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What's Wrong with Eating Horses? (Nir'wei)

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Qit finally caught sight of the river, and relaxed for just a moment. She looked upstream, seeing that it was deeper and calmer the further up it went. Downstream seemed shallower, rocky, but with mild rapids. But the main problem was that while the banks were protected by trees growing over and outward, the majority of the river was open to the sky. And she doubted this hunter just left his dragonbird thing behind. If she was spotted by that flighted beast while trying to swim across, it probably could just scoop her up and eat her easily. That was not an option, not at the speeds that thing could fly.

Crossing was definitely a no go.

The momentary recess let her feel just how exhausted she was. Her chest still heaved and her entire body hurt. She was overheated, and needed to find sanctuary now that she was close to the means. Unless... This could be her sanctuary. She didn't know how much time she had, but she had another ruse to try. Just because she'd decided to not cross did not mean they knew she wouldn't.

Scrambling, she removed her blouse and her trousers, leaving her in a doe skin loin cloth with a javelin strapped to her back and her sword strapped to her thigh. Taking the arrow between her teeth, she ripped the trousers up into many sections. She mopped up the blood on her wounds once more, staining all but one longer piece. Then she hobbled upstream, occasionally throwing one blood soaked rag into the woods. She was watching the banks of the river as she followed it, climbing up the slight elevation, heaving heavily now.

She didn't have much left in the tank, that was for sure. When she reached a small overhang, she stopped at it, and using her fingers, wiped up her blood and flicked it all around the area. She wanted it to seem she was indecisive, and stood here a while before making a decision. She threw the last blood soaked rag further upstream onto the bank. Then she picked up a heavy rock, and tossed heavily into the river, purposefully to make a loud plunking noise and stirring up the mud there. Finally she smeared her blood on her blouse and tossed it into the river, watching as the lazy current carried it down stream.

Using the loose piece of cloth that she'd saved, she tied it around her wound, biting heavily into the arrow to hold back the scream of pain. She then drew her javelin, and quietly slipped into the brush, taking careful steps as she made her way further and further upstream, going slower now. Silent, relying on her stealth and caution.

She was deliberate in each step, skirting briars this time, using the javelin to keep branches off of her. Once she made her way upstream a fair ways, on the last of her energy, she reached another small overhang. She dropped to her butt on it and scooted to the edge, and stabbed her javelin deep into the side of the embankment. She pushed it deeper and deeper into the soil, and pushed on it, testing it. Finally confident in its hold, she gingerly slipped over the edge, one hand one the javelin.

It held, briefly, slowing her descent, and letting her swing beneath the embankment in thick mud. There were many roots and insects in this alcove, and she shlurped into the mud, dropping to a knee, fighting the pain in her leg with a moan around the arrow. She looked at the water, scanning the surface, seeing that she had disturbed it slight enough to cause ripples, but small ones that would dissipate before long. She took the arrow from her teeth, and stuck it in the mud behind her, where she then sat down, leaning against the back wall.

She was tired. Too tired. But she had one last thing to do. Thankfully it wasn't too difficult of one, and was already half done. She removed the temporary bandage on her leg and buried deep in the stick mud. Then she gooped up a thick wad in her hands and slathered it over the wound and the rest of the leg. It was a queer feeling but it helped to cool her down and provide relief. She continued to spread mud over her entire form, from her face to her head, to her groin and stomach to her toes. She left nothing to chance. She spread it through her hair, until she was beyond recognizable. Not that anyone would be around to recognize her anyways.

Once satisfied that she could cover no more, she slumped back against the wall, and quieted her breath, and relaxed. There was nothing left to give. Nothing to do. If her attackers found her, she was dead. She had plenty of fight left but no breath or energy to do it. So she sat there in the shade, muddy water cooling her legs, and her chest rising soft and slow. This was as good a place to hide or die as any other she supposed.

If only she could have one last good meal. No one should ever die hungry. No predator should. And with that last thought, she closed her eyes, and listened to the sound of the lazing river, waiting to hear the telltale splashes of her approaching attackers.



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He looked as far up and as far down the river as he possibly could, but found nothing. Greyhide, likewise, found no signs of life... although there were most certainly remnants of the girls presence, in the form of strips of cloth smeared in blood and thrown back into the woods, in a clear line pointing upstream from where they'd originally emerged. He couldn't possibly say why - perhaps deciding to completely discard the last scent markers from her body, before washing herself entirely and vanishing? Perhaps she'd thrown them all upstream in order to lead him there, and then gone downstream. He couldn't be sure. The sneaky tricks that'd worked at the beginning had worn away to nothing with time, and now he wasn't quite sure if he wanted to believe them anymore.

Although, there was one sign he really couldn't ignore. A blouse snagged on a sharp rock, rippling in the currents as they pushed further upstream. More blood on that, something else to toss before she vanished. Honestly he was surprised about the quantity of blood that he'd found all the way here, he didn't think a slice on the outer thigh and a puncture in the shoulder would weep so much, but then, he'd never given her a moment to properly bandage it, nor slow down and stop running. "She must be exhausted." He felt rather bad for her for that, but then, if she was here in front of her, he'd put an arrow through her leg without much thought at all if he could. She'd brought everything down on herself from the very first moment, and anything to slow her down and make her make stupid mistakes was another blessing he thanked Karem for.

Gently wading into the edges of the deeper currents around the blouse, a stone still with flecks of moss covering the surface sat under the water. Obviously moved from the shore. Mud stood in unnatural rifts around it, against the current. What the hell did all of this mean? It was like a strange puzzle she'd tried to set out, hoping some pieces would throw him off, even when the answer clearly led upstream still, with no scent markers moving left or right. "There's loads of flecks of blood here, but... nothing leading away. Just splattered all over the ground around here." Greyhide was spinning in circles, trying to catch any snatch of scent, but if the blouse was evidence of anything, she'd washed herself by this point.

"Let's keep going upriver. Matter of fact, hold." The river should be wide enough, he thought to himself. Raising one hand and whistling loudly into two fingers, he waited for a distant answering screech. "Alright. Let's keep going." She wouldn't be waiting in the embankment; she'd discarded everything to turn herself invisible and escape, the last thing she'd do now is double-back for an attack, or she would have done it long ago during the approach to the river, or earlier still when he first entered the woodlands. He was utterly confident of it now - this was an attempt at escape and very little else, and that meant that he wouldn't waste any more time wondering and waiting for an ambush that would never come. A few bits upriver, the sound of branches snapping and trees groaning announced Traveller's presence as he swept aside the overhanging trees to descend in the middle of the river. "Wait here." If his hunch was wrong, they'd take back to the skies and try their luck scouring the air for a break or two around the portion of the river they'd found the blouse. If they found nothing, well, they'd just have to report back for now. Greyhide agreed; at this point, unfortunately, they'd likely let their prey escape.

They followed directly along the river, staying as close to the edge as they could manage, even as it opened up into a mud-soaked embankment. Traveller snorted loudly; the mud under the river was sticking to his claws and between his fingers, and soaking the underside of his tail as well. Vhalar wasn't good weather for a dip in the river. Not warm enough, not dry enough; it'd get even worse when he had to fly through the cold air of higher altitudes to clear the forest once again. "Yeah, I know." He grunted sourly. "We should probably just go, huh." The trail had grown cold not some time ago. At this point he was running off little more than a tiny handful of clues, with no scent trail and no markings nearby to back it up.

Traveller shook his serpentine head and grunted softly... then, abruptly, his eyes snapped to one particular spot. His eyesight, as with all Sohr Khal, was exceptionally keen. Greyhide couldn't have possibly picked up the scent, since she was covered from head to toe in thick muck, but... it was humanoid, there could be no doubt. "... Gross. Think she's dead?" She was certainly as still as one, looking like she'd slipped and fallen down, though there were too few slide-marks, and too much mud over too much of her body, like she'd been liberally dipped in it from head to toe. "Definitely doesn't look like she's conscious... ugh." He couldn't take her back to the Menagerie. He wasn't throwing... that... over the back of Traveller. Nor was he going to march her by foot.

Had she learned her lesson? He liked to think so. He'd shot her in the shoulder and chased her over most of the day, to the brink of exhaustion. bUT... "Damn it. I'm not coming all this way for nothing."

"You're not," Archailist chuckled quietly. "Take a good look at her. Does that look like someone who's going to come back and try to kill you again?" He frowned, shaking his head reluctantly. "If you'd have run away... well, she wouldn't have learned her lesson. And you wouldn't have learned yours." Wait, the hell was he talking about? "You chased someone you didn't know through half the forest, risking your life on multiple occasions, with absolutely no thought about what you'd do when you finally arrived. You have no rope to bind her, you have no way to carry her back... you rushed out, entirely unprepared for this, and though you were successful in hunting down your prey, you are now left with no option but to either kill her, which you set out knowing you would not do unless absolutely necessary, or to leave empty-handed. You should have put more thought into this before you set out." He hated the spirit-squirrel so much.

Traveller was already turning around and beginning his walk back downstream. Nir'wei took one more glance to the girl sitting at the bottom of the bank and returned his nocked arrow to its quiver, turning heel to follow the Sohr Khal to a more suitable spot for take-off. Greyhide lingered for perhaps the longest, watching the girl carefully, as if waiting for a sign of life, or consciousness, or... something. Ultimately, he returned to his spirit form and vanished on the spot, whether he got what he desired or not.

Nir'wei remounted further downstream, near the first point they'd met the river, and took off towards the Menagerie. Whether or not he'd succeeded in bringing the dirty thief, whether or not she'd likely learned her lesson about stealing horses she didn't own and attacking people with javelins, he'd need to report this to the Menagerie proper, and the Elements themselves, along with what little description he could give of her face. He'd only seen her from the air, and with her face caked in so much mud most basic features were obliterated... but he had a stone with her blood on it. And her blouse, too. If she ever showed her face anywhere near the Menagerie again though, he'd be prepared. With a long length of rope.
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What's Wrong with Eating Horses? (Nir'wei)

Nir'wei

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Love Nir'wei in this thread! You played his skill level really well and I really enjoyed his relationship with Traveller. He made clear, logical decisions and his sense of outrage at Qit'ria's actions was particularly well written. I love your writing style, the detail and care you put into each post - great stuff!

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XP: 15

Fame: +10 (good deeds, protecting Scalvoris)

Loot


Gained a blouse belonging to unknown woman, and a blood-soaked cloth strip belonging to unknown woman.
Lost an arrow.

Knowledge

Hunting: Hunting by yourself is much more difficult than hunting in packs.
Hunting: Fast hunting prevents prey from escaping.
Hunting: Injured prey become weaker the longer the hunt is drawn out.
Hunting: Scent-hunting using a canine companion.
Hunting: Hunting humans is much more difficult than hunting animals.
Tactics: Forward thinking is the backbone of a good strategy.
Tactics: Knowing your weaknesses is paramount to building your strength.
Tactics: Mounting an unceasing offensive.
Tactics: Intimate knowledge of the field of play gives significant advantage.
Tactics: Anticipating ambush positions.
Tactics: Making predictions based on your environment.


Qit'ria

Overview

I have such fun reading your writing. When Qit did her best mountain lion impression, I chortled. You write her perspective really well, put forward her viewpoint and your writing really flows. Very easy to read, very enjoyable to read. Her thought processes are very much the huntress and it's great to see her developing in her skills, too. Enjoy the rewards!

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XP: 15

Fame: NA - as you weren't recognised. If anyone captures Qit following this (once it's on the Bounty Board) then you will get -10.

Loot

Qit'ria will now have a bounty on her head for her actions in this thread.
Gained an arrow.
Lost a blouse, trousers, and a javelin.
Shallow arrow puncture to the back of the shoulder.
Shallow gash up the outside of left thigh.

Knowledge

Stealth: Using Tall Grass to conceal yourself
Throwing (Javelin): aim at the broad side of a creature
Hunting: Retrieve your ammunition while on the run
Throwing (Javelin): Skipping while running into a throw
Running: Zigzag when being shot at
Throwing (Javelin): Aim ahead of targets in straight line motion
Fieldcraft: Water can be found downhill
Fieldcraft: Game trails usually lead to water
Stealth: Using blood scented items to create false trails
Stealth: Avoid open areas when dodging flying enemies
Stealth: Using decoy clothing to throw enemies off your track
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