• Graded • Second Chances

After a botched first meeting, Noth seeks out Navyri only to find her changed.

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Navyri
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Joined: Mon Jun 19, 2017 5:27 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Thief
Renown: 348
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"What if I fall?"

Oh but darling
What if you fly?
55th of Vhalar, 717
Silence and the flickering of candlelight surrounded them, Noth’s contemplation a heavy weight that seemed to press upon the room. Navyri waited, her right wing shifting so that she could see him over her shoulder, his expression unreadable to the Naer. He fought emotions that moved too quickly beneath his intimidating armet for her to read, and she tensed, feeling fingertips trail along her wings. It was a gentle contemplation. Did he see her as a threat, as the Etzori did? A weapon? Unfamiliar with the pinion being touched since their revival, they were sensitive, feathers ruffling where his fingers trailed until Navyri snapped the wing shut and bent to retrieve her covering.

We both know I was not meant to fly, she thought bitterly, unable to answer his question. These wings… they would be dead weight until she learned to control them, making answering his question a tricky one. She remained silent, staring ahead as she pulled the sheet back over her shoulders, the last flashes of her skin draped in cloth, “Any difficulties?”

The Naer moved elegantly back to where she had been perched, smiling. She had faced many challenges, and would likely face many more. He did not know of Balaera, or of the Miasma. Or even of the enemies she had acquired over her years. How could he help her with what was to come? With what was happening to her now? Navyri looked to the mirror and was reminded of her strange appearance, laughing, although the mirth did not sound genuine, “Do you always offer such personal assistance to your lackeys or am I just a unique case?”

Her smiled melted and she sighed, waving towards the door with a nod, “As you said, I am an excellent thief. I will be a good smuggler, and I am already a benefit. This is just… something new to handle,” she paused, reminded of flight (and her lack of knowledge) and continued, “Marrow made me an offer - gold, protection, and a safe place if I find myself in need of one. I’ll help you in exchange for that, and as for the rest… well, let’s just see what happens. I’d hate to be a bother so soon in our arrangement.”

She crossed her legs, and leaned back, “I appreciate the offer, but I have a dozen difficulties, some of which I haven’t even scratched the surface of,” Her hand idly ran along the arm, now stamped with the red chain, peeking through her Tarouz blessing, and staining the skin of her shoulder, “If that is something you can understand, then congratulations… You found yourself a new smuggler.”
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"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Kali'rial
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Race: Qi'ora
Profession: Hunter for Cally's (Expert)
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My fave murderbird. :) It’s so Noth, contemplating how he could attack her even when its a friendly visit haha. The quiet jealousy over her wings is a nice touch.

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XP: 15/15 (Not for magic)

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Hiring someone for illicit activity (-5)

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Intimidation: Showing Up Unannounced
Intimidation: Mentioning Others You’ve Killed
Intimidation: Stroking Deadly Instruments
Leadership: Showcasing Power by Placing Yourself in a Precarious Situation
Leadership: Offer Support to Promote Loyalty
Logistics: Do Not Start an Enterprise until It’s Been Discussed
Discipline: Not Flinching in the Darkness
Discipline: Business before Pleasure
Detection: Noticing Irregularities
Detection: Irregularities Mean Things Have Changed

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Navyri: Has Seen Otherworldly Things
Navyri: Sought by Immortals
Navyri: Can do Strange Things in the Dark
Navyri: Embodies Naer Beauty
Navyri: Possesses Wings
Navyri

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The struggle with big wings in a little cabin, loved this bit. :D I truly think Navyri is one of my fave characters to read. She’s so dark yet has so much depth.

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XP: 15/15 (Not for magic)

Fame/Loot/Injuries/Overstepping

Wings Revealed (-5), Hired for illicit activity (-5)

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Meditation: Remain Completely Still if Possible
Meditation: Clear Your Mind
Miirduk - Dualism: Triggered by Meditation
Miirduk - Dualism: Takes Concentration
Miirduk - Dualism: The Different Forms Change Your Appearance
Appraisal: Understand The Value of People
Intimidation: Casting a Room in Darkness
Persuasion: Don’t Shoot the Messenger
Stealth: How to Slither Within the Shadows
Discipline: Duirkek Form Maintains Emotional Control

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Prince of Eternal Mercies: Intimidating, Terrifying
Prince of Eternal Mercies: Leader of the Al’Angyryl
Prince of Eternal Mercies: Hates Delroth (and other Immortals)
Prince of Eternal Mercies: Willing to Aid You if You Return the Favor
Etzos: Hates Things Not Easily Understood
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