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Alistair
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Thread Name: Naming Earth
Robin
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades: Longsword: a balanced blade
Blades: Daggers: Swipe
Blades: Daggers: Thrust
Acrobatics: Spinning
Acrobatics: Jumping
Blades: Daggers: Defensive Hold
Blades: Daggers: Offensive Hold
Blades: Longsword: Offensive Hold
Blades: Longsword: Parry
Blades: Daggers: Parry
Defiance: Earth, Kin Element
Defiance: Caress

Loot: Masterwork Longsword
Injuries/Overstepping: Slit palm, will heal in several trials
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
Alistair
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Teaching: Being firm
Teaching: Being honest
Teaching: Seeing the weaknesses in someone's form
Polearms: Spear - Spinning disarm
Polearms: Spear - Side-stepping after a disarm
Tactics: Delegating a proper selection of weapons
Defiance: Kin Element Ritual

Loot: -1 Masterwork Longsword
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: +1 General Good Deed (Teaching Robin), +2 Give A Gift
Devotion: Ralaith - Pray to Ralaith +1, Teach about Ralaith +2, Teach someone how to survive +2, Share wisdom with a stranger +2, Dedicate a break to a stranger +2
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Lynessa
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Race: Mer
Profession: Thunder Priestess
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Thread Name: Rising Dawn
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge (6):
  • Unarmed Combat: Full Mount Position
  • Unarmed Combat: Importance of Defending Against a Mounted Opponent
  • Unarmed Combat: Escaping from a Full Mount
  • Detection: Disapproval from Sister Mariden
  • Deception: Being Submissive Towards a Higher Authority
  • Deception: Convincing yourself that you did the right thing
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • [NPC] Sister Mariden: Severe Looking
  • [NPC] Sister Mariden: Does Not Like You
  • [NPC] Leth: Flusters Easily
  • [NPC] Leth: Fussy Mother Hen
  • [NPC] Leth: Far Too Kind
  • [NPC] Leth: May Thinks You're a Monster
  • Rharne: A New Faction Rising?
  • Rharne: Aukaris are Targeted
  • Thunder Priestess: Tasked to Investigate the Mysterious Faction
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: Ilaren, maybe? For accepting a mission as a Thunder Priestess?
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: No.
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word count: 139
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Veyre
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Posts: 54
Joined: Thu Jun 29, 2017 9:54 am
Race: Frog Person
Profession: Healer & Courtesan
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Thread Name: The Fountain of Youth
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
  • Detection: Reverence and Conviction When Telling a True Story
  • Acting: Pretend to Buy a Drink to be Inconspicuous
  • Acting: Feigning Excitement
  • Acting: Sound Surer than You Feel
  • Stealth: Hiding Behind a Corner
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • Scaltoth Jungle: Creatures like No One had Ever Seen
  • Scaltoth Jungle: Plants like No One had Ever Seen
  • Scaltoth Jungle: Slippery Tribes with Poison Darts
  • Scaltoth Jungle: Magical Water?
  • Tio: Lets Her Tag Along
  • Pash: A Biqaj Bard
  • Pash: Has Attention-Grabbing Eyes
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yup
Magic EXP: No.
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word count: 114
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Padraig
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Joined: Mon Oct 03, 2016 3:22 pm
Race: Mixed Race
Renown: 939
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Thread Name: Ganging Aft A'Glae
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Faith

Skill Knowledge (6 posts: 11 maximum)
Acting: Helpless maiden
Acting: Scary person
Deception: Speak the truth where you can
Deception: Consider how you deliver your words
Detection: Spotting signs of fear
Detection: Minor changes in body movement
Intimidation: Focus on pre-existing fears
Tactics: Don't overdo it
Tactics: Know when to keep quiet
Unarmed Combat: Use the element of surprise
Unarmed Combat: Use what you can from your surroundings

Loot: This is a bounty here please can we have the 250gn reward. Thanks!
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: Positive: We captured 2 pirates and unearthed a major plot. Reviewer's discretion.
Devotion: Vri: +1 (pray to Vri)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
Padraig

Skill Knowledge (6 posts: 11 maximum)
Acting: A rough pirate type.
Acting: Changing your voice
Acting: Embrace your role
Blades: Sword: Use your fancy weapon as a distraction
Blades: Sword: Utilizing the element of surprise
Intimidation: Using a rough tone of voice to scare people
Intimidation: Stating the rules from the outset
Intimidation: Not backing down
Intimidation: Refuse to give in to demands
Intimidation: Back up demands with a weapon
Tactics: Tactics on the fly can be tricky

Loot: Loot: This is a bounty here please can we have the 250gn reward. Thanks!
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame:
Devotion: Qylios: +3 (act of Courage), +2 (set an example), +5(victory in battle he led)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
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Alistair
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Profession: Wanderer
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Thread Name: Stakeout, Breakout
Alistair
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Andraska and Freya didn't want to go through with the plot, so I made it into a solo to wrap it up.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth: Stakeout
Stealth: Using rupturing to gain a stealth advantage
Stealth: Hiding among darkness
Stealth: Knocking out a potential threat
Stealth: Hiding an unconscious body to prevent alert
Detection: Searching for something in a high tensity situation

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 93
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Alistair
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Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 6:12 pm
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Profession: Wanderer
Renown: 1000
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Wealth Tier: Tier 10

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Thread Name: If I May
Alistair
City/Area: Sabaissant
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Eh, don't bother. I'm too lazy to think about any.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: +1 General Good Deed (Taking Jericho in), +1 General Good Deed (Looking out for him), +2 Give a Gift - Shelter
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 65
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Alistair
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Thread Name: My Brother, Where Have You Gone?
Alistair
City/Area: Sabaissant
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Politics: Swearing off a dangerous ally
Politics: Alleviating the worries of your allies
Politics: Nepotism in the law
Politics: Strengthening a friendship with a regional rival
Etiquette: Treating a guest properly
Discipline: Cutting off family for pragmatic reasons

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Eh
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 75
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Alistair
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Thread Name: Skins of Thistleweed
Alistair
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
No thank you.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nah
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Alistair
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Posts: 3421
Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 6:12 pm
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Thread Name: Clemency
Alistair
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Negotiation: Commissioning an architectural project

Ymiden: You commissioned a shrine of his
Ymiden: Bringing you towards forgiveness

Loot: -300 GN, Shrine of Ymiden built outside of Aedirn
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: General Good Deed, forgiving someone... General good deed, building a shrine of Ymiden (a good aligned Immortal)? Idk
Devotion: Ymiden: Pray to Ymiden +1, Forgive Someone +2, Establish shrine dedicated to Ymiden +5
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Posts: 1200
Joined: Fri May 05, 2017 5:31 pm
Race: Biqaj
Profession: Tankbard
Renown: 315
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Thread Name: Line in the Sand [Memory Thread]
City/Area: Near Lake Rea, Ne’Haer
Notes/Warnings: Combat sparring. Hugs.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Skill Knowledge:
  • Unarmed Combat (Capoeira): Never stop moving
  • Unarmed Combat (Capoeira): Spinning heel kick: compasso
  • Unarmed Combat (Capoeira): Roundhouse snap kick: martelo
  • Unarmed Combat (Capoeira): Defensive countermove: vingativa
  • Endurance: Getting up after being kicked in the face
  • Discipline: Using music to center yourself
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • [NPC] Torim: Family rival
  • [NPC] Torim: Bigger than you
  • [NPC] Torim: Teacher’s pet because he’s also his son
  • Biqaj Hand to Hand: Advancing through sparring
  • Biqaj Culture: Personal space is optional
  • [NPC] Yarik: Might think you’re a start student one day
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Soreness. Bruises. Nothing worth recording.
Fame: N/A
Devotion: Small prayer to Zanik.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: Nope.
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word count: 143
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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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