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Delta
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: You're Safe Now
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Darker, aftermath tale following abuse
Requested Rewards:

Delta
  • Skill Knowledge:
    • Discipline: Living with Guilt
      Discipline: Shattered Morals
      Endurance: Mistaking Pain for Dying
      Endurance: Walking Despite the Pain
      Medicine: Aftercare
      Psychology: Fear is a Powerful Motivator
  • Non-Skill Knowledge:
    • Lakia: Always There
      Lakia: Protects Me

Lakia
  • Skill Knowledge:
    • Discipline: Swallow Pride for the Sake of Another
      Endurance: Guilt of Causing Another's Suffering
      Medicine: Immediate Care Following an Attack
      Medicine: Resuscitation
      Strength: Supporting Another's Weight
  • Non-Skill Knowledge:
    • Delta: Attacked and Beaten
      Delta: Arsonist
      Delta: Needs Help
      Delta: Potentially Suicidal
      Delta: Witness to a Murder
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Negative Delta (Arsonist)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Chrien's Night, Prankster's Delight
City/Area: Scalvoris Harbor
Notes/Warnings: A thread that we were really excited about but piddled out in the end, this was a Scalvoris Holiday. Tio is the best!

Requested Rewards:
Tio Silver
Knowledge:
Acting: Pretending to be an old man
Deception: Pretending to be an old man
Deception: The false wooden shark
Deception: Lying about a sea monster
Deception: Pulling off a prank
Deception: Don't give the game away
Deception: Simulating movement in fake animals
Deception: When the gig is up, retreat!
Deception: Knowing when to stay silent

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
Kali'rial
Knowledge:
Detection: Spotting an abnormality in your surroundings
Detection: Taking note of strange animal activity
Leadership: Taking control of the situation, physically if required
Ranged Weapon (Shortbow): Not aiming to kill, just to scare
Ranged Weapon (Shortbow): Aiming to kill
Hunting: Gauging your prey for the best target
Hunting: Knowing the best way to kill the undead
Hunting: Listening for subtleties that can give you an advantage

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

Pash Raj'oriq
Knowledge:
Detection: Noticing a woman's intentions
Detection: Noticing the signs of pursuit
Detection: The feeling of tangled steering
Discipline: Resisting the wiles of your woman
Discipline: Keeping focused in times of danger
Seafaring: Shoving off from the dock
Seafaring: Raising the mainsail
Seafaring: Adjusting the jib
Seafaring: Attempting an escape from pursuit

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

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Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Humble Pie
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge: (6 posts = 11 knowledge)
Carpentry: Letting the wood speak for itself
Carpentry: Decoration can be too much
Detection: Sounds of people approaching camp
Socialization: Sitting around a campfire, sharing stories
Sociology: Biqaj society and naming traditions

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes


Arlo Creede

Knowledge: (6 posts = 11 knowledge)
Cooking: Root vegetable soup
Cooking: Add venison to a good broth
Cooking: Serve hot bread with thick soup in cold.
Cooking: Slow cooking adds depth of flavour
Detection: Sounds of people approaching camp
Discipline: Not assuming the worst
Investigation: Getting to the heart of a matter
Investigation: Repeat key questions
Investigation: Ensure understanding by questioning.
Socialization: Sitting around a campfire, sharing stories
Sociology: Biqaj society and naming traditions

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Promises of the Season's Turning
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nope. Qit'ria is also part of this thread! Sorry. We just wanted to clear out our thread list and went ahead and submitted for review.

Requested Rewards:
Pash Raj'oriq
Skill Knowledge:
Endurance: Playing music in the heat
Endurance: Sitting still in direct Saun sunlight
Field Craft: Dressing for the hot cycle temperatures
Lute: Creating an atmosphere of cool relaxation
Lute: Knowing when the performance is over
Linguistics: Finding meaning of unknown words through inference
Linguistics: Trying out new words on an accepting audience
Socialization: Inviting a crowd no matter the weather
Socialization: Focusing on your audience no matter how small

Non-Skill Knowledges:
PC: Qit'ria
PC: Qit'ria: Sev'ryn Huntress

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion! (Public performance, etc.)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Kali'rial
Skill Knowledge:
Linguistics: Xanthean - translating common to your native tongue
Socialisation: Smoothing the situation with cultural kinship

Non-Skill Knowledges:
PC: Qit'ria
PC: Qit'ria: Sev'ryn Huntress

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Qit'ria
Skill Knowledge:
Intimidation: Call them dumb
Intimidation: Make loud noises
Cooking: Asparagus isn't poisonous
Intimidation: Make demands
Cooking: Ghost Broccoli (Cauliflower) can be skewered and roasted
Meditation: Calm the agitated mind with music
Cooking: Broccoli goes well with garlic and butter
Leadership: Tell compatriots to leave lesser hunters home

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Kali'rial: Daughter of Desnind and the Great Mother Moseke
Pash: Biqaj musician
Pash: Reminds me of the simple boy back home
Pash Songswimmer: Mate to Kali'rial
Xanthean: ìsote = journey
Xanthean: áidà = love/heart
Xanthean: Ibiti sngä’ikrr = good hunting.
Offer from Kali: To hunt together in nearby wood
Tip from Pash: Start in Sweetvine, not Scaltoth
Pash: Can handle himself
Location: Cally's does amazing food but is expensive and fancy
Location: Knights' Rest Inn is good for the nel
Scaltoth Jungle: Exists because of Faldrass Volcano
Scalvoris: Has interesting sands

Loot:
-2 CN - Ghost broccoli
-1 SN - Tip to Pash
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Run Away With Me Now
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Requested Rewards:
Pash Raj'oriq
Skill Knowledge:
Caregiving: Comforting one in sorrow when also hurting
Detection: Knowing when there's more on her mind
Linguistics: Words of love's promises in any tongue
Linguistics: Xanthean: Dabi uaya means promised one
Rhetoric: Accepting a proposal! Yes!
Rhetoric: Promising yourself to another
Sociology: Engagement across cultures
Sociology: Ceremony optional

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Kali'rial: Proposed to you
Kali'rial: Put a ring on it

Loot: One Egilrun glass/yellow dragon wood ring. A fiancée!
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Kali'rial
Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Pushing back the pain and moving on
Discipline: Finding your courage to make a move
Navigation: Leading another through the jungle
Rhetoric: You can be an orphan even as an adult
Sociology: Sharing your cultures bonding ritual
Sociology: Asking someone to marry you—eventually

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Pash Raj'oriq: Said qes!
Pash Raj'oriq: Already had commitment plans

Loot: One Egilrun glass/yellow dragon wood ring. A fiancé.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Caius Gawyne
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Profession: Arbitrary Lord
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Exigent Expectations
City/Area: Astedia, Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nope. Just noble banter.

Requested Rewards:
Xander Andaris
Skill Knowledge:
Politics: Use the correct second name
Politics: Find some relatable ground
Politics: Try not to be too radical
Politics: Convey an idea without words
Politics: Be clear on your beliefs
Etiquette: Show interest into another's life
Etiquette: Offer comfortable seating to guests
Etiquette: Extend follow up invitations
Intelligence: Gather information through direct questions
Intelligence: Does not always have to be covert
Intelligence: Make connections
Intelligence: Give a little get a little

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Caius Gawyne
Skill Knowledge:
Endurance: Sometimes it's alright to power nap
Endurance: Putting on your noble face after a bit of a beating
Etiquitte: Talking about the weather
Etiquette: Unapologetically crass
Intelligence: Asking personal questions
Intelligence: Pushing past the surface value
Politics: Establishing common ground
Politics: Know your Houses
Politics: Pursuing the whole picture, the grander picture
Politics: Is it worth fighting for?
Rhetoric: Sword talk
Rhetoric: On love and marriage

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Vega
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Posts: 2304
Joined: Sun Jan 08, 2017 5:43 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Dweeb
Renown: 2391
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Preparations
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Vega is preparing for a date. It is not pretty. ....
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Hair treaments
Cosmetology: The importance of appropriate underwear
Cosmetology: Basic make up techniques
Cosmetology: Emphasize one feature only
Cosmetology: How to apply blush
Etiquette: Shop assistants often call you "madam". They mean you.


Loot: Money deducted from ledger. Items added.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
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word count: 72
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Max
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Enemy of My Enemy
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language and Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Max:
Blades: Slitting a Throat
Deception: Switching Sides
Deception: Manipulating Real Emotions to Escape Wrath
Intimidation: Taking a Hostage with a Blade
Stealth: Hiding in Plain Sight
Stealth: Creating a Distraction to Make a Getaway
Unarmed Combat: The Element of Surprise
Unarmed Combat: Easiest When Attacking from Behind
Unarmed Combat: Sending an Enemy Down with a Foot
Merces: Intended to Kill You
Merces: Controls Earth, Wind, and Fire

Merces:
Defiance: Guardian
Defiance: Conflagration
Defiance: Coaxing a Bonfire into a Pyre
Defiance: Guardians are Protective
Defiance: Wind No Longer Touches Me
Intimidation: Wielding the Elements to Strike Fear in the Enemy
Unarmed Combat: Leading with a Punch
Unarmed Combat: Kick Them When They're Down
Max: Consorted with Thieves
Max: I Hate You, I Love You

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Possibly.
Fame: Negative for both characters. (Aiding thieves, murder, etc.)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes, for Merces.
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Padraig
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Renown: 939
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Tipping Point
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Considering the functionality and appropriateness of furniture
Caregiving: Fostering Independence
Caregiving: Names, and identity, are important to self.
Caregiving: Reassuring an expectant father-to-be
Design: Planning a nursery
Design: Considering a theme for a room
Investigation: Putting together clues to understand when a pregnancy was an illusion
Investigation: Identifying differences, and similarities
Sociology: Cultural significance of relatives' titles


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes


Padraig

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Considering the functionality and appropriateness of furniture
Caregiving: Fostering Independence
Caregiving: Names, and identity, are important to self.
Caregiving: Reassuring an expectant mother-to-be
Investigation: Putting together clues to understand when a pregnancy was an illusion
Investigation: Identifying differences, and similarities
Leadership: Identify the bottom line in a situation
Leadership: Be clear when things are getting over complicated
Sociology: Cultural significance of relatives' titles


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2016 12:12 pm
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Profession: Fanatical Philanthropist
Renown: 3225
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: An Early Wedding Gift
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Nir'wei

Knowledge:
nvestigation: Using known interests to hazard a profession.
Investigation: Asking around the workplace after a colleague.
Investigation: Listen to both questions and answers to ensure you get the full picture.
Investigation: Listening to conversation can lead to clues for gifts.
Investigation: Use invisible animals to gather information.
Investigation: Find people by surname.
Investigation: People speak more honestly when they think they're alone.
Animal Husbandry: Managing potential attachment issues.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: +14 (gift 7 x gifts!)
Collaboration: Yes


Padraig

Knowledge:
Etiquette: Stepping outside is good when staying in might be a problem.
Investigation: Recognizing when someone doesn't fit in by their voice
Leadership: Stating consequences to actions clearly
Leadership: Lead by example
Logistics: When planning an expedition, double check everything

Loot: Oh'deer corpses
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes


Faith

Knowledge:
Etiquette: Remain formal when in work
Etiquette: Say thank you for a gift

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: (+2) Healed Nir'wei
Collaboration: Yes
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