Keeps his cool in unexpected situations
-Doran: can replicate mortalborn powers
-Doran: the Hero of Oscillus
-Doran’s Blade: Xiur’s Bane
-Doran: Stabbed Xiur
-Doran: famous
-Doran: lives in the Tower of Ministers
-Doran: not just an ordinary human?
-Bran’s philosophy on why to use the Shenanigan Sphere
-Shenanigan Sphere: Effects can be replicated through alchemy?


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Comments: Loved it! I better see some cool alchemy stuff coming up!! Mischief managed, lol.

Also, I could have misread the request, but I didn't see anything for Dorian? Let me know if this was a mistake.


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I absolutely love how you portray Doran, your writing of him is so incredibly atmospheric, I love it. I can just picture him calmly looking around in the exhibition, seeing just what's going on here. His logical and analytical mind is always ticking over, always looking at all possibilities. I really hope to see a follow up to this thread at some point in the future! As always, drop me a pm if you feel I've missed anything.

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Alchemy: Might be able to replicate the effects of Oberan's Shenanigan Sphere
Deception: Pretending that you enjoy talking to people
Detection: Spotting the only calm man in a panicked crowd
Discipline: Keeping your cool in unexpected situations
Discipline: Staying calm when somebody gets too close to you
Investigation: Investigating the cause of an unusual event
Psychology: Hate can blind you
Leadership: Taking charge of an unexpected situation
Leadership: Using your reputation to influence people

Location: Etzos Museum of Art and History
Oberan: Mortalborn
Oberan: Has the power to transform people
Oberan: Could be a valuable ally
Oberan: His philosophy on why to use the Shenanigan Sphere
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