Review Request 2.1.2

[Maebella]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Creative Misadventures
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Things get a bit mature in terms of interaction. It's not smut but it's a bit sexual. You've been warned.
Requested Rewards:

Caius Gawyne

Knowledge:

• Skill Knowledge
  • Drawing: Medium: Charcoal
  • Drawing: Technique: Sketching
  • Drawing: Technique: Drawing your surroundings
  • Drawing: Critiquing your own work
  • Drawing: Representational accuracy!
  • Etiquette: Accepting the critique of others
  • Etiquette: Holding doors open for the ladies
  • Detection: Noticing subtle signs of flirtation
  • Detection: Knowing when you've said the wrong thing
  • Seduction: Clever wordplay
  • Seduction: Holding hands
  • Seduction: Keeping her guessing about your intentions
  • Rhetoric: Making bad assumptions
  • Rhetoric: Flirtatious bluffing
• Non-skill Knowledge
  • Location: Viden: Still sarding cold in Saun
  • Location: Viden: The Devil's Advocate
  • NPC: Rylan: Caius' Eídisi Art student friend
  • NPC: Rylan: Friendlier off campus
  • NPC: Mateo: A Merchant House student from Rynmere
  • NPC: Mateo: Wants to see the world
  • NPC: Esine: Caius' friend and ex-interest
  • NPC: Danya: Eídisi Religion student and friend of Caius
  • Maebella: Agreed to a drink (or a few) with you
  • Maebella: Blushes quite a bit in your presence
  • Maebella: Is still young for an Eídisi
  • Maebella: Feels out of place among her own kind
  • Maebella: Was alright with a little overly-friendly touching

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: I don't think so.
Fame: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Maebella

Knowledge:

• Skill Knowledge
  • Rhetoric: Paying a compliment (sort of)
  • Rhetoric: Quoting past conversations to make a point
  • Etiquette: Pleasant greetings
  • Etiquette: Holding doors for others is polite
  • Rhetoric: Drawing upon anecdotes
  • Detection: Noting subtle signs of discomfort
  • Deception: Hiding expression with your hair
  • Teaching: The pitfalls of late reproduction in Eídisi
  • Seduction: Clever wordplay
  • Rhetoric: Turning another's words back on them
  • Acting: Playing innocent
  • Intelligence: Finding out connections between people
  • Seduction: Holding hands
  • Rhetoric: Choosing your words wisely
• Non-skill Knowledge
  • Caius Gawyne: Studied Art in Viden
  • Caius Gawyne: A fair artist
  • Location: Viden - Colder than Rynmere
  • Location: Gawyne - Northernmost region in Rynmere
  • Caius Gawyne: Mae's infatuated with him
  • Caius Gawyne: Thinks Mae is attractive
  • Location: The Devil's Advocate (Viden)
  • NPC - Rylan: Caius' Eídisi Art student friend
  • NPC - Rylan: Friendlier off campus
  • NPC - Mateo: A Merchant House student from Rynmere
  • NPC - Mateo: Wants to see the world
  • NPC - Esine: Caius' friend and ex-interest
  • NPC - Esine: Religion Student
  • NPC - Danya: Eídisi Religion student and friend of Caius
  • Religion: Rynlism
  • Mead: A palatable alcohol

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Drunkenness! Reviewer's discretion.
Fame: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

!	Message from: Pegasus
	Pending by Niv

[Sintih]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Eastern Trench]By word of hand
City/Area: Eastern Trench between Rynmere and the Eastern Settlements
Notes/Warnings: It's all about sign language for which I use a lot of descriptions from ASL signs as well as SL grammar from my own classes. It could be confusing for others, I don't know.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Linguistics: Grammar makes different languages
Linguistics: Different ways to pass on a language
Linguistics: Difficulties in passing on a language
Linguistics: Facial expression across different languages
Linguistics: Basic difference between common and common sign grammar
Endurance: Staying awake by focusing on other things

Common Sign: Not common signed out
Common Sign: The alphabet in use
Common Sign: Basic signs
Common Sign: signs on studying
Common Sign: visual explanations of words
Common Sign: Acting when you don't know a sign
Common Sign: Not seen = not heard
Common Sign: Asking questions with eyebrows
Common Sign: Without a dictionary
Location: Eastern Trench

Loot: invaluable information?
Injuries/Overstepping: Some loss of sleep, perhaps?
Fame: Trying to learn a language to be able to communicate better?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Arlo Creede]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Perspective
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge: (4 posts = 9 knowledge)
Discipline: Putting an end to a line of questioning with an unwanted answer
Discipline: Waiting to find out what's happening between your father and boyfriend "having a talk"
Investigation: Use your familiar to eavesdrop. If she will.
Strength: Lifting a pig out of a pit
Strength: Working together to lift a heavy object
Strength: Bend from your knees, don't lift with your back

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes

Arlo

Knowledge: (4 posts = 9 knowledge max)
Cooking: Roast pig underground
Cooking: Using a pit to cook
Endurance: Digging a cooking pit
Endurance: Maintaining a cooking pit in winter
Negotiation: Having "the" talk with your girlfriend's father and not messing it up
Negotiation: Answering your girlfriend's father, without giving him your opinion.
Strength: Lifting a pig out of a pit
Strength: Working together to lift a heavy object
Strength: Bend from your knees, don't lift with your back


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes

[Ellen'wyn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Reunion Turned Sour
City/Area: Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: Foul language. This was also written all together in a GoogleDoc.
Requested Rewards:

Ellen'wyn

Skill Knowledges: 9 max (4 posts)
Construction: Materials for a Tunäwä nest
Construction: Techniques may vary between cultures and races
Investigation: Sometimes questions can wait
Intimidation: Raise your voice
Etiquette: Some behavior is frowned upon in public
Deception: Using another language for privacy

Non-Skill Knowledges
Niv: Transported to Etzos by Ymiden in a dream
Niv: Member of the Sons of Justice
Niv: Her father was kidnapped
Gangui: Extremely overbearing

Niv

Skill Knowledges: 9 max (4 posts)
Construction: first step gathering materials
Construction: Sev’ryn use planks of wood in their construction
Construction: Sev’ryn use metal nails not human nails
Construction: if mud isn’t around you need string
Storytelling: Sometimes the truth can sound like fantasy

Non-Skill Knowledges
Ellen’wyn: meeting again in Etzos
Ellen’wyn: knows Gangui
Gangui: kind of a knob

Gangui

No Skill Knowledge or Points
Less than 1500 words

Non-Skill Knowledge
Ellen'wyn: Longtime friend of Niv
Niv: Longtime friend of Ellen

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Grader's discretion
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Kirei Qe'Azour]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Gaining Employment
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:


Skill Knowledge

Cooking: Cooking for large groups is very different than cooking for one, or for a single family
Cooking: Time management is crucial
Cooking: Cleanliness is crucial; both yourself and your kitchen
Cooking: Long hair should be kept tied back while cooking to prevent hair getting into the food
Cooking: Cooking under pressure can be difficult
Endurance: Enduring the heat of the ovens in Saun can be brutal

Non Skill Knowledge

Sage: Sage leaf has some sweet taste and savory flavor
Sage: can grow almost anywhere, but thrives in rich sunlight
Sage: when the leaf is dried, it makes a popular spice
Sage: Sage tea or infusion can be used to help with digestive problems such as indigestion, heartburn, gas, bloating, loss of appetite, stomach pain, and diarrhea
Sage: as a gargle, it can soothe swollen gums, and ease sore throats
Sage: can be used to stop the flow of milk after a baby has been weaned, ease the pain of menstrual cramps, and reduce hot flashes during menopause
Sage: can cause a miscarriage, so shouldn't be used by pregnant women

Recipe: scrambled eggs with sage and melted cheddar cheese
Recipe: peach jelly

Kirei: works at Elyari's Hope
Kirei: loves to cook
Kirei: feels that it is important to enjoy what you do for a living
Kirei: is both nervous about and eager to work under a master chef as an apprentice
Kirei: has good memories of Warrick's Watch
Kirei: "disappeared" from the Waterstreet Marketplace when she was captured and sold into slavery at the age of 12


Andiron: Elyari's apprentice
Andiron: critical of Kirei

Aris: Elyari's apprentice
Aris: a friendly woman

Carlisle: Elyari's husband
Carlisle: co owner of Elyari's Hope
Carlisle: runs the business end of the restaurant

Daina: Tasha's mother
Daina: married to Rion
Daina: was Elyari's apprentice at one time
Daina: is a close friend of Elyari

Eckard Tibolt: owns the Bread Basket
Eckard Tibolt: has two young daughters

Elyari: owns Elyari's Hope
Elyari: is the main chef for Elyari's Hope
Elyari: often takes apprentices and teaches them what she knows in exchange for their help at the restaurant


Rion: Tasha's father
Rion: married to Daina
Rion: was Elyari's apprentice at one time
Rion: is a close friend of Elyari

Ruth Calder: runs the Andaris Stables
Ruth Calder: has cared for horses all her life

Tasha: a little lost girl

Tauriel: Kirei's adopted daughter
Tauriel: her mother was a farmer
Tauriel: loves the feel of leaves
Tauriel: just under one arc old

Location: Andaris Bookstore
Andaris Bookstore: located in Midtown
Location: Andaris Library
Andaris Library: located in Midtown
Location: Andaris Stables
Andaris Stables: located in Lowtown
Andaris Stables: exists on 5 acres of land, and can house up to 700 horses
Andaris Stables: is always looking for help
Andaris Stables: is one of the biggest and most wealthy businesses in the city; it houses animals from the royal guard and the Moseke Knights
Andaris Stables: prices of stabling vary based on the level of care one wishes to pay for
Andaris Stables: offers riding lessons and other services as well as stabling
Location: The Bread Basket
The Bread Basket: located in Midtown in a somewhat quiet side street between a flower shop and a cobbler, not too far from the marketplace
The Bread Basket: Andaris's premier bakery
Location: Elyari's Hope
Elyari's Hope: a restaurant located in Midtown
Elyari's Hope: serves breakfast, lunch, and dinner
Elyari's Hope: serves both fine dining, and casual fare
Elyari's Hope: is a popular restaurant
Location: Lowtown
Lowtown: located just past the main gate leading into Andaris
Lowtown: familiar to Kirei
Lowtown: Kirei's childhood home
Lowtown: the poorest section of the city
Lowtown: not safe for the unwary
Location: Marketplace
Marketplace: located in the heart of Midtown
Location: Midtown
Location: Warrick's Watch
Warrick's Watch: a beautiful tree planted outside the main gate leading into Andaris
Warrick's Watch: planted by Henry II, son of Henry Warrick an original member of the Sacred Seven on the morning of the birth of his two sons
Warrick's Watch: Henry II's sons later placed a plaque at the base of the tree that reads ‘May all who pass this tree know true joy and see it grow.’
Location: Water Street Marketplace
Water Street Marketplace: runs through an old underground water duct in Lowtown that has been converted into underground shops and small upstairs apartments
Water Street Marketplace: anything from foreign slaves to jacdon hearts to killers for hire...if you know who to talk to, and could afford their price
Water Street Marketplace: very unsafe; even more so than the rest of Lowtown
Water Street Marketplace: denizens of Lowtown refuse to let their kids go there unattended
Water Street Marketplace: the knights get at least three reports a trial of people going missing from the marketplace; most of which are sold into slavery or killed


Loot: a new job (has already been approved)
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: Positive for doing a good deed
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Rat]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Hunt Begins
City/Area: Andaris/Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Investigation - Following a suspect
Investigation - Visiting the scene of the crime
Intelligence - Secrets are exchanged in backrooms
Intelligence - Clay Deveraux's low-town girl
Deception - Good lies have some truth
Acrobatics - Leaping over objects to move faster

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Farrix - True master
Farrix - Involved in assassination attempt
Farrix - Influence extends outside of Warrick
Clay Deveraux - Working with Farrix
Clay Deveraux - Not the assassin
The Blacksmith's Arm - A sketchy low-town tavern
The Blacksmith's Arm - Has backrooms behind the curtains
Low-town - A dangerous part of Andaris
Slavery - An excuse, if used right

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bloody knuckles on the left hand
Fame: -2 (Lying about slave master)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Hero's Death pt 1
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Deals with grief and death.
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Business Management: Morality over profit.
Investigation: Making sure that a family are what they seem to be.
Investigation: Use your Immortal granted ability to clarify
Investigation: Keep your identity secret to ensure honesty


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Yes please - she arranged for the adoption of a child, gave 500gn to make sure that the right people could afford to adopt the baby, made clothes and stuff and will be putting 200gn x season into an account in Scalvoris bank.
Collaboration: Nope

[Zip]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Turkey Knight
City/Area: Etzos - outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: Uh bird wudeness
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Noth
Intelligence: Dispatching a Spy
Intelligence: Multiple Sources Means More Reliable Information
Negotiation: Haggling Over Price
Business Management: Don't Pay a Contractor More for an Easier Job
Logistics: Deface, then Kill
Logistics: Mercenaries Work Only for Cash
Intimidation: Going Behind Someone
Intimidation: Using your target's name as a weapon

Zipper
Business Management: Assuaging a difficult client
Detection: Noticing a gestured signal
Detection: Using the Ether Sense to pick up something supernatural
Discipline: Tolerating the outdoors
Discipline: Standing your ground in the face of fear
Deception: Bloating up a local celebrity's importance and stature
Politics: No action, big or small, exists in a vacuum
Intelligence: Evaluating your Intelligence network
Loot: +150 to Zipper, minus 150 to Noth
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Negative for Noth please. A lot, if it can be help. Gangui dropped a TEN THOUSAND DOLLAR BOUNTY on him.
Oh, um plotting to kill a PC for both. That's -10 too, according to the guide and general nefarious dealings.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope

[Rose Greenwood]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Into the Woods (Ti’niva)
City/Area: Desnind / Makubwa Lori
Notes/Warnings: Ti'niva encounters Rose once she finds herself far from home after dark.
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Ranged Combat (Shortbow) : How to string a bow
Ranged Combat (Shortbow) : Respect and care for your bow
Medicine: Medowsweet treats fever
Medicine: Watercress can be used to treat flesh wounds
Fieldcraft: How to build a fire
Cooking: Roasting a rabbit over a fire
Cooking (Recipe): Watercress and Roasted Rabbit
Cooking: Wash you hands
Cooking: Wash plants before eating
Endurance: Stepping into a cold stream
Detection: Listening for predators
Linguistics: Xanthea: Conveying meaning with few words
Running: Traversing the forest quickly

Non-Skill Knowledge

Creatures:
Icraphern: Small white deer with one horn
Wolf : Only a wild dog

People -
Ti'niva: Hunter and friend
Ti'niva: His mother died defending a sacred tree.
Ti'niva: Potential archery teacher
Ti'niva: Kind and generous
Ti'niva: Might have a familiar...or be insane

Location - Ti'niva's Forest Home
Ti'niva's Forest Home: Has the basic necessities

Location - Makubwa Lori
Makubwa Lori – There are things worse that wolves living there

Loot: Up to Reviewer (Maybe a few sprigs of Medowsweet for making tea *shrug*)
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Up to Reviewer
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP:No

[Finnegan O'Connor]

Rewards Requested

Note: This is a re-review (thread has already been reviewed for Kayleigh)
Thread Name: Blessed Be
City/Area: Uthaldria, Temple of Thetros
Notes/Warnings: Nada, unless you're afraid of infirmaries.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Hearing Birdsong
Endurance: Enduring The Wounds Of An Albion Attack
Writing: Careful Phrasing Is Of Paramount Importance
Tactics: Explaining A Situation Before Questions Are Asked.
Socialization: Concering Oneself With The Problems Of Others.
Meditation: A Peaceful Environment Relaxes The Senses.

Location: The Temple Of Thetros
Kayleigh: Not Your Mother, Sadly.
Kayleigh: Willing To Help Write A Letter
Higan: Kayleigh's Runaway Brother
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Perhaps some positive fame for having survived an Albion attack (there was +1 awarded in the thread before this where the attack actually occured, but at that point it wasn't certain Finn would survive, really, and I've always thought that not very many people have survived an Albion attack, tiny humans least of all).
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No