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Nauta F'mos Geey
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Thread Name: Out in the cold
City/Area:Etzos
Notes/Warnings: -
Requested Rewards: Job thread. I'll be talking to the city mod about it instead.
Knowledge:
  • Leadership (something about taking the accomplishments of underlings)
  • Endurance (something about Aukari blood against cold weather)
  • Discipline (not distinguishing threats)
  • Tactics (comfort is not a consideration to success)
  • Detection (lights can be used to find the presence of people)
  • Field Craft (stay between surfaces to block the wind),

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: None (Not taking part in the burglary)
Devotion:-
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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But I don't want to cure cancer. I want to turn people into dinosaurs.
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Zana
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Profession: Living a libertine lifestyle.
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Thread Name: Songbird
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Rewards Requested: Zana
Skill Knowledge (solo)
Cosmetology: Hair styling
Cosmetology: Wisps of hair to soften a style
Dancing: Stepping in time with the music
Dancing: Swinging hips can make walking a dance
Singing: Singing in a large room
Singing: Keep your pitch low to sound sultry.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: Public Performance: +5
Devotion:
Delroth: Pray (+1), Spend a break or more making myself look good (+3), make someone else feel inferior or jealous (+5) = +9
Zanik: Take up profession of performer (+10), devote song to Zanik (+3)
Collaboration: No, solo
Magic EXP: No.
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Profession: Fanatical Philanthropist
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Thread Name: Thorn in my Side
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None

Skill Knowledge (6 maximum)
Leadership: Giving clear commands
Leadership: Sharp tone of voice
Leadership: Eye contact helps
Medicine: Antidote for strychnine is oak bark.
Poisons: Strychnine poisoning
Psychology: Recognizing your own limits.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: New medical procedure (+2) Good deed (volunteering +1) Good deed (saved the lady +1) = +4
Devotion: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No.
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"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."

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Thread Name: Taboo Strikes II: Mental Elements
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: A bit of mild punching.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth: Sesser is helpful for following people.
Stealth: Use nearby alleys when tailing someone.
Stealth: Walking quietly.
Lock-picking: Opening a window with a chisel.
Lock-picking: Smaller hands are better.
Necromancy: Using a fetch to pick a lock.
Intelligence: Eavesdropping around a corner.
Tactics: Organising a distraction.
Disguise: Impersonating an earth troop Element soldier.
Climbing: Using a climbing rope.


Loot: Stolen money.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Taboo -2 for criminal activity.
Devotion: +2 Syroa: Pretend to be someone else and sew discord.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Tio Silver on Wed Jul 19, 2017 8:35 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 111
Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Alistair
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Thread Name: Daudra Dura
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Heavy violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Polearms: Spear - Skewering people through others
Polearms: Spear - Crouching into a spinning parry
Polearms: Spear - Spinning to dice an opponent apart
Acrobatics: Weaving through lunges and slashes
Detection: Searching from a higher elevation
Detection: Observing your surroundings in a dangerous situation

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: I killed a ton of bandits -- you can give me +3 for "killing a bandit", or you can give me that multiple times, it's up to your discretion.
Devotion: I'll just wait for the devotion update and see if this can work as a Raskalarn thread.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Alistair
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Thread Name: The Pup's Nemesis
Fridgar
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Axes & Bludgeons: Performing an overhead block
Axes & Bludgeons: Strangling an opponent with the pole
Axes & Bludgeons: Throwing your weight into the strike to remove the axe
Axes & Bludgeons: Waist shot
Axes & Bludgeons: Decapitation
Hunting: Be wary of the Flora as well as the Fauna
Hunting: Cutting off the head of an animal is a universally good way to kill it
Tactics: Resort to asphyxiation if all else fails

Alistair: You attacked him
Bestiary: Feron
Feron: Malicious and evil
Feron: Laughs
Feron: Camouflages
Feron: Weak to magic

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises and severe cuts across the arms, which will be treated by the Jegers and Alistair. 10-15 trials or so before full recovery.
Fame: +10 Killing a High-Exceptional Monster (Uthaldria Guidelines), Killing a Moderate Monster (+3), Killing a Low-Moderate Monster (+2)
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Alistair
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
6 Posts = 11 Knowledges

Polearms: Spear - Deflecting a heavy blow by spinning your spear
Polearms: Spear - Knocking a heavier opponent off their feet
Polearms: Spear - Impaling a lower creature through the head during a flip
Detection: Using sound to find an enemy
Detection: Using heat to find an enemy
Detection: Scanning for the source of something
Acrobatics: Back-flipping into a grab
Acrobatics: Dancing around a heavier opponent
Acrobatics: Front-flipping into a cartwheel
Hunting: The Feron's abilities
Hunting: The Alpha Feron, a greater Feron

Fridgar: Used "Tharos" as an alias
Fridgar: Attacked you due to a mentally altering drug
Jegers: Passed their final test
Jegers: Trail of the Nemesis

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Three gashes through the chest, Alistair will recover more quickly due to his treatment, medical expertise and Sesser mark; ten trials or so
Fame: +10 Killing a High-Exceptional Monster (Uthaldria Guidelines), Killing a Moderate Monster (+3), Killing a Low-Moderate Monster (+2)
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thread Name: Fountain of Youth
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge: (3 posts = 8 skills)
  • Deception: Presenting yourself as a professional adventurer
  • Deception: Appearing comfortable with the details of a deal
  • Detection: Listening for truth in rumors
  • Detection: Clarifying details about creatures
  • Investigation: Alcohol as a way to gather information
  • Leadership: Convincing citizens to stay out of the jungle
  • Leadership: Volunteering to scour the jungle
  • Stealth: That was not your drink, was it?
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • Tio: Out for profit
  • Tio: Knows Veyre
  • Tio: Complimented your bard skills
  • Veyre: A very sneaky doctor
  • [NPC] Ocelo: Thinks he found a fountain of youth in Scaloth Jungle
  • [NPC] Ocelo: Looks younger than he is
  • [NPC] Ocelo: Swore on dear ole Bessie
  • [NPC] Ocelo: Drinks and tells stories
  • Scaloth Jungle: Monsters and tribes live there
  • Scaloth Jungle: Has pygmies with poison darts?
  • Scaloth Jungle: Beautiful but dangerous
  • Rumor: There’s a Fountain of Youth in Scaloth Jungle

Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: NA
Fame: Probably N/A??
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes. Tio and Veyre.
Magic EXP: No.
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Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thread Name: ScarsCity/Area: Cally’s, Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge: (4 posts = 9 skills)
  • Rhetoric: Listening to difficult life stories
  • Intimidation: Rudeness as self-defense
  • Deception: Minimizing one’s internal struggles
  • Persuasion: Let’s get to know each other better first
  • Etiquette: Apologizing when you’re hurtful
  • Etiquette: Respectfully declining a bonus
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • Faith: Blessed by Famula
  • Faith: Blessed by Vri
  • Faith: Trained as a slave in Athart
  • Faith: Met free people for the first time on 20 Ymiden 716
  • Faith: Set free on 121 Vhalar 716
  • Faith: Moseke healed her brands
  • Faith: “There is a reason why only one of you jumped in front of that girl."
  • Padraig: Faith’s tutor before fiancé
Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: NA
Fame: Probably N/A??
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes, with Faith.
Magic EXP: No.
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Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Kayleigh
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Thread Name: Walk Different Roads
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Investigation: Inquiring for Searches
Location: Rharne's Docks
Enrick the Sailor
Personal: Following Footsteps
Personal: The Promise to Bring Higan Home
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: N/A
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Nauta F'mos Geey
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Thread Name: Slippery, slimy and cold!
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Its a boring job thread.
Requested Rewards: -
Knowledge:
  • Business Management: Business reputation can be used in place of individual reputation
  • Business Management: Buying in bulk can give better deals
  • Business Management: Use employees to do the things you can't be seen doing
  • Appraisal: Items of good and bad quality can be mixed to trick consumers
  • Discipline: Use items of importance to anchor you to your task
  • Appraisal: Use your hands to test your purchases
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: -
Devotion: -
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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