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Arlo fought like he'd never fought before. Not just for himself by a long shot. But for Vega. So long as this thing, that woman had hold of him, then Vega was in danger and he was useless to her. But no bolt from his bow, dagger from its sheath or blow from his fist seemed to make any difference. Whatever the tentacle was made of seemed to shift accordingly and remain impervious to any of his efforts. He wasn't unlike the Immortal he worshiped in that way. Arlo had a lot of fight in him, and wasn't inclined to accepting defeat. He only fought harder for as long as he could.

Vega shouted at him, and so did Lyova though no one could hear her but him...presumably. The little blue diri buzzed around him like a whirling dervish, in and out of the crystal where he'd been drawn, alternating between trying to rally him and swarming Perfection like a one diri swarm of angry bees. As if it would do Lyova any good.

Weapons, brute strength, physical skills had failed him and all Arlo had left was a well developed strength of will. Mind over matter, mind over matter he kept reminding himself. The problem was that the woman was meddling with his mind. In this case, Lyova proved to be his best weapon, and sensing what was happening due to their strong mental connection, the diri abruptly changed tact. She kept up a running commentary in his mind, even after he'd felt himself slip into a strange sort of sleep that as a dreamwalker, was bothersome in its own right.

Lyova though, she kept at it, reminding him of where he was, who he was, what he was and who needed and was depending on him. Somewhere between sleep and a drunken sense of wakefulness, the diri's efforts began to seem like a buzzing in his ears, her voice like tinkling glass bells there, but hardly there. What he experienced then wasn't unlike an outing in Emea. In fact as a dreamwalker, there hardly seemed to be a difference. And as for lucid dreaming, walking in dreams, Arlo was good at that and a fair hand of knowing it for what it was. Or at least seemed to be.

And then there was the man on the shore of lake Lovalus, a place that Arlo had visited on countless occasions when he was a child. It was as if the figure had stepped right out his boyish imagination, and become just as he'd dreamed he might be. Back then at least. The trick however was that this particular figure was one what Arlo hadn't dreamed of in arcs. He'd outgrown it without realizing. And there was his mother too, who was gone. A dream. One that would be all too easy in his current position to indulge in. But also a dangerous one.

What struck him though was that everything around him was an ideal, too much of an ideal to be anything close to reality. A dream created by a woman who seemed to think she knew him. But in truth she somehow only knew the child he'd been, and not the man he was. "You're not my father," Arlo said. No matter what man had sired him, Arlo came to understand, he hadn't been a father in any way that mattered. Perfection might have done much better to show him a different face. "Jonas Creede is my father."

Looking over the man's shoulder at Nella, Arlo nonetheless smiled at her. "Not this trial mom. I've still got things to do. I'll see you again later on." And with that, to whatever extent he was able, he redoubled his efforts to banish Perfection from his mind, focus on Lyova's voice instead, and again redoubled his efforts to escape the prison he was in, both crystal and dream state.
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A fury like no other settled on Perfection's horrifyingly beautiful crystalline features while Vega howled out jeers and insults at the spirit. She was perfection itself, how could this wench call her anything otherwise?

“Silence!”
The woman screamed just as she struck for Vega and the red headed woman stepped to the side, wheeling around on her heel to deliver a blow to Perfection’s neck. There was a great crack as the molten sword made impact. The blade struck true but did not separate the head from the diamond shoulders, instead deep cracks formed, splintering outwards throughout Perfection’s core.

The crystalline woman froze, turning with a stumbling step to face Vega with a fanged snarl.

“You are going to die whore!” Her voice was somehow cracked and hollow like words hurled down a long tunnel. She was losing her form and her grasp on the ability to speak.

Tiny pieces of diamond crystals began disintegrating from her arm where her opponent had struck moments earlier. Her neck and back had also begun to disintegrate.

“All that matters is that I have him! This body is only a tool! He will be with me forever and always. ” Perfection’s crystal body continued to shatter and splinter, turning into a fine diamond dust at her feet. Her voice began to grow even more hollow and discordant once her form had been reduced to nearly a thin skeleton.

“You will never have him back Eva.”

With those last words Perfection's body dissipated into a pile of fine dust. However during the time they had been fighting Arlo had remained trapped within the massive crystal itself. There were clear brushstrokes of white and gray hair near his temples, it was rather fetching at the moment, but the transformation continued while he remained trapped within the crystal.

Vega had to get him out.
Meanwhile, inside the dream that Arlo was trapped within…the man pretending to be his father frowned deeply at his son.

“Always too smart for your own good.”His voice had lost the warm familiar qualities it had possessed moments before and began to dissolve into something metallic and alien that sounded more like the voice of Perfection.

“I wanted a partner out of you…not a puppet like the others.” The older man said woefully, a violet glow erupting from his irises, confirming that Perfection indeed spoke through him. Vega hadn’t killed her at all, although she had destroyed the body that the spirit had manifested. No…Perfection’s consciousness dwelt here within the crystal where the heart of her power lay.

“But you just had to fight me…just like how that pathetic red headed bitch fought me.” It was strange and jarring to hear the echoes of Perfections voice coming from the mouth of a man who appeared to be every bit the man Arlo had dreamed his father to be.

“But she’ll be dead soon. And you will be mine, even if I must empty that pretty head of yours in order to have you. ”

His father stood there with radiant violet eyes, grinning with satisfaction before reaching out with his hand toward Arlo, as if preparing to do something unspeakable to him.

“No one can save you...”

At that moment there was a loud thump, as a boat oar careened into his ‘father’s’ head knocking the man clean out and throwing him to the ground.

“Stay the hell away from my son!” Nella Creede stood there, with oar in hand staring defiantly at the unconscious pretender wearing the appearance of the father he had dreamed of. His mother, even if she was nothing more than a memory had intervened. Something of her essence…her soul had been brought to life from his recollection of her, regardless of Perfection’s intentions.

It is in our memories that we carry pieces of those that we love and cherish along with us.

It is in our memories that we carry along the scars that make us strong.


And was in Arlo’s memory that part of his mother remained; It was something that a troublesome and malicious spirit could never have anticipated; the power of a mortal memory.

Almost as soon the pretender serving as Perfection’s mouthpiece was knocked clean out by Nella, the surrounding dream began to dissipate around Arlo. His mother stood there with a knowing smile as she began to fade from view along with the sweeping hills and glistening lake.

“’I’ve got to go now.” Nella said with a gentle smile. Her choice of words reflective of a dream Arlo had experienced some time ago. Before Arlo could have a chance to speak she softly held up her hand to silence him.

“Because it’s time.”
She took a steadying breath as tears shone in her eyes.

“I can’t stay, but I’ll see you again.”

With that she was gone, the dream faded completely and Arlo would find that he was now awake inside the strange liquid heart of the crystal. He could barely breathe; it was as if the crystal was attempting to smother him as one final act of vengeance. The foreign purple luminescence hanging in the crystal around him pulsed brighter before flickering as if it might just go out. More and more the breath was pushed out of him, like weights had been tied to his chest.

He had to get out of there.
Outside the mammoth crystal, the diamond straight edges of its surface had begun to waver as if melting. Its surface could now seemingly be pierced from the outside if one had enough force. The children from earlier remained standing like statues regardless of the flashing pulsating jewel.
Perfection had been dealt a blow within both the Physical world and within that of the Mind, she was vulnerable and exposed now that she had been forced out of the body Vega had fought and destroyed.

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Just a reminder of how, from the first post this thread has been summed up for me by: this song.
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The thing that Perfection didn't understand, of course, was how it was their flaws, their insecurities and very imperfections which made them stronger. Alone, individually, maybe they would have been weaknesses, but when Arlo looked at her Vega knew that he saw a flawed, insecure and imperfect being - and he loved her completely. In his eyes, she was perfect, because she and he fitted together. Vega knew all this because it was what she felt and knew and lived and breathed right back. He was not a perfect person and he'd have bored her till her beejinkies wilted if he was, but he was her perfect partner. There was a real power in knowing that, by being just who you are, you are being the very thing the person you love needs and wants and Vega had first understood and now, was learning to wield that power.

When Qit'ria had called her a whore, oh how Vega had reacted. When her cousin had? She'd broken his nose and beaten him black and blue. When Perfection told her that she would die and then called her that word which she had hated all her life, Vega laughed. "I'm gonna die? You first, Lonely Crone." As the unimportant woman who was fundamentally lonely spoke, Vega was already moving. To the crystal where Arlo was. When they had told her she might not walk again, she had determined that they were wrong. Even if they'd been right, Vega knew that she'd have stood up and run over to him now. That was exactly what she did, of course. She moved to him and she examined the crystal thing.

"Death didn't stop us, you idiot. You think you're gonna? Yer a right distractin' soon to be pile of dust, you are. Will you jus' shurrup?" Vega frowned and saw the crystal starting to shift. "Lyova, you tell him to keep breathin' or I'm gonna kill him. I am." She took the few trill she really didn't want to take, but did so in order to ascertain the most vulnerable place and then Vega stood, making her stance the strongest she could. "I haven't got time to explain, Xiur, but a bit of help would be great. Arlo's in there. I gotta break it. Together, then, yeah? One. Two," and then, with a yell of "THREE!" Vega swung her sword. Lifting it in a wide arc to give herself maximum momentum and putting her full strength behind it, she aimed at the point on the crystal which seemed to be weakest.

She didn't stop, wouldn't stop. If it didn't shatter, she'd hit it again. And again. In the same spot if it seemed like she created a weakness. As she swung, even the first time, Vega didn't have time to notice that she was crying, tears of fear and fury pouring down her cheeks. "You keep breathin' you dweeb or I'm gonna kill you, Arlo Creede!"
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"You don't know anything about me! You were never my father!" Arlo shouted back with whatever he had left in him to fight. He knew that what he was seeing and hearing was only an illusion meant to entrap him. He knew who was responsible for it, and that the vision Perfection had woven was so without flaws and cracks, was so reliant on an ideal dreamed up in the mind of a young boy, that he couldn't help but see it for what it was. A sham. Nonetheless, there was some truth to it, whether Perfection intended it or not. She probably didn't. He had a father. And his father was Jonas Creede.

Then of course the witch revealed herself and the threats against Vega only doubled his resolve. For all the good it was doing him. It was his mother's actions though that Arlo hadn't expected. Truth was, he'd made a point of not focusing on her, assuming that that too was just more of Perfection attempting to manipulate him. And it might have worked, had the woman chosen that tact. He never made anything of it, but Arlo still missed her as much as ever. It still felt as if she'd taken a bit of him with her and he hadn't found a way to fill that empty place back in yet.

It caught him by surprise then when she did something that was so very much like her. Small of stature, a slip of a woman Jonas had always called her, but with the heart and temper of a lion. And it was something Perfection couldn't and wouldn't have known, dealing in flawless ideals as she did. And just like that, with the crashing of an oar upon his tormentor's head, she began fading away like the rest of it. "Don't go!" Arlo called out and didn't realize he had tears in his eyes.

"Not yet, I'm not ready, I have things to tell you!" He'd never gotten to say goodbye. There were a dozen things he hadn't gotten to tell her. But then she was gone and it felt as if she'd taken the air in this prison with her. He could hardly breathe and by instinct, began to conserve what breath he had left. To breathe more slowly, more shallow, while Lyova kept up a constant stream of chatter in his head, trying to rally him, and maybe the muffled sound of Vega's voice was there to hang onto and keep him pushing back against a state of unconsciousness.
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There was a horrendous shrieking sound as Vega’s blade impacted the massive body of the crystal. For a moment her sword was halted by the impenetrable shell, but within a half trill tiny cracks began to spiderweb outwards, their seams filling with the pure red hot light of the half Biqaj’s weapon.

The Shattered Girl stood there, her sword dug deep into the skin of Perfection’s true form. She would show the malicious spirit what real strength was like.

The cracks soon turned into fractures that popped and hissed as more light leaked from the crystal. The screams of Perfection filled the chamber, her melodic voice made shrill and terrible.

Within the sanctity to Vega’s mind she would hear Perfection’s voice speaking to her, just as it had before.

“A time will come when you will lose him. Perhaps not to-trial, and not by my hands…but that trial shall come. And you will find yourself alone and without purpose…just like me.” There was a depth to the sorrow in her voice even though her words began to fade away as if she were being erased from existence.

“When that time comes….I hope you remember this moment Eva, and know that even you have my pity.”
Her voice was cut off in the midst of her last word just as the crystal shattered.

Was this sympathy coming from the spirit? Was she more mercurial and complex perhaps than Vega and Arlo might have thought? Perfection was what some might call an Induk and was not simply obsessed with beauty. She had dwelt in this place a a long time, far longer than any mortal life, living completely and utterly alone. Loneliness did terrible things to a person, and perhaps all she had wanted was some company. Arlo could have been that companion, made eternal and flawless through her power, never to wilt with age or diminish at the touch of time. He was full of a hope and vigor for life that she had once known, and perhaps with him she could have tasted it once more. But Perfection no longer knew what it was to understand mortals, and she took their scars and wounds for weaknesses rather than strengths.
And now she was no more.

The crystal splintered, sending out shards in all directions. Vega found herself peppered in dozens upon dozens of small irregular cuts that crisscrossed her exposed skin, but she was alive and would heal in time. Arlo himself was physically unharmed, although he bore mental wounds that may take time to heal. His hair retained the soft white and gray brushstrokes around his temples, giving him a distinguished if not slightly more aged appearance.

As he awoke and was able to take in his surroundings there would be a strange feeling in his hand, as if something was held tightly in his palm.
Upon looking in his right hand there would be something familiar, an item that was plucked him a memory; But not just any memory...

A string of pearls lay in his hand, glistening like beads of moonlight. They were nothing terribly fancy or expensive but they were indeed familiar. They were the same pearls given to Nella Creede by her husband Jonas; Arlo’s real father. Ever since his mother’s death the pearls has seemed to have vanished, either they had been interred with her or stashed in some forgotten drawer...but now here they lay; like a gift from the other side.

Perhaps Arlo’s memory of his mother had been far stronger than he had imagined.

Perfection’s crystal continued to crumble and break apart until Arlo was forced to leap from his position at the heart of it. The very crystalline fabric of the stone began to turn to dust until there was a perfect pile of the glittering material on the ground. If Arlo and Vega looked close enough they might find some rather unexpected objects within the remains of Perfection. Perhaps they were a final gift from a broken spirit.

There in the dust lay a gleaming sea blue crystal longsword. It was narrow and had a beautiful but simplistic design. It seemed to call to Vega, singing a soft unheard melody that only she could hear. Upon swinging the blade it would ring out with a sharp bright tone, almost like music.
Down the center of the crystal sword were inscribed words that only appeared to Vega when angled into a certain light.

‘May you never break’

Another crystal sword lay within the dust, it was a mate to Vega’s but it was a muted green like the color of mist over woodland in the morning. It was somewhat broader and more masculine in form, but the same simple artistic theme remained. It called to Arlo, humming gently in a deeper harmonious tone that complimented her sword’s voice perfectly. If swung it through the air the blade would reverberate with an echoing call that was stern and commanding.

Upon closer inspection he too would see an inscription down the center of his blade that contained two simple words…and perhaps a message from a spirit that had simply lost herself to loneliness.

‘Remember me’

Behind the pair the children had seemed to have snapped out of the trance Perfection had trapped them in. They looked at Arlo and Vega with fearful and confused expressions.

“Where am I?” The older boy asked, his platinum white locks shifting in the dark of the cavern.

“Who am I?” he added, touching his own face gently with a pale hand.

The little girl whimpered with the same confusion. They had no memory of who they were, or where they belonged, but at least Perfection’s control over them seemed to have dissipated.
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She hit the crystal and felt the reverberations from her strike moving up her arms, but Vega didn't stop, couldn't stop. The screeching sounds as her sword embedded gave her hope, but then something stopped it and Vega screamed in pure anger. "Arlo! ARLO!!" Tears poured down her face and she felt fear and fury bubbling in her chest. "Jus' keep breathin' Arlo, please. Please...."

Then, the voice came again and Vega heard it. Clearly, completely and utterly she heard it. Over the screams which were the sounds of Perfection dying, or whatever it was that was happening, Vega heard it. The time would come when she lost him? When she was alone and Arlo was not with her, and she was alone. It was, of course, as well aimed a blow against her as any Vega struck that trial.

But what Perfection did not realise, or did not know or care was that, even if it was true. Even if Perfection was right, then it made not the slightest difference to Vega. Because if she was alone it was because she had left him. He wasn't leaving her and she knew that. She didn't doubt it. Because the difference between her and Perfection was that the two of them were complete opposites. Vega saw all her own flaws, recognised her own imperfections and yet she knew without a doubt that so did Arlo and he loved her for them, for herself.

So, her worries and her fears and insecurities? They were her own and they were her and more than that? They were temporary and transitory and she would lose them and probably replace them with new ones. It didn't matter. They didn't.

"Arlo! Ow! Arlo!!!" she screamed out and raised a hand to cover her eyes as the crystal shattered, but she moved forward. Forward towards him and she fell to her knees, her sword clattering to the floor as she fell into his arms. ""Are you a'right? Really?" Her hands were on him as tears flowed unheeded down her cheeks. Her hand went to his hair and Vega didn't, couldn't speak. Instead, she kissed him and sobbed against him. "How many times 'ave I told you not to get trapped in crystals by white haired women? How many?!"

Her hands on his face, his chest and arms told the story of how worried she was, how relieved and shocked as much as the swirling colours of her eyes. She didn't pay any attention to her cuts, she was unmindful. But then, the children spoke and Vega turned around and smiled, wiping away her tears and sniffing loudly. "Hey, you two. I'm Vega an' this is Arlo. We'll help you, a'right? You got a bit lost an' swizzled about, an' stuff, but you're safe now. We won't let no one hurt you. Come on."

She saw the sword and knelt to pick it up. If she could, she also picked up some of the dust and popped it in a bag. Then, she held her hands out, one to each child and she spoke as calmly as she could. "Come on then, you pair. Let's get you back home, I bet there's folks what are worried sick about you." She looked at Arlo, then and smiled. It was a shaky, slight smile and she knew that, but it was the best she could do and it was most genuine. Then, she glanced and looked at his hand. "What you got there?" Vega asked, an expression of curiosity on her face.
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Arlo knew precious little about what was going on outside the prison he'd been dragged into by Perfection. And that's what it was. A prison that threatened to swallow him whole. He only knew that Vega was fighting to free him. Not because Lyova told him as much, his little diri was more focused on hounding him back into a state of wakefulness. But Arlo knew, because he knew Vega.

If he'd been out there with her, he'd have told Perfection how wrong she was. About being broken. About losing him. About all of it. But Arlo also knew that Vega could and would hold her own. It was his job to hold his, so long as he was able. And then it all came apart around him. Crystal shards exploded around him, outwards, collided and left his ears ringing as he was finally freed. And his knees buckled from the exertion, and because he'd been so close to a state of unconsciousness.

It took a few trills to come to but when he did, Arlo shook his head to clear away the fog, and lifted his hand, uncurled his fingers. How could that be? How could those pearls have gotten there? He knew them, as well as he'd known his mother, and they were hers. The cosmos worked in strange ways, he thought as Vega helped him up off the the ground. It was the only explanation he could think of. "I'm alright," he said, though she cut that bit off with a kiss and he didn't complain.

"Are you alright? Are you hurt?" And then of all things he grinned when she fussed at him. 'Must be my magnetic charm," he said. Finally getting fully up off the floor, something there caught his eye. But more than that, it seemed to call to him and he reached back down and wrapped his hand round the sword's hilt. He didn't notice the inscription at first, there'd been far too much, and was too much still going on to stop and consider. What mattered was that it was over. There was no question that he'd remember, one way or another.

It appeared that the children had been freed as well, and as usual, Vega was quick to offer her help. Fair enough, they couldn't just abandon them here in this place. "My mother's pearls," he said, smiling a little, and curiously, when Vega asked. Then he slipped the string into his pocket. "She's got a good left hook." He'd explain that later. But for now? "Come on then, we'll just find your parents," he said to the kids. And if there weren't any or they had trouble finding them? Not to worry. In fact, "I'd say an orphanage or the Thunder Priestesses would be better equipped to find out where they belong, don't you?"
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I just want to say that I genuinely enjoyed writing this thread with you both. I laughed, I cried and I rooted for both of you. I enjoyed that both Arlo and Vega faced very different challenges in this story, and both were challenges that I think they needed to get past. Vega squared off against her fears of inadequacy after healing from her shattered legs, and proved that nothing can slow her down, especially when she's defending the person she loves. She is undaunted even in the face of great adversity. The woman is a fiesty beast.

Arlo faced a different if not more insurmountable task in facing down the image of his birth father that he had always dreamed off. I hadn't really know how this story would end up, but I was as pleased as punch with how things turned out. Arlo showed true strength in resisting the temptation of having the father he always wished for, and was rewarded with being given a second chance to say goodbye to his mother. I teared up while writing Nella's dialogue, and again when I read Arlo's reaction. I can't wait to see where Arlo goes in the future. He's a remarkable man.



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Harmony:

A masterwork crystal sword forged from the body of Perfection. This sword is nearly as hard as Adamantite and slices just as cleanly. On the flat of the sword two words will appear when the blade is held in the right light that only Arlo can see. The words are: "Remember me".

Harmonic Ballad:Harmony is unique as it 'sings' when the blade is swung creating a deep resonate tone that sounds similar to the long peal of a massive bell. The sound is not loud enough to startle anyone but it can be heard even amid the din of an ongoing battle. The Harmonic Ballad creates an aura around the wielder roughly twenty feet in diameter that inspires those around them to stand firm and face the enemy. Harmonic Ballad heightens the discipline of nearby allies along with that of the wielder, allowing them and their comrades to bravely face down the most fearsome of foes. [NOTE: This effect is strengthened slightly and it's radius of effect increased by ten feet when in use alongside the sword Melody


March to Arms: Arlo will find over time that, after using the sword for several trials [20 trials] that Harmony will return to his hand if he focuses enough on the sword, the blade with resonate with sound before flying into his grasp, as if borne on an invisible wind. This effect can only be achieved if the sword is within his line of sight. This ability cannot be used to harm others as Harmony will always move around obstacles before returning to it's master's hand. White Hair: Because of his time in the crystal, Arlo now has two matching brushstrokes of white hair at his temples. Even if he attempts to dye his hair the white hue will return within the break as if it is insisting to be seen. Mirror of Imperfections: On their way out of the cavern Arlo found one of the mirrors at the bottom of the lake. It is a silver hand-mirror that seems to constantly show the onlooker the worst possible version of themselves. Wrinkles and crows feet will be enhanced and the subject's reflection will seem far older than they really are. Looking into the mirror seems to summon feelings of depression and negativity in those that gaze upon it. Nella's Pearls:This simple but familiar string of pearls somehow ended up in your hands after you awoke from the crystal. They are indeed your mother's pearls and they seemed to have been intentionally gifted to you. Mistral Reward: You have been given 200gn for returning the children to Mistral Village from the grateful parents. Crystal Ring: Within the dusty remains of Perfection's crystal you find a silver ring with a diamond shaped crystal affixed to the top. The crystal constantly shifts between hues of green, blue and purple while occasionally becoming colorless. The colors seems to have something to do with your current emotional state, similar to how Biqaj eyes work.

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Some bruises and scrapes - most will heal fully within a couple trials.

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Detection: Taking notice of a change in the temperature of an environment
Detection: Noticing the physical similarities between the captor and the captives
Gardening: Stormflowers – Purple flowers that only grow in Rharne
Endurance: Swimming through an underground cavern
Endurance: Fighting against a weight on your chest
Etiquette: Admitting when you haven’t given someone enough credit
Etiquette: Saying goodbye to a loved one
Etiquette: Keeping your eyes off a lady who’s in soggy clothes
Hunting: It’s difficult to find footprints in a sterile environment
Navigation: Recognizing a familiar place
Psychology: Anticipating that someone is trying to get a rise out of you
Psychology: Pointing out flaws in an enemy’s reasoning
Tactics: Choose to intervene when children are in danger
Tactics: Knowing when you are being baited
Tactics: Being suspicious of traps
Tactics: Looking for vulnerabilities in your seemingly perfect opponent
Storytelling: Creating the story of"The Lake of Lost Souls"
Swimming: Keeping an eye on the waters beneath you
Resistance: Fighting against an artificially created sleep
Unarmed Combat Brawling: Kicking to get free
Non-Skill Knowledge
Spirits - Spirits of Perfection
Stories: The Lake of the Lost Souls: "
Lost souls entrapped in mirrors of all kinds. Trapped and anguished for arcs upon end, from every conceivable era from the dawn of man, to here and now. Kept there by some vengeful and lonely old crone who's own reflection repelled her. As if it was a comeuppance aimed at others for their natural beauty."
Vega

Points

XP:15

Renown

+15 for saving two children and returning them to Mistral Village

Rewards and Consequences

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Melody:
A masterwork sea blue crystal sword forged from the body of Perfection. This sword is nearly as hard as Adamantite and slices just as cleanly. On the flat of the sword several words will appear when the blade is held in the right light that only Vega can see. The words are: "May You Never Break".

Melodic Ballad:Melody is unique as it 'sings' when the blade is swung creating a bright resonate tone that sounds similar to the sharp peal of an echoing bell. The sound is not loud enough to startle anyone but it can be heard even amid the din of an ongoing battle. The Melodic Ballad creates an aura around the wielder roughly twenty feet in diameter that will cause enemies to be put on edge and be innately intimidated by the wielder. Enemies will be more likely to flee, especially if they do not possess at least Competency in Discipline. Something about Melody's sharp piercing voice; although beautiful seems to unnerve opponents, while leaving allies completely alone. This effect is dependent on Vega's opinions of the people around her. [NOTE: This effect is strengthened slightly and it's radius of effect increased by ten feet when in use alongside the sword Harmony


March to Arms: Vega will find over time that, after using the sword for several trials [20 trials] that Melody will return to her hand if she focuses enough on the sword, the blade with resonate with it's telltale song before flying into her grasp, as if borne on an invisible wind. This effect can only be achieved if the sword is within her line of sight. This ability cannot be used to harm others as Melody will always move around obstacles before returning to it's master's hand.
Mirror of Perfections: On their way out of the cavern Vega found one of the mirrors at the bottom of the lake. It is a golden hand-mirror that seems to constantly show the onlooker the best possible version of themselves. Some would consider this an artist's tool as it will always show a perfected version of the world reflected in it. Those that look into the mirror always report feeling a swell in self confidence. Mistral Reward: You have been given 200gn for returning the children to Mistral Village from the grateful parents. Crystal Pendant: Within the dusty remains of Perfection's crystal you find a beautiful crystal necklace on a golden chain. There is a perfectly faceted diamond shaped crystal as the pendant.The crystal constantly shifts between hues of gold, crimson and orange while occasionally becoming colorless. The colors seems to have something to do with your current emotional state, similar to how Biqaj eyes work. Though the pendant glows especially bright when Vega is angry, as if feeding off the fire within her.

Mark

It was near dusk when Arlo and Vega made it out of Perfection's grotto and into the daylight. The darkness that had fallen over Mistral Wood seemed to have departed and a golden glow seemed to hang over everything. A woman stood before them, ankle deep in the shallow creek. She wore gilded armor with a soft linen robe that wrapped modestly around her body. Her hair was a bright almost radiant blonde and her eyes gleamed like miniature golden suns. No one would dare claim that this woman was not touched by divinity.

She strode toward Vega, her booted feet somehow not making a sound as she stepped through the water and onto the shore of the cavern mouth to stand in front of the red haired woman. Vega was peppered with cuts and bruises but she had lost none of the fire in her eyes even after facing the wrathful Spirit.

"You never faltered, not once, even though he had been taken from you." Qylios said proudly while glancing briefly toward Arlo. "You clung to the bond that you share and found courage in it's strength. Never forget how much stronger you can be together Eva." The Immortal reached out to clap her hand on Vega's left arm almost like she was speaking with a fellow comrade. Vega would feel a curious tingle there where the contact was made before a single coppery band of light encircled her forearm as the armored woman released her.

When she looked up the ethereal woman had vanished and the strange ephemeral golden aura clinging to the area had dissipated to be replaced by the dim light of dusk. There was no denying what had just happened. A single name reverberated in Vega's mind, like the peal of a distant bell.

Qylios.
Mark Awarded (Celarion - Favored )
Bond (Minor) The Favored can Bond with 1 other person. In doing so the Bonded individual gains a single glowing band around their left forearm. The Bond remains as long as both the Favored and the Bonded allow it. The Bond only functions within 300 feet of the Favored, and dissipates shortly beyond that distance.
Illustrious Skills I Add an extra three skill points to one of the following skills: Blades, Leadership, Discipline, or Endurance. Any skill points granted by this Mark can break the 100 point cap on skills.
Bound in Battle The Favored and those Bonded with them are better able to fight together. Their tactics and movements flow almost seamlessly with little-to-no spoken communication. The Bond passes insights and slight thoughts between those Bonded while in combat together.

Injuries

A peppering of cuts that will take a good ten trials to fully heal. There should be very little scarring. Medicine will help these heal faster.

Knowledge

Blades (Longsword): Taking your opponent’s momentum into account
Blades(Longsword): Evading an attack while launching a counterattack
Blades(Longsword): Striking at the fragile point of a crystal
Cosmetology: Squeezing water out of your hair to keep up appearances
Detection: Taking notice of a change in the temperature of an environment
Detection: Taking in the differences between the set of mirrors
Detection: Discerning when something seems artificial
Discipline: Resisting negativity from disembodied voices
Discipline: Imperfections can sometimes make you stronger
Endurance: Keep striking even when you are weary
Endurance: Swimming through an underground cavern
Etiquette: Maintaining your modesty when swimming
Investigation: Making the connection between a similarity between voices
Intimidation: Making a very serious threat with your weapon
Leadership: Keeping everyone focused on the same goal
Socialization: Telling a loved one not to worry about you
Socialization: Letting your partner know when there is a strange disembodied voice in your head.
Socialization: Smiling to apologize
Swimming: Checking the water beneath you
Tactics: Baiting your opponent with name-calling
Non-Skill Knowledge
Spirits: - Spirits of Perfection
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