[Soirée] Black and White

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[Soirée] Black and White

49th Zi’da, 717


Darcy smiled at Charlie with delight and flushed with pride, grateful for the older woman’s compliment. Whilst she was confident in her ability on the piano, to play beside the Master made her feel like she was just mashing keys in comparison.

Watching her brother enchanted by the Warrick warmed her heart, and for a moment she felt sorry she had interrupted. He was smiling, and dancing, and relaxed. This wasn’t The Onyx Rose, not some unrelenting stone against the tide of Rynmere’s political madness, this was Oliver Sebastian Venora, this was Oli. Her Oli.

“He’s offered to tutor me Oli. Me! Tutored by Malero! I...I hope you don’t mind? He wants me to come home every ten trial to practice. I couldn’t possibly refuse or suggest he make the trip to Andaris instead!” She almost squeaked her voice become so high pitched, the excitement almost beaming from the blonde. At talk of weddings, her eyes widened for a moment, glancing at Charlie and back again with a knowing smile.

“Indeed brother, whenever that may be.” Giggling softly as the taller Venora kissed her forehead, Darcyanna’s eyes swept the room again, before looking back at them.

“Of course, go go! This night is for dancing and laughing and all the wonderful things you’ve set up here. Truly Oli, you’ve shown them all that Venora stands tall against the bitter winter frosts that nip at her heels. For the Rose.” Smiling, she waved them away, before turning to find the familiar purple of the Gawyne house amidst the sea of nobility.
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[Soirée] Black and White

49th Zi'da 717
Reflexively, Charlie squeezed Oliver's hand as his grip tightened around hers, but embarrassment rose through her body until it stained her neck red. Marriage, already? Fates, but they had been on one date, and one public outing. Charlie opened her mouth to say something, but all that came out was an embarrassed chuckle as she tried not to think of it.

But then she imagined someone else in Oliver's arms before the Seven, and something stuck in her throat. "I'd love to hear you play a wedding," Charlie said warmly to Darcyanna, hoping her voice wasn't shaking. She was proud that it came out relatively evenly, but even so, she avoided Oliver's eye. "And of course Ser Malero wants you. I think you even played better than he did, tonight," Charlie teased, hoping desperately that the miserly pianist was not behind her.

Charlie leaned in to press a kiss to Darcy's cheek, her hand in Oliver's as they walked away from the woman. Her throat dry, she did not know what to say now that they were suddenly alone again, and Darcy had gone to find Caius. Those two, they were so comfortable in their relationship - they had learnt to fly, while Oliver and her were still fledglings.

Still, she thought, smiling as they moved through the room. Oliver wanted her. And for now, that would have to be enough.
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[Soirée] Black and White

Oliver

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I loved this thread - I stalked it as you all wrote it and your portrayal of Oliver is awesome. Politician, noble lord, adoring big brother and man falling in love - all in a thread, all intertwined. Lovely writing.

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XP:15

Fame: +20 (speech, arranging the piano master, dancing)

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Politics: Giving speeches
Politics: Enforcing positive change
Politics: Appealing to nobles' egos
Etiquette: Thanking people for their charity
Etiquette: Surprising someone with an honour
Dancing: Keeping in time
Dancing: Leading a woman
Dancing: Spinning a woman into you


Darcyanna

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Oh, she did so well! You wrote Darcy as feisty sister protecting the family name and then suddenly she was just awesomely overwhelmed and amazed - and then she was amazing! Lovely writing, beautifully done.

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XP: 15

Fame: +10 (playing in public)

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Politics: Holding your own in a matter of barony business transactions
Politics: Calming your nerves to perform your best
Musical Instrument (Piano): Playing a duet on the same piano
Musical Instrument (Piano): Following a count in
Musical Instrument (Piano): Taking pointers from a Master
Musical Instrument (Piano): Taking the lead during a duet

Non-Skill:
Oliver: Had Malero secretly come to the gala
Oliver: Let you join Malero in a duet
Oliver: Follows Rynlism
Oliver: Is pretty taken with Charlie
Oliver: Wants you to play at his future wedding...oneday
Charlie: Is exactly the right person for Oliver
Charlie: Complimented your playing

NPC: Master Malero
Master Malero: offered you tuition


Charlie

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Get that beer down you, gurl! I really enjoyed your writing of Charlie here - fledgling romance, that time of still finding it all very uncertain, but she's very clear about where she is, and I love the way you described her as Oliver spun her into the dance. Beautiful scenes!

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XP:15

Fame: +10

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Politics: Maintaining a superficial veneer
Politics: Beer is a ‘poor man’s drink’
Etiquette: Don’t flirt so much in public
Etiquette: Offering your congratulations to a friend
Dancing: Following a man
Dancing: Following someone’s guidance
Dancing: Spinning
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