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Alistair
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Thread Name: Finally Here
Fridgar
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alistair: Wants to raise your child
Alistair: Doesn't think you should reveal
Alistair: Isn't fully revealed
Alistair: Has met too many immortals
Alistair: Would give up his revelation and stay human to stay with you
Location: Temple of Thetros
Temple of Thetros: Beautiful
Temple of Thetros: Calming

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Alistair
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Location: Temple of Thetros
Temple of Thetros: Beautiful
Temple of Thetros: Calming
Fridgar: Will Have A Child With You
Fridgar: Not Going to Reveal
Fridgar: Yours Forever

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thread Name: Joining the Circle (Memory Thread)
City/Area: Near Lake Rea, Ne’Haer
Notes/Warnings: No.
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge (6):
  • Unarmed Combat (Capoeira): Music to fight by
  • Unarmed Combat (Capoeira): Basic stance: ginga
  • Unarmed Combat (Capoeira): Defensive move: cocorinha
  • Unarmed Combat (Capoeira): Defensive move: esquiva
  • Endurance: Practicing even when disappointed
  • Discipline: Practicing to get a move right
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • [NPC] Traek: Your father
  • [NPC] Traek: Can play the drums
  • [NPC] Traek: Can fight like that?
  • [NPC] Yarik: Your father’s cousin
  • [NPC] Yarik: Teaches unarmed combat
  • [NPC] Yarik: Taught you
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: U’Frek, prayer, though it was not self-initiated so much as participation.
Collaboration: Nope. It’s a solo.
Magic EXP: No.
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Sintih
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Thread Name: Protecting DOOR
City/Area: Oakleigh Estate, Oakleigh, Eastern Settlements, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Atolini:
Fletching; Concept Design Before Fabrication
Business Management; Offering Trade Skills To Family
Stealth; Listening in on conversations behind a door
Discipline; Holding ones tongue
Discipline; Going Along With Choices You Dont Agree with
Etiquette; Animals/Riff Raff Belong Outside

Tristan; Friendly
Tristan; Doesnt Mind Her Shinanigans
Tristan; Makes Hasty Decisions
Tristan; His Safety Worries Her
Tristan: Her brother
Sintih; Upstart
Sintih; Sell Sword
Sintih; Untrustworthy
Sintih; Has Cool Eyes
Location: Oakleigh
Location: Oakleigh Estate

Tristan:
Etiquette: Offer your guests something to eat and drink
Etiquette: Don’t interrupt people when they are speaking, even if you are bored
Interrogation: Interrogating a potential employee
Politics: If you are a politician, it’s a good idea to actually know something about politics
Politics: Dukes aren’t the only ones that are busy!
Politics: Loyalty is important
Politics: Consider other people’s opinion before making an important decision
Leadership: Troops need a good commander
Deception: Keep a few things to yourself until you are sure you can trust somebody

Sintih: Received my cloak and my painting
Sintih: Eidisi
Sintih: Has cool eyes
Sintih: Used to be a member of the Iron Hand
Sintih: Tactician
Sintih: My new employee
Sinra Khan: Sintih’s employer
Sinra Khan: Wants to help me
Sinra Khan: Recommended Sintih
Sinra Khan: Mysterious
Sinra Khan: Not a noble or an influential merchant
Sinra Khan: Watched “A Royal Tragedy”
Atolini: My sister
Atolini: Likes to do archery and go riding
Atolini: A fletcher
Atolini: Agrees that Sintih has cool eyes
Listening at the door: A fun pastime

Sintih:
Deception: I work for myself under another name
Deception: Tell them what they want to hear
Tactics: Know the entrances to a place
Tactics: An army requires a commander
Tactics: A commander requires an army
Etiquette: Proper conduct when being introduced to a lady
Etiquette: Keeping your personal thoughts to yourself
Etiquette: Murdering little sisters is not a solution
Politics: Give them an option that makes it seem like they're in charge

Rynmere: Eastern Settlements: Oakleigh
Rynmere: Eastern Settlements: Oakleigh Estate
Sintih: I'm Sinra Khan
Sintih: Sinra Khan sent a letter to Tristan
Sintih: Sinra Khan enjoys Tristan's work in the arts
Hannah: Likes your cloak
Hannah: Works for Tristan
Tristan: Has a daughter, Ayla
Tristan: Duke of Oakleigh
Tristan: Not quite yet the duke he could be
Tristan: His office is his garden?
Tristan: Offered you food and drink
Tristan: An adult or a child?
Tristan: Knows Kylar
Tristan: Understand why you left the Iron Hand
Tristan: Likes you
Tristan: Hired you
Lianna: Bodyguard and Actress
Atolini: Has an annoying voice
Atolini: Spoiled noble brat
Atolini: Tristan's Sister
Atolini: Doesn't know how to behave
Atolini: Listens at doors
Atolini: Thinks too highly of her Venoran soldiers
Atolini: Thinks you have cool eyes
Aelig: Keeps throwing Chaos your way

Loot: Letter from Sinra Khan for Tristan?
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: A prayer to Aelig for Sintih?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Alistair
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Thread Name: Daudra Dura II
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Very mature
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Psychology: Self-actualization
Psychology: Rationality vs. Hopefulness
Psychology: Strife creates wisdom
Psychology: Wisdom creates greatness
Discipline: Tolerating horrors
Discipline: Acting faithful among depravity

Lotharen Horde: Brutal
Lotharen Horde: Ruthless
Lotharen Horde: Astronomically destructive
Ralaith: Offers wisdom among chaos

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: N/A
Devotion: Ralaith: +10 (Become a Philosopher), +1 Pray to Ralaith
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Zana
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Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Living a libertine lifestyle.
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Thread Name: Knowledge is Power
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mature themes, there's a FTB in the middle.
Rewards Requested: Zana
Skill Knowledge (8 knowledge maximum)
Intelligence: Using mortalborn abilities as a means of intelligence gathering
Intelligence: Gathering intelligence as a prostitute
Intelligence: Types of information
Intelligence: Seemingly mundane information can be useful
Investigation: Sometimes, you don't need to ask questions, just let them talk
Investigation: Steer a conversation, don't direct it
Investigation: Using minor details to create a scandal
Investigation: Finding out about someone from a third party.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: Nope
Devotion:
Collaboration: Yes, with Theo
Magic EXP: No.
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Theo Nji'Ryn
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Profession: Whatever the Whim
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Thread Name: Knowledge is Power
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mature themes, there's a FTB in the middle.
Rewards Requested: Theo
Skill Knowledge (8 knowledge maximum)
Discipline: Maintaining focus until you choose not to
Intelligence: Use information gathered by the whores you are handler for
Intelligence: Identify types of information
Intelligence: Potential uses for mundane information
Intelligence: Information on wives and lovers is relevant
Intelligence: Using information for slander, or to increase business
Investigation: Look for patterns in behavior
Investigation: Identify "tells" and ascertain what they mean.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: Nope
Devotion: Nope
Collaboration: Yes, with Zana
Magic EXP: No.
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Arlo Creede
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Profession: Traveler
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Thread Name: A (not so) Well Kept Secret
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: None
Rewards Requested: Vega
Skill Knowledge
Carpentry: Basics of carving
Fletching: Basics of arrow creation
Hunting: When following tracks, follow the most obvious.
Hunting: Distinguishing old and new tracks
Medicine: Cleaning wounds


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Sliced finger. Will heal in 10 trials.
Fame: Nope
Devotion:
Collaboration: Yes, with Arlo
Magic EXP: No.
Rewards Requested: Arlo
Skill Knowledge
Endurance: Maintaining difficult movement
Endurance: The sting of medical care
Hunting: Following someone from a distance.
Persuasion: Being the voice of reason to an angry (irrational) woman
Stealth: Following behind quietly.
Strength: Pulling a cart across rough terrain
Storytelling: Embellishing a tale
Storytelling: Fabricating a story from beginning to end

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: Nope
Devotion:
Collaboration: Yes, with Vega
Magic EXP: No.
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Arlo Creede
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Thread Name: There's no place like home
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Rewards Requested: Vega
Skill Knowledge
Animal Husbandry: Horse: Gentle tone of voice to calm animals
Animal Husbandry: Horse: Talk to them, keep physical contact.
Animal Husbandry: Horse: Horses don't like to be rushed.
Animal Husbandry: Horse: Bits against teeth can be painful
Animal Training: Horse: Blow in their noses
Animal Training: Horse: Ears are used to communicate
Animal Training: Horse: Careful if ears are down flat
Animal Training: Horse: Techniques to make saddling easier
Mount: Horse: Basics of a saddle
Mount: Horse: Putting on a girth strap
Mount: Horse: Tendency to hold breath whilst saddling up
Mount: Horse: Putting in the bit and reins

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping:
Fame: Nope
Devotion:
Collaboration: Yes, with Arlo
Magic EXP: No.
Rewards Requested: Arlo
Skill Knowledge
Animal Husbandry: Horse: Gentle tone of voice to calm animals
Animal Husbandry: Horse: Talk to them, keep physical contact.
Animal Husbandry: Horse: Horses don't like to be rushed.
Animal Husbandry: Horse: Bits against teeth can be painful
Animal Training: Horse: Blow in their noses
Animal Training: Horse: Ears are used to communicate
Animal Training: Horse: Careful if ears are down flat
Animal Training: Horse: Techniques to make saddling easier
Mount: Horse: Basics of a saddle
Mount: Horse: Putting on a girth strap
Mount: Horse: Tendency to hold breath whilst saddling up
Mount: Horse: Putting in the bit and reins


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: Nope
Devotion:
Collaboration: Yes, with Vega
Magic EXP: No.
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Arlo Creede
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Too many combat knowledges to go to waste here :)
Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Retribution
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: None
Rewards Requested: Vega
Skill Knowledge
Blades: Sword: Prepare for attack
Blades: Sword: Maintain stance in the face of multiple opponents
Blade: Sword: Relaxed and ready stance
Blades: Sword: Swing from the hips
Endurance: Being struck by a mace.
Detection: Spotting small details in a clearing
Hunting: Sometimes, there are too many tracks to make sense
Ranged Weapon: Bow: Aiming into a group
Ranged Weapon: Bow: Wait until you're calm, if you can
Stealth: Moving silently through the woods
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Punch in the face


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruised, battered, broken rib, etc. Will heal properly in 20 trials
Fame: Killed a bandit x 4
Devotion:
Collaboration: Yes, with Arlo
Magic EXP: No.
Rewards Requested: Arlo
Skill Knowledge
Hunting: Following from a distance.
Ranged Weapon: Bow: Throat shots require careful aiming
Ranged Weapon: Bow: Hard to work with someone who is face to face
Ranged Weapon: Bow: Breathing through the shot
Ranged Weapon: Bow: Choosing vital targets
Medicine: Stitching wounds
Stealth: Keeping hidden in the undergrowth
Stealth: Remain hidden in combat
Tactics: Distractions are excellent weapons
Tactics: Pick off from the outskirts

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: Killed a bandit x 2, refused a bounty, told the authorities
Devotion:
Collaboration: Yes, with Vega
Magic EXP: No.
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Edalene
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Profession: Seeker
Renown: 39
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Thread Name: I've Got Plenty of Time
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Eda angsty af.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meditation: Prayer as Self Reflection
Psychology: Emotional Effects of Past Trauma
Teaching: Passing On Lessons of Love

Location: The Temple of Worship (Viden)
Aeodan: Warm Tea and Quiet
Narav: Passion and Fire

Loot: -5gn
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Devotion: Yes, for Ralaith. +1 Pray to Ralaith, +2 Worship Ralaith in a Temple, +5 Leave a Gold Offering in his Temple, +2 Pray For Another You Love From Afar In One Of His Temples, +2 Tell Others About Your Mistakes, +2 Share Wisdom With A Stranger, +3 Dedicate a Secret Love for Ralaith
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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