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Pupils of the trade

Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2017 9:20 am
by Zip
Zipper was quiet for a bit. Finally, she said: “I get it. I really get it, but there’s nothing left to say: save for your real last words. Last chance, no takebacks this time, Ray.”

And then Yana opened her mouth and told her a truth.

And then another.

Zipper responded with a cuss, but she didn’t scorch her head off then and there. They started talking, the ether missile coming perilously close a few times, but the spell never made its target. Partway through, Zipper took the book and put her in her pocket, and Yana did not object one bit. There was even laughter again, brief chuckles sandwiched between tense moments, and then nothing.

When backup arrived later, all they would see and report was a tussle -allegedly the first one- between the two women, followed by the archer escaping on a boat down to Foster’s after a brief but violent duel. The Bay’s authorities would be informed, of course, but it was done: Rayna was out of Etzos. Zipper’s injuries were extensive but not life-threatening; she had given her all for the state and came up short - humiliating but could you really fault her? She gave it her all.

No, she managed to fuck her way out of the army and into the Black Guard on her own half an arc later.

But every once in a while she would get a letter from Andaris from a certain R, and she would write back...

What were friends for, after all, if not to be used and used in turn?

Pupils of the trade

Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2017 3:56 pm
by Pash Raj'oriq
Thread Rewards
An action- and dialogue-packed read. I appreciated the similarities and differences between Yana and Zipper, and I’m going to admit that I didn’t expect the ending—I didn’t anticipate an escape. The combat and wordy ripostes were right on!

Yana

Points

XP:
15 | These points cannot be used for magic.

Fame:
N/A

Loot

N/A

Injuries + Overstepping

Battered and burned face—further damage to an existing injury. Nothing that affects the present permanently.

Knowledge

Skill Knowledge:
Deception: stalling for time
Deception: inconspicuously reaching for a weapon
Tactics: getting the first strike
Tactics: using your opponent’s mistakes in your favor
Tactics: always have a plan B
Tactics: don’t underestimate your opponent
Tactics: forcing an opponent into a melee fight
Unarmed: tackle
Unarmed: crushing the windpipe
Unarmed: hitting the same spot over and over

Other Knowledge:
Zipper: Caster of the Etzori Army
Zipper: Transmuter
Zipper: More powerful mage then expected
Zipper: Prone to aggression
Zipper: Has a brother named Finn
Zipper: Former wingmate
Zipper: Likes to collect information too
Zipper: Contact in Etzos
Zipper: Destroyed Yana’s eye
Zipper: Has Yana’s last remaining notebook
Zipper

Points

XP:
15 | These points can be used for magic.

Fame:
N/A

Loot

Rayna’s Notebook!

Injuries + Overstepping

Lots of facial bruising and damage, bruising of throat and neck, exhaustion. A trial of glitching from overstepping. Nothing that affects the present permanently.

Knowledge

Skill Knowledge:
Transmutation: Bolstering
Transmutation: Shapecraft
Transmutation: Pathway
Transmutation: Pathway: Forging a Pathway to the bottom of a river
Transmutation: Ether Missile: Using the Missile in Melee Combat
Endurance: Staving off Overstepping
Endurance: Taking multiple punches to the face
Endurance: Enduring the backlash of an Ether Missile
Endurance: Getting choked to near-death
Intelligence: Keeping a log of information
Intimidation: A threat backed by imminent magic force

Other Knowledge:
PC - Rayna (Yanahalqah)
Rayna: Bow of the Etzori Army
Rayna: Wingmates
Rayna: Not human
Rayna: Not made of flesh
Rayna: Not a Sesser
Rayna: Not a Becomer
Rayna: Driven to seek out information
Rayna: Knows everyone’s secrets
Rayna: Keeps logbooks of gathered intelligence
Rayna: A spy
Rayna: Contact in Andaris, Rynmere
Rayna: Practically pen pals
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