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Nauta F'mos Geey
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Thread Name: Stab in the dark.
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: CHILD ABUSE! (I kid)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Discipline: A knife is not a toy!
  • Blade (Daggers): Slash at an opponent's hand to avoid being disarmed
  • Unarmed (Grappling): Grab at the hilt of a weapon to disarm
  • Unarmed (Grappling): Size determines if you can break out of a hold
  • Blade (Daggers): The point is for stabbing
  • Blade (Daggers): An underhanded grip helps against opponents which come too close
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: -
Devotion:-
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Tio Silver
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Thread Name: Taboo Strikes III
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades: Aim for an opening
Blades: Use speed to your advantage against heavy weapons
Blades: Two blades are better than one
Blades: Stabbing with a cutlass
Blades: The knee is a weakness
Tactics: Have someone watch your back in combat
Tactics: Fighting in a pair
Seafaring: Ships need to be kept clean


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Taboo -2 (Breaking the law)
Devotion: +2 Syroa (Conceal your true self)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Robin Stark
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Thread Name: Fire At Will
City/Area: Fields of Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Sparring

Requested Rewards: Aeon
Knowledge:
Blades: Double feint
Teaching: Seeing what your student can do
Teaching: Correcting a student's mistakes
Endurance: Walking while injured
Endurance: Sparring while injured

Robin: Alistair's his mentor
Robin: A mage
Robin: Doesn't use magic all that much

Requested Rewards: Robin
Knowledge:
Blades (Dagger): Feint
Strength: Using Body Weight
Discipline: Determined to Try
Discipline: Not Giving Up
Persuasion: Asking to be Taught

Aeon: A Knight
Aeon: A Hero
Aeon: Magic Wood Hand

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Tio Silver
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Thread Name: Ready For Anything
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Basically just a weapons/armour shopping thread.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades: Testing a Cutlass' balance
Appraisal: Identifying Good Swords
Appraisal: Identifying Good Armour
Appraisal: Masterwork armour isn't made for looks
Persuasion: Politeness is appreciated
Persuasion: Craftsmen like to hear that their work is appreciated.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: None
Magic EXP: None
word count: 71
Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Alistair
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Thread Name: No More Just Desserts
Faith
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nurp
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Menu writing
Business Management: Changing the menu with the season
Business Management: Spending time with each employee
Teaching: Informal settings for teaching
Teaching: Getting students to draw what you describe, rather than write what you say.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nope
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Nope. Just me. Lil 'ole me.
Magic EXP: No
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"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."

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Varthakh
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Thread Name: Challenged
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Fridgar bites someone's leg off
Fridgar
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Nauta F'mos Geey: A cheater
Nauta F'mos Geey: An aukari
Nauta F'mos Geey: A prick
Nauta F'mos Geey: A coward
Nauta F'mos Geey: Is looking after a girl
Nightshade Eld: Birdy
Nightshade Eld: Part Avriel?
Nightshade Eld: Evasive, light combatant
Nightshade Eld: Defeated

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Atavistic Confusion (spent), Moderate dizzyness (3 trials), (all other injuries you can assume healed when fridgar turns back to a Lothar)
Fame: Negative probably, actively worshipping an immortal in Etzos, attacking civilians, maiming in public, use of magic... I guess victory in single combat is positive?
Devotion: Yes, Ilaren +11:
Toast to Ilaren when drinking with others +5
Win a brawl in Ilaren's name +3
Buy a drink for others in Ilaren's name +2
Drink in Ilaren's name +1

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Nightshade Eld
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blunt: A hit to the head
Blunt: A hit to the back of the neck
Blunt: Used for trying to disable a target
Blunt: You need to be strong for it to work
Strength: Massively supplements blunt force strikes
Strength: Hardens the body

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Positive, trying to stop the rampaging 'puppet' in a public place, seen by dozens
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Nauta F'mos Geey
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Flying: Pull wings in for a dive
Medicine: Checking for a pulse
Medicine: Check if a person breaths from the nose
Unarmed (Grappling): Use boiling blood to defend against other's grip
Deception: Leading by example
Palenon: Lightning Punch!
Becoming: Can be a mixture of more than one creature
Rupturing: Blinding portals?

Loot: 2 Uses of spots
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruising to the face
Fame: Yes! I still won the contest against the monster and tried to save Nightshade
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 326
Whenever one finds oneself inclined to bitterness, it is a sign of emotional failure.
-- Bertrand Russell
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Thread Name: Introductions
Faith
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nurp
Requested Rewards: (5 posts = 10 max)
Knowledge:
Business Management: Networking is necessary
Negotiation: Pointing out that all is alright
Negotiation: Clearly stating the terms for which you will act
Persuasion: Trying to persuade against violence
Persuasion: Trying to save someone from themselves.
Socialization: Being in crowded rooms
Socialization: Places with alcohol can have very different "vibes"
Sociology: Healing factions have a unique place in society
Sociology: Uniforms are a means of identification and protection
Sociology: People behave differently when alcohol is involved


Leon Carter: A young lad
Leon Carter: A poor thief
Leon Carter: Wants to be a swordsman
Leon Carter: Doesn't want to be a medic
Leon Carter: Doesn't care about Immortals

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Good deed +1 (Persuading the men not to hurt Leon), Give a gift +2 (Meal), Good Deed +1 (offered him a job)= +4
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 166
"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."

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Aeon
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Joined: Sat Aug 13, 2016 4:16 pm
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Profession: Hero :|
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Thread Name: As Good As New: SLASH
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Really short, just made it for the sake of purchasing some weapons
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A, like I said, all I want is the loot
Loot: +1 Masterwork Adamantite Longsword, Masterwork Beryllium Emerald Dagger, Strain Poison and Roggelond Glands, deducted the cost already
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: Never
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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"A hero is someone who steps up when everyone else backs down"
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Thread Name: Nature
Faith
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Well, it's a bit weird. Faith uses the ability "Genetic Memory (Minor)" in order to have a vision about her birth. She finds out about stuff. I played around with how I wrote it a bit and made the vision section almost dream-like.
Requested Rewards: (solo = 6 knowledge)
Knowledge:
Meditation: Breathing slowly.
Meditation: Can be a form of prayer

Bellinos Ability: Genetic Memory: Shows you visions
Bellinos Ability: Genetic Memory: The person has to be dead
Bellinos Ability: Genetic Memory: Works on people related to you in your past.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame:
Devotion: Vri: 2 x prayers so +2 please
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: No
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"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."

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