Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Illustration of a Map
Notes/Warnings: Job thread.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Investigation: Systematic observation of an object from several sides
Investigation: Finding out people’s opinions by showing them examples
Intelligence: Drawing conclusions by excluding unlikely options
Tactics: Shouting out for help in order to not take unnecessary risks
Painting: Small scale map illustrations
Painting: Speed-painting

Collaboration: No

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: The Mad Mapper
City/Area: Ne’haer 717
Notes/Warnings: Job thread.
Requested Rewards:
Painting: Preparations for miniature portraits
Painting: Choosing the appropriate material to paint on
Painting: Reaching into your intuition for imaginary motifs
Investigation: Asking for the identity of a visitor before unlocking the door
Tactics: Make them shup up by adding your stuff to their own secrets
Negotiation: Accepting the right price when people know it

Collaboration: No

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Deep in the stacks
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill:
Medicine: lime juice prevents scurvy
Medicine: dislocated joints
Logistics: supplying a long voyage
Logistics: choosing foods that keep
Research: comparing books to find matches
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: go for the tendons

Non-skill
Biology: hinge joints
Biology: ball and socket joints
Biology: tendons join muscle to bone
Biology: muscles move body parts
Biology: tendons can be torn

Loot: 20 gn Odd job payment)
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Serpines and Felines
City/Area: The Cut, outside Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Kheledzan: Pay attention to a mount's instincts
Kheledzan: Remove equipment at night
Scythe: Catching an enemy midair
Tactics: Tricking enemies towards an ally
Serpents Hood: Avoid getting swarmed
Enduring Scales: Breaking a fall

The Cut: Dangerous off the path
The Cut - Fauna: Giant cat packs
Sivan - Likes to eat enemies in battle

Injuries/Overstepping: Slight concussion from headbutting a cat into a wall
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: The Blighted Thicket: Part 2
City/Area: Quacia, the Outskirts
Notes/Warnings: Probably boring; more magical theorizing. Combat was a bit brief, sowwy.
Requested Rewards:

Alistair
Knowledge:
Transmutation: Using Shapecraft on wooden entities to turn their forms against them
Transmutation: Ether Missiles can corrode wood; are powerful against the Creep
Transmutation: Shapecrafting to invert a structure
Rupturing: Predator's Purview: Using scrying to extend one's Rupturing range

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Ali killed lots of Ferahorns, a Tree, and a Creepheart. I'd say +15 - also specified that he'd tell people in Quacia about his exploits and new strategies.

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes - for Transmutation, as he found new ways to utilize both Ether Missiles and Shapecraft, against the Creep.
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: [Treth] Planting Trial
City/Area: Treth, Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Old job thread. This thread is eligible for holiday rewards.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Caregiving: schedules keep mothers who are raising infants sane

Medicine; Carrier Oil: Avocado oil comes from the fruit of the avocado tree. It is ideal for treating irritable skin conditions such as psoriasis and eczema, and it helps with older, mature skin that has thinned with age. Since it is thicker than many other types of carrier oils, it is a good carrier oil for massages. If need be, it can be thinned with another carrier oil such as olive oil or sweet almond oil.

Medicine; Carrier Oil: Grapeseed oil is extracted from the seeds of grapes. It can be used for both cooking and cosmetics as well as a carrier oil for essential oils. It also has antiseptic properties and is a mild astringent, making it a good carrier oil for acne-prone skin or oily skin. And unlike some oils, it is not greasy.

Medicine; Carrier Oil: Moringa oil is extracted from the seeds of the Moringa Oleifera tree. The Moringa Oleifera tree is also known as the drumstick or horseradish tree. This oil is very good for helping with skin conditions such as eczema, psoriasis and rosacea. It also has anti-inflammatory properties, making it good for helping to ease the pain of arthritis. When combined with the right essential oil, this benefit extends to easing other kinds of joint pain as well. Moringa oil is also able to help reduce the inflammation in scars, and speed up their healing process.

Medicine; Carrier Oil: Apricot kernel oil is extracted from the kernels or seeds of apricots. It is a light, gentle oil that has a slight nutty aroma. This oil has properties and uses that are similar to sweet almond oil. It can be used as a massage oil because it makes the skin soft and supple, and does not leave any greasy residue behind. Apricot kernel oil has excellent anti-inflammatory properties. Since it isn't greasy, this oil is good for use on dry, irritated, or sensitive skin.

Medicine; Carrier Oil: Castor oil is extracted from the seeds of the castor bean plant. By itself, this oil is good for treating constipation, ailments of the skin, and improving the health of your hair. Using castor oil to dilute essential oils that have similar effects will enhance the effects of the essential oil, making your remedy even stronger. Castor oil is a natural anti-inflammatory which makes it great for easing the pain of aching joints and muscles. Rubbing a few drops into the afflicted area once every seven trials or so will allow the anti-inflammatory components in the oil to reduce the swelling and inflammation. This oil is also good for healing skin infections, and treating sunburns.

Non Skill Knowledges

NPC: Tarin
Tarin: is a middle aged farmer
Tarin: her husband died last Cylus
Tarin: lost her only son in the war in 716

Loot: +2 Bonus Skill Points, and Free Item: 1/3 Acre of land for harvesting crops or caring for farm animals given to you by the farmer you help, should you wish to use it now or later. This land cannot be sold or given away and may only be used for agricultural purposes.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Possibly slight (5) or small (10) for creating a trial her students will remember, and volunteering her time (and that of her class) to help out a farmer in need.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Firelit Revel
City/Area: Yaralon, Bastards Grove
Notes/Warnings: Some funky boxcodes, lots of magic
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Defiance: Dancing with elements to encourage them.
Defiance: When one element goes awry.
Defiance: Setting one element against another.
Defiance: Finding a Kin Element
Dancing: Going with the flow of surrounding events.
Discipline: Resisting the lure of fire's destructive influence.

Loot: No just city wages for sorceress jobbo
Injuries/Overstepping: Moderate Overstepping. Fire is angry at her. Reviewer's discretion. I suggest a mutation related to Fire's wrath at her.
Renown: Don't think anybody noticed she burned down a small copse... or did they? Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, Level-up Defiance. No xp in defiance because she's already maxed novice.
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Spar for the Coarse - viewtopic.php?f=66&t=13753&start=10
City/Area: Yaralon, near Temple of Raskalarn
Notes/Warnings: Unarmed moves!!! Scandalous. Also... This thread has already been graded by another. I'm just wanting some knowledge. Don't even have to give it a good read.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Unarmed Combat (Striking): Headbutt.
Unarmed Combat (Grappling): Invitation to bear hug.
Unarmed Combat (Striking): Flirting like a true Yari
Ranged (Longbow): Knock, aim, fire.
Ranged (Longbow): Kiting an enemy
Ranged (Longbow): Peppering two clods with arrows.
Running: Closing distance after shooting the opponent.
Acrobatics: Dodging and weaving between two enemies.
Bludgeon (Mace): Repeated downward blows, powered by the weight of the weapon
Tactics: Pitting two opponents against one another

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Maybe a bit bruised around the ribs.
Renown: Already awarded
Collaboration: Yes but already awarded
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Ravage, Revolt, Retribution. - viewtopic.php?f=66&t=15947&p=106644#p106644
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Meh not really. Maybe a bit boring or quick.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Bludgeon (Mace): Using the mace as a wrecking instrument.
Bludgeon (Mace): Breaking down barriers, while using the mace as a battering ram.
Bludgeon: (Mace): Hanging Guard
Acrobatics: Sidestepping works to reposition and disorient your opponent. Try it sometime.
Endurance: Suffering a dislocated shoulder.
Surgery: Setting a dislocated shoulder.

Loot: Merc company wages. City mod will take care maybe.
Injuries/Overstepping: Dislocated shoulder that she set herself. Will likely be out of commission for a couple ten trials.
Renown: 5-10 for losing a duel to a hidden expert of cane fighting.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: A thief of poor proportions
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings:

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Disguise: tucking hair into your shirt
Stealth: Ducking under windows to stay out of sight
Stealth: Exerting oneself without making noise
Strength: Lifting a heavy table
Hone: Easier to make powerful runes if they last a short amount of time

Bloood Tie: I’m drawn to the same direction every day

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: maybe light from using more ether than normal?
Renown: 5 stealing a table

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, experimenting with increased power and learning more about her abilities
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