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Tei'serin Nji'ryn
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Thread Name: [Treth] Becoming One with Nature
City/Area: Ne'haer/Treth
Notes/Warnings: Vague hints of the after effects of rape, but nothing graphic, and it didn't happen in this thread.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Cooking: How to make scrambled eggs
Cooking: The art of multitasking
Medicine: How to make willow bark tea
Sru'Alubosa (Minor): Can work with either wood or stone, but you must be touching a sturdy, natural object made of the substance you want to turn into for it to work
Sru'Alubosa (Minor): Only small parts of the body like fingers and toes can be changed
Sru'Alubosa (Minor): It is unwise to try to turn into something less solid like dirt or sand

*Sru'Alubosa (Minor) is an ability of Severath

A warm nest of blankets wins over the cold Cylus air every time.
Practice makes perfect.
The Winter Woods are beautiful when covered in untouched snow.
Impossible things aren't always as impossible as they might seem to be.

Loot: Pine needles for her personal shrine to Moseke
Injuries/Overstepping: Exhaustion for practicing with one of her Severath abilities.
Fame: none
Devotion: Yes, +5 for praying to Moseke at a personal shrine Tei'serin made for Moseke, and +1 for praying to Ziell.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: First, Familiarity
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge
Leadership: Lay expectations out clearly
Leadership: Ensure that you keep them on their toes
Socialization: Meeting and greeting customers
Socialization: Working in teams is hard

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: NA
Collaboration: Yes (with Arlo)
Magic EXP: No.
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Arlo Creede
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Thread Name: First, Familiarity
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards: For Arlo

Knowledge
Cooking: Gnocchi recipe
Cooking: Ingredients available to a traveler
Cooking: Ways to prepare potatoes for gnocchi
Cooking: Other ingredients for gnocchi
Detection: Looking around and getting a feel for a business
Detection: Trying to ascertain ingredients from taste
Detection: Individual tastes to give more detail
Detection: Observing people as they walk away.
Etiquette: Dress code

Faith: Owner and proprietor of Cally's
Location: Scalvoris
Location: Scalvoris: Full of weird stuff
Location: Scalvoris: Careful what you buy where
Location: Cally's Restaurant: Scalvoris
Location: Cally's Restaurant: Magic glasses?

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: NA
Collaboration: Yes (with Faith)
Magic EXP: No.
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Lynessa
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Thread Name: Push Comes to Shove
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
  • Deception: Pretending to Be Lost
  • Deception: Playing the Part of an Innocent Healer
  • Deception: Hiding a Threat under Innocence
  • Intelligence: Gaining Information before Going on a Mission
  • Intelligence: Noticing When Someone is Hiding Something
  • Intelligence: Connecting the Dots
  • Intelligence: Easier to Get Answers from a Man without Another Man Around
  • Investigation: Question After Question
  • Investigation: Knowing What You're Getting Into
  • Investigation: Leaving No Stone Unturned
  • Tactics: Splitting Up from Your Knight
  • Tactics: Knowing When to Back Down
  • Tactics: Sending Your Knight Away at the Right Time
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • Patrick: Not a Passing Do-Gooder
  • Patrick: Tricked Your Order
  • Patrick: Owes You a Favor
  • Patrick: Planning a Large Project
  • Patrick: Partner-in-Crime
  • Thunder Priestesses: Don't Tell Her Everything
  • Thunder Priestesses: Sometimes Turns a Blind Eye
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Don't think so?
Devotion: Ilaren - for investigating on behalf of the Thunder Priestesses
Collaboration: Yaas!
Magic EXP: Nope.
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Thread Name: The Dress
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: It's emotional, but other than that, nope
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge
Tristan: Has a baby
Tristan: Baby is Ayla
Tristan: Loves me
Tristan: Will always love me

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: NA
Collaboration: Yes (with Tristan)
Magic EXP: No.
 ! Message from: Whisper
Shotgun. No Touchy.
word count: 62
"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."

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Tristan Venora
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Thread Name: The Dress
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: No.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Ayla: Is her second name Rose?
Faith: Alive again?
Faith: Has a friend called PB
Faith: Didn't leave Padraig
Faith: Will never leave Padraig
Faith: Still loves Padraig
Faith: Insists she isn't Ayla's mother
Faith: Probably still dead
Mistral: The cat king of Rynmere?
PB: Is a chalk bunny
Loot: No.
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: No.
Devotion: No.
Collaboration: Yes, with Faith.
Magic EXP: No.
 ! Message from: Whisper
Shotgun. No Touchy.
word count: 88
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Alistair
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Thread Name: Consequences
Fridgar
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Rolling dodge
Acrobatics: Rolling to reduce fall damage
Leadership: Passion makes orders clearer
Negotiating: Surrendering to the will of kin to appease them
Tactics: Using a faster form as bait to lead dangerous targets away
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Alistair: Proud of you
Alistair: Impressed by you
Boomer: Your Trachadon totem
Boomer: Rebelled
Boomer: Has a personality?
Boomer: Alive
Fridgar: You need to take care of your totems better
Fridgar: Totems are family, not tools, treat them as such

Loot: -1 Lurker Finger
Injuries/Overstepping: Removal of overstepping penalty
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Alistair
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Polearms: Spear - Lodging a spear deep into a foe
Polearms: Spear - Impaling a sensitive area to damage a foe's mobility
Polearms: Spear - Using the Nail with a spear
Polearms: Spear - Keeping your footing by using your spear as a pole
Polearms: Spear - Ripping through a foe while they're down
Polearms: Spear - Destroying the abdomen to prevent movement
Hunting: The Trachadon
Acrobatics: Landing softly after a great jump

Loot: +1 Lurker Finger
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: +1 General Good Deed (Protecting Fridgar)
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Tei'serin Nji'ryn
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Thread Name: [Treth] Herbs for the Soul
City/Area: Ne'haer/Treth
Notes/Warnings: This is an old thread that seems to have been abandoned so I finished it as best I could and turned it in for review.
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Knowledge:Cooking: Some types of mint, such as peppermint, spearmint, applemint, chocolate mint, pineapple mint, water mint, horse mint, corsican mint, and curly mint are good for cooking.
Fieldcraft: When foraging for food or herbs, never take everything you find; if you do, there will be none left the next time you need some
Gardening: Varieties of mint
Gardening: Mint grows all arc round, and can be harvested at any time.
Gardening: Growing mint will attract beneficial insects such as honeybees and hoverflies because it is rich in nectar and pollen.
Gardening: Growing mint from cutting, seed, and transplant
Medicine: Mint; fresh leaves should be used immediately, and dried leaves should be stored in an airtight container placed in a cool, dark, dry area.
Medicine: Plantain; is good for easing swelling when made into a poultice that can be used on people, and animals alike.


Willow's Sanctuary: Can be used to determine if someone has been poisoned; nothing happens if there are no toxins to be drawn out.
Willow's Sanctuary: If the person using the ability is distracted while using Willow's Sanctuary, the toxins will be released back into the person they are being drawn out of, and this can prove fatal to them

*Willow's Sanctuary is an ability of Severath

Mint: Can be used to freshen your breath.
Mint: Satchels of dried mint are good for making clothes smell nice.
Mint: Mint is a common herb that can be grown in a garden or found wild.
Mint: Every of mint has broad, green leaves that release a strong minty scent when bruised.
Mint: Some types are sterile, and can't be grown by seed.
Plantain: Can be found almost anywhere
Finn: needs help
Tei'serin: has bad memories of poison ivy
Telar: Finn's mentor
Telar: the one Finn came to Treth to find
Telar: is a sick old man
Telar: doesn't have any allergies

Loot: 3 plantain plants, 3 varieties of mint (1 plant each of wild mint, catnip, and lemon balm), and several mint leaves, some from each type

Injuries/Overstepping: Possibly some weariness from using Willow's Sanctuary, but since she only used it the once, there shouldn't be too much.
Fame: Positive for doing good deeds; helping to treat Finn's mentor
Devotion: Yes; +5 for establishing a (personal) shrine dedicated to Moseke, and +5 for praying to Moseke at that shrine
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Thread Name: The Fairly Fair Fellow
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge
Skill-Related:
Deception: Refraining From Whole Truths
Deception: Using Riddles to Hide Information
Meditation: Interpretations of the Mind with Tarot Cards
Philosophy: Knowledge is Power

Generic:
Noth: The Feathered Man
Noth: From Etzos
Etzos: A Dangerous Place
Dream: The Roaming Fair
Personal: Branching Out


Noth's Knowledge Request
Skill-Related:
Deception: Pretending To Be a Customer
Deception: Observing Facial Features for Lying
Investigation: Asking Plenty of Questions
Field Craft: Ripping Tent for Light
Intelligence: Allies Help Gather Intel
Intelligence: Agents in Different Places Can Say Different Things
Stealth: Sleight of Hand Allows for “Magic”
Philosophy: A Kicked Dog Bites
Philosophy: Saving the World Through Conquest
Leadership: Giving Speeches

Generic:
Patrick: Comes From a Place Where the “Ale Flows Freely”
Patrick: Is a Seer


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Thread Name: Push Comes to Shove
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Skill:
  • Acting: Feigning Innocence
  • Deception: Controlling Facial Expressions to Fool Others
  • Discipline: Remaining Calm During Your Own Setup
  • Intelligence: Shipment's in Rharne
  • Intelligence: Buyers/Sellers Within the Dust Quarter
  • Investigation: Reaching Out to Potential Assests
  • Investigation: Making Yourself "Known" to Certain People
  • Intelligence: Building Partnerships With Contacts
  • Intelligence: Creating A Diversion To Send A Message
  • Negotiation: Paying Your Dues
  • Negotiation: Understanding the Value in Opportunity
  • Persuasion: Using Facial Expressions with Suggestions
  • Persuasion: Implications For Elaboration
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • Rharne: Drug Vendors With the Dust Quarter
  • Rharne: Shipments and Supply Routes
  • Rharne: The Shadow Quarter
  • Personal: Reaching Out to The Shadow Quarter
  • Lynessa: The Thunder Priestess
  • Lynessa: Smart and Resourceful
  • Lynessa: A Potential Asset
  • Lynessa: A Partner and Informant
  • Faction: The Thunder Priests
  • Faction: The Shadow Quarter
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Perhaps, a few bribes were made for the set up in this thread.
Devotion: Nope
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: Nope.
word count: 169
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