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It was all taking place in a bit of a haze. At least for Arlo. A glowing, wonderful, multi-colored one brought on by countless butterflies and the one that seemed to be leading them all. He'd marvel at all of that later, and look into what the word meant. Šíšu.

But at that particular bit, it was the stranger who Arlo believed wasn't an ordinary stranger at all, who'd captured most of his attention. Him, and the fact that Vega was making eyes at him. He'd still considered giving her an elbow in the ribs, on the sly, but it wouldn't have done him any good. Besides, turned out she'd discover it soon enough. And there'd be no doubt left for him either.

He didn't want the strand of feathers and beads back. Why would he? Apparently it had fallen into exactly the hands he'd hoped and imagined it might. He'd no more ask for it back than willingly relinquish his hat. Well he would, he guessed, if it was commanded of him. Would they meet again? "If we do," he said. "Hopefully then, I'll have better stories to tell."

Maybe, it meant that all the prayers, the offerings, the devotion, they'd been heard, seen, acknowledged.

But then? The comment took him completely by surprise. Hoped who wasn't his? He didn't have time to ask, only be confounded as the Immortal grabbed hold of Vega. It was definitely too late to tell her now. And by the looks of it, from Arlo's perspective she wasn't putting up much of a fight or protesting too loudly. He frowned, but wasn't quite sure what he thought about that.

And then she too, knew who the stranger was before he was gone in much the same way he'd appeared. He looked aside at her when she spoke, and a deep frown edged its way into his expression. "What do you mean, you've never?" He didn't expect an answer. Not then anyway, but only pulled her up off the log before heading back to their camp. "Well if you've never, you didn't seem to mind all that much," he said dryly.
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He found himself wondering if this would be how he spent the rest of his life. Mourning the loss of his innocence and his old self, fearing the beasts that were now gone. It didn't feel right and he wished he could progress with his life and leave it behind but he was not yet ready for that, there were still questions he needed answered by his dear immortal. He also needed to rediscover himself, to solve what he wanted from the world again. He now knew he was not a killer at least not a killer of other people. It appeared he still could kill animals, he could still hunt for a living but he was still haunted by the people. The ones who he could communicate with and fully understand, he had high respect for the creatures of the forest but there was something very different from killing a rabbit and person.

He looked at her as she spoke and he felt somewhat ashamed that he was bringing down the celebrations. He used to be just quiet and somewhat distant but that was okay, now he was actually expressing an open sadness at a time of happiness. "Sọ yatsa, sev aji kïnä ọwọpọ, sev jasi takip been miov täpätä ar ke’u ìlana ọkan-kẹta eo." He forced a smile, and as she suggested, tried now to enjoy the night rather than let it be ruined by the past. He could do nothing to change that but he could focus on doing right in his future. Having seen Moseke here made him remember he had wished to see her again. He needed to speak with her and ask her one question.

As he remembered he had a question he needed to ask it was too late, while he stood surrounded by the light of the iyọ she bid them goodnight. Her old form resting on the staff he recognised from their first meeting and making her way back barefoot to the temple. He longed to call after her and to chase her and question her now. However, he knew better than to chase and demand things from an immortal, she was old and powerful and he could only hope she would find him when she thought it was right.

"Ibiti syanan, olorijori anou iyọ igbejade ke’u muradi ọwọpọ." He whispered as she left back into the temple. His last glance at her revealing the smile on her once again perfected lips, her young form being the last sight to reach his eyes before she entered back inside. He had not expected to see her this night but it had helped him in some ways. His hope in her was fully restored and he did again believe she would help him and be there for him. After all he had done for her and Desnind he could not bring himself to believe she would not. Now he just wished to see her again and alone, somewhere they could be open and free to talk.

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REWARDS

ASARI

  • Knowledge:
    • Moseke: Immortal of Life, Stone, Earth, and Nature
    • Moseke: Disguised as an Old Woman
    • Holiday: Mwẹnz Tsäbtä/Star Release
    • Fauna: Iyọ
    • Fauna: The Golden Iyọ
    • Ti'wang: Navik's Father
    • Navik: Halfbreed
    Loot:
    • Moseke's Slippers: These ornate moccasins are embroidered with the image of the Ojọgbọn. Yellow, blue, and green beans are scattered across the top of the moccasins to symbolize the Mwẹnz Tsäbtä and the corresponding iyọ. Although these shoes are unassuming, they are enchanted to permit you to remain in your glamour form, even in complete darkness. Now people will fear you less in the shadows.
    Injuries: None
    Fame: +5 (Taking Part in the Mwẹnz Tsäbtä)
    Devotion: +10 Moseke (Meeting Moseke)

    Story: 4/5
    Collaboration: 3/5 (2 posts)
    Structure: 5/5


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VEGA

  • Knowledge:
    • Cassion: Immortal of Travel, Adventure, Stories, and Hunger
    • Cassion: Wears Arlo's Gifted Necklace
    • Cassion: Kissed You
    • Cassion: Tells Killer Stories
    • Arlo: Wears Cassion's Hat
    • Holiday: Mwẹnz Tsäbtä/Star Release
    • Fauna: Iyọ
    • Fauna: The Golden Iyọ
    • Linguistics: Practicing Xanthean at a Holiday Party
    Loot:
    • The permanent feeling on your lips that Cassion, the burly and forceful traveler, has kissed you. Aren't you lucky.
    Injuries: None
    Fame: +5 (Taking Part in the Mwẹnz Tsäbtä)
    Devotion: +10 Cassion (Meeting Cassion), +2 Cassion (Being Kissed by Cassion)

    Story: 6/5
    Collaboration: 5/5
    Structure: 5/5


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ARLO

  • Knowledge:
    • Cassion: Immortal of Travel, Adventure, Stories, and Hunger
    • Cassion: Wears Arlo's Gifted Necklace
    • Cassion: Gave You This Hat
    • Cassion: Tells Killer Stories
    • Cassion: Kissed Vega
    • Holiday: Mwẹnz Tsäbtä/Star Release
    • Fauna: Iyọ
    • Fauna: The Golden Iyọ
    • Storytelling: Building on Truth
    • Linguistics: Rakahi
    Loot: None
    Injuries: None
    Fame: +5 (Taking Part in the Mwẹnz Tsäbtä)
    Devotion: +10 Cassion (Meeting Cassion), +2 Cassion (Cassion Accepted Your Gift)

    Story: 6/5
    Collaboration: 5/5
    Structure: 5/5


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TI'NIVA

  • Knowledge:
    • Moseke: Ever Present
    • Linguistics: Rakahi
    • Teaching: Helping an Outsider Speak Xanthean
    • Field Craft: Fires Need Dry Wood
    • Holiday: Mwẹnz Tsäbtä/Star Release
    • Fauna: Iyọ
    • Fauna: The Golden Iyọ
    • Ti'wang: Navik's Father
    • Navik: Halfbreed
    • Storytelling: Hard with Little Adventure Experience
    Loot: None
    Injuries: None
    Fame: +5 (Taking Part in the Mwẹnz Tsäbtä)
    Devotion: +5 Moseke (Honor Her Presence and Obeying Her Command), +5 Cassion (Sort of Meeting Cassion)

    Story: 6/5
    Collaboration: 5/5
    Structure: 5/5


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XI'TALIAH

  • Knowledge:
    • Cassion: Immortal of Travel, Adventure, Stories, and Hunger
    • Cassion: Wears Arlo's Gifted Necklace
    • Cassion: Tells Killer Stories
    • Arlo: Wears Cassion's Hat
    • Gardening: The Perfect Amount of Water
    • T'soreli: Wise with Rhetoric
    • Rhetoric: Using Stories to Teach
    • Holiday: Mwẹnz Tsäbtä/Star Release
    • Fauna: Iyọ
    • Fauna: The Golden Iyọ
    Loot: None
    Injuries: None
    Fame: +5 (Taking Part in the Mwẹnz Tsäbtä)
    Devotion: +10 Cassion (Meeting Cassion)

    Story: 4/5
    Collaboration: 1/5 (1 post)
    Structure: 5/5


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NAVIK

  • Knowledge:
    • Moseke: Immortal of Life, Stone, Earth, and Nature
    • Moseke: Disguised as an Old Woman
    • Moseke: Carries a Birch Walking Stick
    • Moseke: Know Your Father
    • Holiday: Mwẹnz Tsäbtä/Star Release
    • Fauna: Iyọ
    • Fauna: The Golden Iyọ
    • Asari: Naerrik in Desnind
    • Ti'niva: Polite Sev'ryn
    Loot: None
    Injuries: None
    Fame: +5 (Taking Part in the Mwẹnz Tsäbtä)
    Devotion: +10 Moseke (Meeting Moseke)

    Story: 5/5
    Collaboration: 5/5
    Structure: 5/5


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Comments: I apologize to all involved that this grade has taken so long for me to get to you. For those that followed the story from beginning to end, I rewarded you with an extra point in Story. Ti'niva, I did not grant you knowledges for Cassion as you left before he could reveal himself. I granted you partial devotion for sort of meeting him.

Now that the formalities have been completed, let me say how much I enjoyed this thread. It was a very successful holiday event and I hope everyone enjoyed themselves. Hopefully we will see several of you back in Desnind in the near future to join us for more fun shenanigans.

If you feel I've missed anything or if you have questions about your review, please don't hesitate to send me a quick PM. Thank you!
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