Review Requests 2.1.0

[Alistair]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Goodbye Patali
City/Area: Rhar...nah
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Nah
Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Nah
Collaboration: ...Yes
Magic EXP: Nah

[Alistair]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Where Secrets End
City/Area: Rynqueer
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rupturing: Blinking to grab a weapon's hilt for added strength
Rupturing: Using the Nail on a downed opponent
Blades: Longsword - Using rupturing in tandem with the sword
Necromancy: Stitchborn
Necromancy: A Lich's expanded repertoire

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nar
Fame: Naeee
Devotion: Naw
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nay, ser

[Alistair]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Going Home

Fridgar

City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alistair: Your husband
Alistair: Your kindal
Azzas: Your past life
Aedan: Alistair's past life
Alistair Calder: Your love
Fridgar Calder: You
Fridgar: Changing
Fridgar: Doesn't know himself anymore
Temple of Thetros: You married here

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: +10 Get Married to Another PC
Devotion: Thetros: Engage in an act of devotion or compassion towards one of your flock (family/lovers/dear friends) +3, Form kinship with another (family/marriage/adoption/etc) +5, Recall a past life +3, Learn something new about one's self +2, Explore one's own self, deeply +3 = +16
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Alistair

City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Fridgar: Your husband
Fridgar: Your havendal
Azzas: Fridgar's past life
Aedan: Your past life
Alistair Calder: You
Fridgar Calder: Your love
Temple of Thetros: You married here

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: +10 Get Married to Another PC
Devotion: Thetros: Engage in an act of devotion or compassion towards one of your flock (family/lovers/dear friends) +3, Form kinship with another (family/marriage/adoption/etc) +5, Recall a past life +3, Learn something new about one's self +2, Explore one's own self, deeply +3 = +16
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Finn

City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Hadvar Lorien: Priest.
Alistair: Kindal
Fridgar: Havendal
Etiquette: Surpressing A Snigger.
Etiquette: Basic Manners.
Deception: Playing With Words.
Socialization: Talking To A Stranger.
Detection: Guessing A Stranger's Intentions.
Caregiving: Providing First Aid To Unwanted Guests

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Patrick]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Goodbye Patali
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Generic:
Alistair: Is Engaged
Alistair: Found Love with Another
Ri'ku: Doesn't Want You to Blame Yourself
Ri'ku: Sometimes Wishes Others Could Hear Her
Personal: Heartbreak, Round Two
Personal: Failure of Commitment

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

[Zana]

Rewards Requested: Zana

Thread Name: Electra
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Brief nudity (no description), it's in a brothel. Mature themes.
Requested Rewards: Zana
Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Ringlets
Cosmetology: Up do hairstyle to reveal the neck
Cosmetology: Tiny details make a difference
Cosmetology: Decolletage area can be easily enhanced
Cosmetology: Loose, cascading curls.
Meditation: Calming, healing breath
Meditation: Sitting still
Storytelling: The Story of My Father

Delroth: Gave me his blessing
Jay: My familiar, granted by Delroth
Jay: Linked via "Feathered Friend" Ability
MB Ability: Trinket of Desire: Requires concentration
MB Ability: Trinket of Desire: Put my own energy into a trinket
MB Ability: Trinket of Desire: The trinket has to have meaning
MB Ability: Trinket of Desire: Victim needs to keep the trinket with them
Tarouz: Wings of Steel: Just my arms
Tarouz: Wings of Steel: Individual feathers
Tarouz: Wings of Steel: Heavy


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Devotion: Delroth: Prayer (+1), Took over a break making myself look good (+3) = +4
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Theo Nji'Ryn]

Rewards Requested: Theo

Thread Name: Electra
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Brief nudity (no description), it's in a brothel. Mature themes.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Details in unusual weapons
Discipline: Ignoring distractions
Discipline: Recognizing expected distractions
Discipline: Using jobs to distract yourself
Discipline: Seeking pleasure to distract yourself
Persuasion: Repeat promises made to reassure
Persuasion: Explain the usefulness of something


Delroth: Gave Zana his blessing
Jay: Zana's familiar, granted by Delroth
Zana: Can make steel feathers on her arms



Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Kali'rial]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Very Error Of The Moons
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: violence, gore, death
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Short Bow: How to string a bow
Detection: How to spot danger
Hunting: How to estimate size of an animal by it's tracks

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Pash: Can appear in your dream
Pash: Won't leave you to fight alone
Pash: Gives you strength
NPC: Kali's mother (Aly'rial) - Killed by Spulmokawarta
NPC: Kali's father (Nik'liah) - Killed by Spulmokawarta
Location: Desnind Jungle
Location: Emea
Dreaming: Time isn't fixed
Dreaming: Voices aren't always clear
Dreaming: Sometimes you see the dead
Dreaming: Sometimes you see the living
Dreaming: Dreamwalking is a thing
Dreaming: Sometimes it's not just a dream
Dreaming: Reoccurring nightmare
Fauna: Spulmokawarta

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: n/a
Devotion: n/a
Collaboration: Yes with Pash
Magic EXP: No

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The very error of the moons
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Gore. Death. Big ugly monster.
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Nah.

Non-Skill Knowledge:

• Location: Emea
• Location: Desnind Jungle
• Fauna: Spulmokawarta
• Kali’rial: Has reoccurring nightmares
• Kali’rial: Lost her parents to a monster
• Kali’rial: Needs you
• Kali’rial: Is stronger than she looks
• NPC: Kali’s mother - Killed by Spulmokawarta
• NPC: Kali’s father - Killed by Spulmokawarta
• Dreaming: Reoccurring nightmare
• Dreaming: Sometimes it’s not just a dream
• Dreaming: Dreamwalking is a thing
• Dreaming: Sometimes you’re not welcome
• Dreaming: Forests are still annoying even when you’re asleep

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes, with Kali’rial.
Magic EXP: No.

[Kali'rial]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Moonlight On Scalvoris Town
City/Area: Scalvoris Town [Central Square]
Notes/Warnings: n/a
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge: (11 out of 16 for 12 posts)
Discipline: Keeping traditions alive even when not at home
Discipline: Being honest even when it’s hard
Discipline: Obeying Sev’ryn laws
Seduction: Kissing is sometimes a great icebreaker
Seduction: Inviting someone to your bed
Socialization: Explaining Sev’ryn culture to foreigners
Socialization: Accepting others opinions and advice
Socialization: Accepting a date
Business Knowledge: How to trade for a song
Cooking: How to make tea
Field Craft: How to dry meat using a campfire

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Pash: Is not currently seeing anyone else
Pash: Works at Callys
Pash: Does not understand the law of Elders
Pash: Has no hesitation in speaking his mind
Pash: Can glow in the dark
Language: Rakahi
Race: Biqaj

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: n/a
Devotion: Pray to Moseke (+1),
Collaboration: Yes with Pash
Magic EXP: No

Theo

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Moonlight on Scalvoris Town
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Central Square
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge (11 posts=15 skill points total, but there's a lot of fluff so I don't need all of those ... lol):

• Detection: Knowing when you’ve crossed a line
• Discipline: Staying calm in the face of someone else’s anger
• Discipline: It’s not always appropriate to bring up magic in conversation
• Persuasion: Appealing to the heart instead of the head
• Persuasion: Using a prop to illustrate your point
• Persuasion: Returning anger with kindness
• Rhetoric: The difference between Elders and elders
• Rhetoric: Staying graceful despite cultural ignorance
• Singing: Choosing the right romantic ballad
• Singing: Songs in your native tongue
• Lute: Playing quietly while singing
• Seduction: Singing by firelight is sexy
• Seduction: Let's call it not sleeping

Non-Skill Knowledge:

• Kali’rial: Jealous for you
• Kali’rial: Has a habit of kissing you first
• Kali’rial: Protected by her grandparents’ rules
• Kali’rial: Lost her parents when she was three
• Kali’rial: Traded tea for a song
• Kali’rial: Invited you to share her tent
• Kali’rial: Agreed to a date
• Location: Kali’s campsite outside of town
• Culture: Sev’ryn: Obeying the Elders is a way of life
• Culture: Sev’ryn: 1 Ymiden is significant

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes, with Kali’rial.
Magic EXP: No.

Reviewed by Theo.