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”Yeh, I used to think it’d be worth making better at least. Now I don’t know.” Rakvald shrugged, allowing her to put a hand on his shoulder in comfort. ”Maybe it can be, who knows. Maybe Ildred will bring the Agricultural guild some much needed prosperity.”

”I ain’t a vengeful man.” Rakvald assured her, though she already said she believed him. He put his hands on her arms as she wrapped them around his shoulders. ”I just get my blood boiled sometimes when I think of what these bleeders, fanatics, and monsters do to other people, when they dare to do such to me.”

It was true, Rakvald understood by now the intricacies of initiation, perhaps better than he knew the practical applications of half the magics he possessed. ”Aye, and don’t worry about it hurting me. Have you ever heard of how Graft initiations are to go? You have to eat some rotten meat off the body of your master, regurgitate it repeatedly, and eat it again. If you don’t keep it down the last time, you lose! Very risky. Need a strong stomach for it.”

Finally, he listened to her advice on how to deal with the situation with the boy that had not yet entered the world. He quirked an eyebrow at that, wondering what her interest in this situation arrived from. ”That sounds reasonable… But why are you so concerned about this? I mean I get that nobody wants a kid to go through hard times…”

He grinned when she invited him out to drink and play more games. ”Ya, I’m up for anything after this. Maybe I should get some proper new clothes while we’re out and about. I mean before we hit more bars and gaming parlors!”

The loin cloth, in retrospect, was a hasty decision whilst launching himself out from the Flutterbus into the ocean. ”We’ll show these Quacians how to party!” He pumped a fist.

”And anyway, I agree I’ll give it time, and let the boy come to know his mother on his own. I just dread that she’ll mistreat him. But maybe there is some kind of maternal instinct in her that will override her evil impulses…”
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Rakvald had such a fire to him, a hot blaze to the way he spoke even in his assurances, and how he considered the various villainy of their shared city. While Zarik – in the totem form of his sister, Tyara - appreciated the city around them, even the dilapidated buildings and lack of nature, she understood that certain aspects about Quacia were frustrating and rightfully concerning. It was only her ignorance, though, that she couldn’t say whether other cities were any better.

She focused on the intoxicated concept of sharing the spark… it wasn’t something Zarik would’ve considered in a normal state of mind, but she’d gone so far from normal and much of that had to do with the very spark they spoke about, the one she had allowed into herself. Perhaps, she considered, if she initiated another mage into it… another man connected, one by her own choice... the spark would lessen, the spark might split and...

The bridge of her nose wrinkled when Rakvald shared about Graft initiations. She stuck out her tongue and said, “Gross. That’s like… torture.

In fact, she felt as if she’d seen her father force something similar to what Rakvald described onto a few of their Intended over the arcs. She mentioned, “Actually, initiations are torturous, I suppose. Least the ones I'm aware of. One could use the threat of them effectively...”

Zarik made a barter for initiation, then, for the sake of Rakvald’s child. She sat back on her heels and glanced up at the night sky. Eyes wide, the biqaj felt another wave of the Pray Soup surge through her, then she said, “It’s better for him to decide whether he likes his mother or not. If you decide for him, it’s… it’ll always be a mystery unsolved, something that can’t ever be recovered later on. I should know, I was taken from my ma when I was a young boy. Now that I'm able to find her, I find that she's dead.”

She shook her head, then smiled slightly and added, “Sorry. I suppose drink loosens my tongue more than it should. But…” she offered they go drinking after she transferred the spark.

His agreement to both the offer and to mention of the boy, Zarik nodded and smiled a bit brighter.

“You’ll want to,” she dug around in her pocket, then took out Rakvald’s finger. “Hold this. And focus on who you are, don’t forget your identity.”

“It won’t so much hurt as it will feel like you can be anything, anyone, and… and still, you’ll have to choose to be yourself again despite this. Let yourself go through acknowledgment of who you are, who you truly are - no matter how terrible it is to admit - and who you could be, who you will be, and bring yourself together after complete dissolution.”


Zarik stood then, in the slender female body covered only by the trenchcoat and moved closer to Rakvald. She placed an open hand against his forehead, fingers grasped between strands of his hair.

She asked in a loud declarative voice, “Rakvald, my friend, are you ready to Become?”

And if he said yes, her other hand rested under his jaw in a firm hold. The spark inside the Becomer shivered, activated with intense desire to infect the next vessel and burrow into a new mage.

Her hands grew hot, spark sent into Rakvald to start the process of twisted and melting skin. Zarik let go, once the spark had transferred – with a swiftly severed connection between them – and stepped back along the roof to witness the Lothar's initiation unfold. She would not look away, not even for a trill.
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Rakvald was moved enough by Zarik's experience with never having known her mother, that he felt that alone was enough to thwart his desire for revenge. Perhaps Ildred would be a good mother to their son. And there may yet be an opportunity to bury the hatchet, or at least establish contact with his son. "I won't make the decision for him. If she wants to raise my child, I won't get in her way."

"No, no apology needed! You may have changed my mind with that loose tongue!" He smiled sadly.

Rakvald quirked an eyebrow when she handed back his gift to her, and Zarik told him to hang onto it, and focus on who he was. He grunted in affirmation. Lothar were often very in tune with who they were, having memories that trace back centuries. He would not be so easily confused by the magical transformations to come.

The transformation sounded... well torturous was a good word, based on how she described it. He supposed there were few magics that were gentle about the way they imparted their powers. Nevertheless, as she finally asked him if he was ready to become, he nodded his head, "I'm ready, Zarik! So fucking ready!" He pumped his fist, then let his arms fall to his sides, still gripping that finger he'd torn off his hand.

Then, she touched him under the jaw, gripping him there. At first he felt very little. But soon enough, he felt a extraordinary sensation.

His skin, every unmarked and uncorrupted part of his flesh began to dissolve. After a few moments, even the flesh bearing his corruptions began to enter a flux, where he was dissolving. He felt like he could become anything, everything. If he just willed himself to turn, it would be easy as that

His flesh and bones softened like clay. His eyes didn't knwo what they wanted to be.

Then, he remembered the instructions of his initiator, Zarik. He must remember who he was, will himself to it. He was Rakvald the Last, likely to be the final of his line with no one to watch over his next son he would perish into the ashes of future eons.

Yet that would not come today. He stood strong against the morphic energies coursing through him, remembering every point of interest in his long history. A history that hadn't seen much of him change until very recently, when he began learning the wonderous ways of magic.

He stared into Zarik's eyes, seeing his own clay-like visage reflected there. He stood firm, hardening the clay of his flesh, the finest of materials which had ever been sculpted. Thus the becoming spark finally settled into his soul, existing there in an internal hierarchy with the hone and graft spark. He was far away from mortal now. The one who had never known magic was just a shadow between Rakvald the First and who he was now.

When it was done, he felt exhausted, and knelt on the ground to recover his energy. He felt the vigors coursing through his body as it acclimated to the new 'company' residing in its host. Repairing what small damage it could.

Rakvald looked at the blood-red eye on his left arm, and noted it was still there. He still felt the thick hide on his spine and back. He was still much as he was, yet felt there was so much more he could become.

"Thank you." He finally said, to Zarik. "Let's go get that drink now."
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Rakvald

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The opening, Rakvald diving from the flutterbus dressed in nothing more than a loincloth and a big club, then swimming ashore in Quacia pulled me in at once. Your dialogue is great fun all the way through the thread. I’m loving the humour. His answer to Zarik’ s tears is, naturally, “Here, have a drink!” That’s really good characterization. A bit later when they compare mage mutations on the roof and Rakvald acts like it’s about showing off battle scars while Zarik acts like it’s about showing beauty marks it can only be called a great show. Then comes the interaction that leads up to the initiation. Rakvald’s reason for wanting an initiation to becoming is that he wants to become pig and spy on his pig ... this is wonderfully wacky. But, it isn’t, they are serious and at the end when the initiation happens it seems natural, given how drunk they are.

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15 (Can be used for magic, Becoming)

Loot

Pinkie finger (self-totem)

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Renown

5 for drinking in public

Injuries

Knowledge

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Taking a dive from the flutterbus.
Becoming: A shapeshifter's art.
Becoming: Can become a pig even.
Becoming: Can become other people.
Becoming: Some Becomers turn into terrible monsters.
Becoming: Three Sovereign substances: Blood, Bone, Skin.
Becoming: Totem: Pinky Finger Self-totem.
Becoming: Initiation: Must remember and bear in mind who and what you are.
Climbing: Trying to get up a wall.
Graft: Remove a pinky finger.
Intelligence: Contact: Zarik, a shapeshifting biqaj
Logistics: Planning a kidnapping.
Socialization: Contact: Zarik, drinking buddy.
Socialization: Take a new friend to a bar to get wasted.
Socialization: Using wine as a social lubricant.
Sociology: Kidnapping is wrong.
Swimming: Swimming into shore.

Zarik/Llyr

Overview

Your opening is great too, with the description of Quacia and the atmosphere. I smiled at Zarik’s reaction to Rakvalds arrival. Also, the striking contrast between the two PCs was set at once. Zarik’s weepy, stammering and fragile style is special, to say the least. Being slapped on the back by the macho Rakvald seems to almost undo him. But, after a drink, he invites Rakvald to come and “watch his mutations”. And then ... striptease on a rooftop! This story is already priceless at that point but it doesn’t stop there. When he shifts into his female form she changes more than meets the eye, at least it seems so to me. The end with the initiation is really well written, but she does it when she’s drunk and irresponsible so, what will come of this ...

Points

15 (Can be used for magic, Becoming)

Loot

a new initiate, for better or for worse, time will tell ...

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Renown

5 for drinking in public

Injuries

Knowledge

Skill:
Becoming: Initiating Another Mage.
Becoming: Rakvald, my first initiate (in becoming).
Detection: This drink tastes funny.
Resistance: Hallucinogens.
Resistance: The highs and lows of a chemical in your body.
Resistance: Inebriated sensation of euphoria.
Socialization: Going out drinking.
Socialization: Getting to know someone through recreation.
Climbing: Scaling a building in the dark.
Climbing: Guiding another person up.
Climbing: Choosing a spot that someone less skilled can also get to.
Linguistics: Compromising between two different fluent languages.
Intelligence – Contact: Rakvald, a Lothar mage from Quacia.
Intelligence: Overlapping social connections.
Persuasion: Don’t kidnap a baby, even if he’s your son.
Running: Can improve weariness and a poor mood.
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Non-Skill:
Rakvald: Initiated him in Becoming.
Rakvald: Doesn’t like the Theocratum.
Rakvald: Is expecting a son.
Rakvald: Wanted to take his son away from Quacia.
Rakvald: Wants revenge against Dosan Saito.
Rakvald: Knows how to have a good time.
Rakvald: My… friend???
Rakvald: A drinking buddy.
Rakvald: Thinks my sister, Tyara, is “hot”.
Rakvald: Grafter, Flesh-Sculptor.
Rakvald: Gave me his finger. I gave it back.
Rakvald: Offered to let me stay at his place in Desnind.
Dosan: Carved a mark into Rakvald's back.
Transportation: Flutterbus.


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