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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Got Bugs?
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None.

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None

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
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Thread Name: Field of Dreams
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: This ends abruptly because we changed our plans for Saun. However, both Aeodan and I are requesting points and not knowledges.

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Thread Name: First Lessons
City/Area: Athart
Notes/Warnings: Maybe? There is nothing graphic, but there is mentions of whippings, beatings, and at one point Kirei remembers a time that she had to wonder if she would starve to death before getting another meal.
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Skill Knowledge

Cooking: is the art of preparing food to be eaten, often by applying heat to it
Cooking: Dry heat cooking methods utilize air or fat to heat the food that is being cooked. Such methods include broiling, roasting, grilling, baking, sauteing, pan-frying and deep-fat frying.
Cooking: Moist heat cooking methods involve the use of water or stock. Such methods include poaching, boiling, simmering, and steaming.
Cooking: Combination cooking involves using both dry and moist heat cooking methods. Such methods include braising, stewing and pot-roasting.
Dehasin: names for cooking techniques
Endurance: Fighting through the pain makes you stronger.


Other Knowledge

Kirei: is used to waking up early
Kirei: becomes fully alert instantly upon waking
Kirei: tends to pick up languages quickly

Sometimes it is safer to hide your true feelings, and do what is expected of you.



Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: irritating the brand she was marked with a few trials ago, aching muscles from squatting down for long periods of time, massive bruising over much of her body, swollen, bleeding lip, and first degree burns on her hands from washing dishes in scalding hot water
Fame: none
Collaboration: No
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Thread Name: Learning how to Speak
City/Area: Athart
Notes/Warnings: none
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Skill Knowledge

Linguistics: is the study of languages
Linguistics: a polyglot is a person who knows, and is able to use several languages
Linguistics: language families are groups of languages that share similar characteristics
Linguistics: it is easier to learn a language if you are already fluent in another language within the same family because some words are similar
Linguistics: start with learning the basics; the alphabet forms words, and words form sentences
Teaching: sharing what you know with others

Other Knowledge

Language: Dehasin
Dehasin: spoken by human slaves in Athart
Dehasin: alphabet
Dehasin: basic directional terms (north, south, east, west, right, left, up, down, come, go, stop, etc.)
Dehasin: basic question and answer words (yes, no, who, what, where, when, how, why, because, etc.)
Dehasin: proper terms of address (master, mistress, sir, ma'am, etc.)
Dehasin: numbers, and counting terms
Language: Lorien
Lorien: the language of the Avriel masters
Lorien: is a spoken language only
Language: Avrielian Script
Avrielian Script: written language of the Avriel masters


Location: Athart
Athart: City of the Avriel
Athart: City of slavery
Location: Athart Slave School
Location: Desnind
Desnind: City of the Sev'ryn

Race: Avriel
Avriel: winged demons
Avriel: beautiful, but dangerous
Avriel: cruel to their slaves
Avriel: slavers
Race: Sev'ryn
Sev'ryn: are given tattoos of trees when very young, marked at a place the baby chooses themselves by pointing to it
Sev'ryn: follow dreams to find their familiars

Slaves: aren't supposed to have names unless their master gives them one
Slaves: children who are captured rather than being born a slave are called half slaves or wild ones
Slaves: must never dare to look at their masters

Names can be dangerous.
A raised voice must be obeyed.



Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: Ringing ears, and a headache caused by a hard cuff to the head. It will fade on its own within a few breaks.
Fame: none
Collaboration: No
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Thread Name: Afoul
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: This was abandoned.
Requested Rewards:
  • Psychology: Accepting Another's Hatred
  • Rhetoric: Defending A Friend
  • Allan: Hates You
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Welcome to Viden
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: This thread was abandoned. Aeodan and I are requesting the same rewards, and the amount of points are up to the reviewers discretion.
Requested Rewards: AEODAN AND EDALENE
  • Viden: The Prime Athenum
  • Book: The Evolving Language of Western Idalos
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Thread Name: Never Settle
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: The thread was abandoned, but we made over three posts. Aeodan and I are requesting the same rewards.
Requested Rewards:
  • Psychology: Picking Up On Others' Moods
  • Psychology: Moving Past Old Traumas
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
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Thread Name: The Spirit of Giving
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Spending ALL the nels ( 72. I'm lame. )
Requested Rewards:
Negotiation: Getting a better deal
Persuasion: Improving dispositions
Loot: The book and the jewelry
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: A Happy Happenstance
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned, but enough for full points. No knowledges.
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Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: 'Whoa, you two know each other!?'
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: unfinished, I think?
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: feels
Fame: positive for good deeds?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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