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Thread Name: On a steel sea
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: A little
Requested Rewards:
Both characters are lucid in Emea. Certain mental lores are allowed.

Pepper
Dreamwalking : An unaware dreamer can be drawn in completely by another’s dream
Investigation : Following the most likely trail
Psychology : Showing interest to draw out someone.
Investigation : Identifying pointless resistance
Discipline : Mastering panic as soon as possible.
Investigation : Evaluating options and choosing the best possible
Psychology : Keeping back some cards even when threatened (having miret stay hidden)
Negotiation : Give away something in hope of receiving further concessions

Others
Fiona :
Knows Noah
Cares about him
Is a dreamwalker
Who is Finn
Possibly places high value on control and predictability

Fauna:
Elephants

Zipper
Dreamwalking: Lucid Dreaming: Can happen by chance
Dreamwalking: Trespassing: Jesine’s flock can eject trespassing dreamwalkers from their dreamscape
Intimidation: Threatening a dreamwalker with being hunted down in the waking world
Investigation: Coercing information through force
Investigation: Inferring an answer
Investigation: Pressing hard for answers

Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nah
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Thread Name: Think It Oh Over
City/Area: Rynmere, Venora
Notes/Warnings: Skim skim skim
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Riding: Sidesaddle

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Can't You Feel My Heart Beat Fast
City/Area: Rynmere, Venora
Notes/Warnings: Some violence - oopsies
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Doran did literally nothing.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Flowing With Time.
City/Area: Rynmere, Andaris.
Notes/Warnings: None.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Sinna:
Endurance: Vomiting for the first time.
Meditation: Speaking about and dealing with grief.
Meditation: Keeping calm by speaking through a plan.
Detection: Animal habits.
Detection: Conversational nuances.
Etiquette: Offer to help with food gathering.
Negotiation: Offer antidotes for help with setting up business.
Interrogation: Asking about Immortals.
Interrogation: Repeating your questions.
Business Management: Every choice can mean more money or less money.
Nir'wei:
Negotiation: Keep your options open for later.
Negotiation: Balancing out your rejections with approvals.
Negotiation: Using white lies to soothe opinions.
Negotiation: Appeal to human decency.
Business Management: Turning your strengths into a unique selling point.
Business Management: Balancing profit with personal interest.
Business Management: Weighing the benefits of a business partnership.
Business Management: Weighing the benefits of profitable unique benefits.
Business Management: Using a diverse program to provide a range of services.
Business Management: Expanding into multiple markets simultaneously.
Non-skill Knowledges:
Tunawa can produce antidotes after consuming poisons.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
word count: 184
Mess with me, I'll fight back. Mess with my pack, and they'll never find your body.
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Thread Name: Lies Over the Ocean
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Pepper is a really mean sociopath :c
Requested Rewards:
Both are lucid in Emea. Select skills knowledges (mostly mental) apply

Pepper Farrow

Tactics : Attempting to distract an opponent
Psychology : Confronting bullying
Negotiation : Listening to an offer
Negotiation : Making a counter offer
Dreamwalking : It is possible to spy on people from emea
Dreamwalking : The Veil
Dreamwalking : Nightmares
Discipline : Staying firm in the face of temptation

Other knowledge
Jesine is at war with her ‘opposite’

Zipper
Deception: Making up a fake Immortal
Deception: Casually throwing out a fake gender to muddy the facts
Negotiation: Reframing the facts
Negotiation: Hard bargaining
Negotiation: The blunt no
Negotiation: Throwing out a take-it-or-leave-it offer
Negotiation: Throwing out hard facts to pressure the other party

Non-skill
Jesine: Her flock are gifted with fairies to steer her war
Jesine: Willing to mark children

Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: (Yes/No)
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Thread Name: An Eye for Detail
City/Area: Bayward - Ne'Haer
Notes/Warnings:Sexy af
Requested Rewards:

Jonathan Burr:

Seduction: Displaying one's beauty
Seduction: At ease with one's body
Seduction: Easing into a kiss
Seduction: Like what you see?
Seduction: Touch what you like
Seduction: Unable to keep your hands off someone.
Seduction: Entranced by understanding.
Seduction: Giving a first kiss
Discipline: Resisting the urge to use a connection
Discipline: Waiting until you're in private
Discipline: Resisting the urge to jump someone's bones
Teaching: Educating someone in Aberration
Teaching: Educating someone about mutations
Teaching: Educating someone about Transmutation

Zasalamir
Seduction: Walking naked on the beach
Seduction: Telling your lovers what they need to hear
Seduction: Displaying one's body
Seduction: A first kiss
Discipline: Backtracking from a lip slip
Discipline: Watching what you say
Discipline: Not revealing your plans too early
Detection: Feeling out mages
Detection: Reading in to people's words
Detection: Paying attention to one's surroundings
Detection: A weight on a man's soul coming out in his voice
Meditation: Confidence in one's own body
Meditation: At peace with oneself
Meditation: Recognizing chaos in others
Meditation: Staying near the ocean


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Blue balls
Renown: Well they were both naked and making out on a public beach.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
word count: 225
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Thread Name: Rote Memorization
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:

Aberration: Disbanding
Aberration: Not letting chaos free
Aberration: Controlling the reality inside an orb
Aberration: Setting something on fire using Disbanding
Discipline: Controlling something fighting against you.
Discipline: Concentration and repetition.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown:
Collaboration:
Magic EXP:Yes
word count: 58
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Look What You Made Me Do
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nah, just language like the usual
Requested Rewards:
Skill
  • Discipline: Restraint Against Pesters
  • Discipline: Biding Time With the Season
  • Rhetoric: Antics of A Barhopping Facade
  • Rhetoric: Quirks of Passive Aggression
  • Resistance: Somewhat A Moderate Drinker
  • Resistance: Drinking 'Lighter' Alcohol Such as Beer
  • Philosophy: Never Be Afraid To Say Shit To People's Face
General
  • Personal: Feeling Incomplete
  • Personal: Accused of Shit-Talking By A Stranger
  • Lavana: The Aggressive Mercenary
  • Lavana: Is Straightforward Evidently
  • Lavana: Has Gruesome Thoughts
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nuuuun
Renown: You decide
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Totally; not. :P
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Pearl in the Rough
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Not a sign of my thread partner returning for this one at all. Le sigh.
Requested Rewards:
Skill
  • Storytelling: Vagueness Leaves Room For Interpretation
  • Storytelling: Telling A Story Without Too Much Detail
  • Fishing: Creating a Network Using Multiple Nets
  • Fishing: Untangling A Knotted Net
  • Rhetoric: Sometimes Only Smiles Are Appropriate
  • Rhetoric: Handling A Very Poor Inside Joke Well
  • Fishing: Tying Two Nets Together
General
  • Personal: Apparently Known As "Heartthrob Enrick" Also
  • Nairi: Inside On the "Heartthrob" Joke
  • Nairi: A Fellow Biqaj
  • Nairi: Recently Settled in Scalvoris
  • Nairi: A Nice Fisherwoman
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: You decide
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nurp
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Licence to Leave
City/Area: Andaris, couple seasons ago
Notes/Warnings: I lost my muse for this one rather quickly. Might be pretty bad.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Deception: Evoking empathy
  • Acting: behave like you usually do when tricking people you know
  • Acting: Subtle body language to hint at emotions
  • Acting: Prepare for the role
  • Acting: the use of props
  • Acting: pretending something bad has happened
Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: nope
Collaboration: njet
Magic EXP: Do I reek of garbage to you? I'm an untainted and pure individual.
word count: 94
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