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Review Request 2.1.1

Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2017 4:16 am
by Zelferan
Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Slave No More
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Some lesser violence, slavery. Some major liberties are taken with Zelferan's skill set, but that's mostly because the setting itself is Emea.

Zelferan


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skills-
Endurance: Resisting attacks
Negotiation: Holding an Auction
Negotiation: Replacing a promised item with a different item of equal value
Persuasion: Offering a way out of a bad situation
Strength: Carrying someone over the shoulder
Strength: Not budging

Other-
PC: Noth
Noth: "Prince of Eternal Mercies"
Noth: A new rival? Enemy?
Noth: A petulant, naive child

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Noth


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Unarmed: Kicking in the Back
Intimidation: Running a Blade Along Skin

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.1

Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2017 7:33 am
by Yrmellyn Cole
Rewards Requested
Thread Name: To Water Street Marketplace
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: One NPC dies a quick and merciful death. Yanahalqah wants to submit an own request later (for rewards...)
Requested Rewards:

YRMELLYN

Skill knowledge:20
8 (first three posts)+ 12 (one each for 12 more posts)=20 skill knowledge in total

Acting: When in a combat situation it’s important to act fearless and focused
Acting: To act confident and fearless in a dangerous environment
Acting: To act seductively in order conceal that you are getting a weapon ready to use
Acting: To display a knife in order to act dangerous and deter potential attackers
Acting: To act seriously “adult” when the situations demands it

Attunement: To use attunement to improve the aiming of a pistol crossbow
Attunement: To use attunement to gauge people in a group
Attunement: To detect the spark of another mage
Attunement: The effects of mild overstepping
Attunement: To stop in time and not overuse attunement

Blades, knife: The basic stance and leg movements in combat
Blades, knife: How to use torso and arms in combination with the basic combat stance
Blades, knife: How to hold the knife in the right hand, close to the stomach
Blades, knife: How to use the left hand to push the enemy’s knife hand away
Blades, knife: A neck hit works best for a quick kill

Tactics: To make people drop a goal by promising a bigger profit for something else
Tactics: To concoct a scam in order to escape from a dangerous situation
Tactics: To distract people by making them sing along
Tactics: To hide and convey secret messages via song lyrics
Tactics: To speak up the value of something before making a business offer

Other knowledge

Location, Rynmere: Blacksmith Arms
Location, Rynmere: Water Street Marketplace
Location, Rynmere: Granny Anne’s Antiquarian Bookshop in Water Street
Location, Rynmere: The Barracks
Location, Rynmere: The secret tunnel between Blacksmith Arms and Water Street

PC, Saeri LaChasse (Yanahalqah): Fascinating blue appearance
PC, Saeri LaChasse (Yanahalqah): A person Yrmellyn wants to paint a portrait of
PC, Saeri LaChasse (Yanahalqah): Has impressive combat skills
PC, Saeri LaChasse (Yanahalqah): A taciturn personality
PC, Saeri LaChasse (Yanahalqah): Surprisingly interested in books

NPC, Rudi: A young boy
NPC, Rudi: A whistleblower in Water Street Marketplace
NPC, Rudi: Art loving kid in a place where art is hard to come by
NPC, Rudi: Smart enough to understand and follow instructions by song lyrics
NPC, Rudi: Offered to become your apprentice after saving you when you were in distress

NPC, Granny Anne: The owner of Granny Anne’s Antiquarian Bookshop
NPC, Granny Anne: A disheveled looking woman of uncertain age
NPC, Granny Anne: Partly dressed in worn out scholar clothes
NPC, Granny Anne: Aggressive, sly, smelling alcohol and seeming a bit crazy
NPC, Granny Anne: Shrewd and greedy shopkeeper who rips people off

NPC, Baldy: Big bald and mean Water Street thug with a good singing voice
NPC, Ratface: Relatively smarter Water Street thug, thus a gang leader
NPC, Knuckles: Simple common thug kind of Water Street thug
NPC, Slacky: Innocent and mentally deficient Water Street thug
NPC, Harelip: Tragic empathy mage Water Street Thug, delivered from by life Yrmellyn
NPC, Harelip: Could weaken enemies by making them freeze in terror temporarily

NPC, Rufus Hemlock : Owner of Blacksmith Arms in Rynmere
NPC, Rufus Hemlock : Owing Hemlock a piece of tavern art to incease his profit

Book, “The Forgotten Secrets of Alchemy”: By Anne Brandon, “Former honorary professor at the University of Rynmere”
Book, “The Forgotten Secrets of Alchemy”: Hard to immediately understand
Book, “The Basics of Alchemy for The Adventurous Beginner”: Unknown author
Book, “The Basics of Alchemy for The Adventurous Beginner”: Easy basics schoolbook
Book, “Mixed Alchemy and Alchemic Blends”: By A. Marlon
Book, “Mixed Alchemy and Alchemic Blends”: Workbook. A collection of experiments.

Loot:

One Pistol Crossbow, -7gn 5sn

Two bought books - 7gn
• “The Basics of Alchemy for The Adventurous Beginner” by Unknown author
• “Mixed Alchemy and Alchemic Blends”: By A. Marlon

Bribe received: One huge book in bad shape, named “The Forgotten Secrets of Alchemy” written by one Anne Brandon, according to the cover a “Former honorary professor at the University of Rynmere” given to Yrmellyn as payment for taking they boy Rudi as her apprentice.

Injuries/Overstepping: Hangover kind of feeling caused by attunement.
Fame: I don't think so
Collaboration: Yes, with Yanahalqah
Magic EXP: Yes, for Yrmellyn (attunement)
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Review Request 2.1.1

Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2017 2:58 am
by Patrick
Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Men of Night
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Suggested Themes
Requested Rewards: Nothing in Particular
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.1

Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2017 8:38 pm
by Theo Nji'Ryn
Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Following Madam LeFleur
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mature Themes

Requested Rewards:
Zana
Skill Knowledge:
Caregiving: Oils enhance a massage.
Caregiving: Prevention is better than cure.
Detection: Spotting tell tale signs of desire
Detection: Watching where someone looks.
Etiquette: When to remain quiet.
Tarouz: Clothed in Finery: Works on clothes only
Tarouz: Clothed in Finery: Doesn't hold up to close scrutiny


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
Theo
Skill Knowledge:
Alchemy: Akin to chemistry
Cooking: Fried bread and bacon
Cooking: The ten trill rule of dropping food
Detection: Noting when someone recognizes you
Etiquette: Dealing with a potential client
Intelligence: Asking questions to determine the limits of an ability
Negotiation: Ensuring that you get the best deal
Negotiation: Making it look like they get the best deal

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame:
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
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Review Request 2.1.1

Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2017 2:26 pm
by Noth
Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Leg of Deer
City/Area: Etzos Countryside
Notes/Warnings: For once, no.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Noth
Deception: Lying About Changing
Deception: Using Closeness to Mask Lies
Deception: Promising Things You Don't Mean

Nightshade

Doesn't want anything. :)

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope.
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope.

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Review Request 2.1.1

Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2017 2:51 pm
by Tio Silver
Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Tio's Magical Shiny Marbles
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Minor violence against fish.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Alchemy: Making Siren Marbles
Alchemy: Siren Light comes from luminescent patches
Alchemy: Applying Siren Light to Glass
Alchemy: Glass Bases
Alchemy: Using Sponges in Alchemy
Alchemy: Let things wait for a while
Alchemy: Using only relevant fish parts
Throwing: Throwing Harpoons


Loot: Bag of Siren Marbles
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.1

Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2017 5:58 pm
by Yanahalqah
Rewards Requested
Thread Name: to waterstreet market
City/Area: Andaris -- Waterstreet
Notes/Warnings: Even when I get 19 knowledges, it's still too few
Requested Rewards:
  1. Linguistics: Practice makes perfect
  2. Linguistics: working around a limited vocabulary
  3. Linguistics: understanding less fluent speakers
  4. Intelligence: Scouting a location for later reference
  5. Intelligence: reading between the lines
  6. Intelligence: Child Spies as informants
  7. Acting: acting like your other persona
  8. Acting: feigning confidence
  9. Intimidation: wearing your weapon openly
  10. Blades: Dagger: How to move during dagger combat
  11. Blades: Dagger: where to stab to (permanently) incapacitate opponents
  12. Detection: searching for the fastest route through a market
  13. Deception: Spinning a false, though believable story
  14. Deception: Good lies have some truth in them
  15. Negotiation: brokering a deal
  16. Rhetoric: leading a conversation
  17. Unarmed Combat: Elbow to the ribs
  18. Unarmed: How to defend against daggers
  19. Leadership: Giving your teammates instructions
  • Andaris: Waterstreet
  • Waterstreet: Grannie Anne's bookshop
  • Andaris: Secret tunnel between Waterstreet and the Blacksmith's arms
  • Andaris: The Barracks
  • Yrmellyn Cole: Painter fallen on hard times
  • Yrmellyn Cole: Does not shut up
  • Yrmellyn Cole: Childhood
  • Yrmellyn Cole: Wants to make alchemical paint
  • Yrmellyn Cole: Has now a new apprentice
  • Yrmellyn Cole: Owes Saeri a painting
  • Yrmellyn Cole: Likes to use seduction during negotiations
Fame: I would assume positive
Collaboration: Naturally
Magic EXP: nope)
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Review Request 2.1.1

Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2017 9:15 pm
by Noth
Rewards Requested
Thread Name: His Guidance
City/Area: Etzos Countryside
Notes/Warnings: Violent monster attack.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Stealth: Staying Near the Edge of a Fight Keeps you Hidden
Stealth: Staying Away from Firelight
Ranged: Firing On a Target to Distract it

Loot: Reviewer's Discretion.

Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes. Mal was taking part in this thread with me, but eventually it fell into disuse, and I finally decided to just go ahead and submit it as it is with a minor tweak at the end to bring it to a close. That means it does end rather sharply, and for that I apologize, but I simply couldn't think of anything else to do with it.
Magic EXP: N/A


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Review Request 2.1.1

Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2017 5:47 pm
by Zip
Rewards Requested
Thread Name: I Killed A Dolphin Once
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Girl-on-pony violence. A set of testicles just barely saved by dream logic.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Psychology: Playing The Patient
Deception: Downplaying Your Role in Animal Abuse
Unarmed Combat: Head Stomps
Intimidation: Using Ironic Echos As a Prelude to Murder

PC - Aeon
Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Only my dignity
Fame: Reviewer's discretion -_-
Collaboration: Yes. Aeon hasn't been on in a month, just clearing up an old thread.
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.1

Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 6:19 pm
by Aeodan
Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Meeting Duke Tristan
City/Area: Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: Nerdy excitement
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Knowing what to call nobility
Etiquette: Being polite in the presence of nobility
Persuasion: Using logic to persuade someone to do what you want
Rhetoric: Using dramatic pauses and phrases to enhance your point

Ayla Venora: Tristan's daughter
Tristan Venora: Duke of Oakleigh
Tristan Venora: Has a daughter
Tristan Venora: Excited about the Jourkadri

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No?
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No

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