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Velaine Krome
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Bear in a Wolf's Forest
City/Area: Krome, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: -
Velaine Krome
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges
Defiance: The Elements Have Soothing Effects
Defiance: Temporary Resistance to the Cold
Defiance: Going Shoeless Helps
Defiance: Calling to See What the Elements Are Seeing
Defiance: Calling the Earth to Look for Someone
Tracking: Following Footprints
Etiquette: Covering Yourself from Your Betrothed’s View
Etiquette: Inappropriate to Kiss a Man You Barely Know
Psychology: Riling Someone Up
Psychology: When Someone Snaps
Discipline: Don’t Look Intimidated
Seduction: Kiss as an Answer

Non-Skill Knowledges
Nathaniel Endor: Wields a Spear
Nathaniel Endor: Nearly Speared You
Nathaniel Endor: Ogling You
Nathaniel Endor: Wasn’t As Gentlemanly
Nathaniel Endor: Snaps at Being Called Brute
Nathaniel Endor: Wants Your Fire
Nathaniel Endor: First Kiss in the Forest

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yeap!
Magic EXP: Yes please!
Nathaniel Endor

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges (8+5)
Fieldcraft: Keeping the Core Warm
Hunting: Noticing a Track
Hunting: Noticing Noise Behind You
Polearms (Spear): Intimidate Wife, Don't Kill Wife
Polearms (Spear): Adrenaline Tightens the Weapon Arm
Polearms (Spear): Spears Roll When Dropped
Polearms (Spear): The Sweeping 180 Degree Spin
Polearms (Spear): Also a Supportive Walking Stick
Psychology: Being Honest and Sincere
Meditation: Taking Time to Think About One's Actions
Etiquette: Nightgowns, Men, and Forests Do Not Mix
Etiquette: Escorting a Lady Home
Seduction: Expressing One's Feelings in a Romantic Setting

Non-Skill Knowledges
Velaine Krome: A Girl Worth Fighting For
Velaine Krome: Shared a Kiss
Velaine Krome: Vivacious

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yeap
Magic EXP: Nope!
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Meeting Mages
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Creepy children being creepy. Profanity. It's a dead thread and I cut up my huge post so I gots enough to count as a collab. I'm trash, I know.
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Deception: Hiding your true feelings
Discipline: Choosing fight over flight
Discipline: Quashing sentiment
Intimidation: A predator's dominance display
Intimidation: Asserting your territory against a perceived rival
Intimidation: Employing the witchbrand for intimidation
Stealth: Keeping to the shadows
Stealth: Creating secret passageways with Corrosion to move freely and unseen

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yeah sure
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: One for the money pt2
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: A tiny smidge of violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Unarmed: Temple strike
  2. Stealth: don't give away your location when hiding
  3. Stealth: don't hide in the same spot again after having been found
  4. Stealth: catch unconscious people to keep the silence intact
  5. Acrobatics: diving while running
  6. Strength: supporting a grown man
Loot: Keys!
Injuries/Overstepping: Eh, some bruises I assume
Fame: Probably negative.
Collaboration: SOLO
Magic EXP: No
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Yanahalqah
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Strange color blue
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Yrmellyn said she would put up her own review request later
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. tactics: just telling people enough to satisfy their questions, without revealing too much
  2. Etiquette: showing up when invited, even if you don't want to go
  3. Etiquette: Politely refusing
  4. Etiquette: Important when dealing with people you don't want to offend
  5. Etiquette: the customer is always right
  6. Discipline: putting up with annoying questions
  7. Discipline: Complementing a child on a bad drawing
  8. Discipline: Allowing yourself to be painted
  9. Discipline: putting up with Yrmellyn Cole
  10. Discipline: trying to keep sacrasm out of your voice
  • Yrmellyn Cole: A good painter after all
  • Yrmellyn Cole: Provides for Rudi also
  • Location: Yrmellyn Cole's appartment
Loot: +1 painting
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: ehhh
Collaboration: yuppers
Magic EXP: (no)

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Darcyanna Venora
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: In The End
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Drug use and seizure
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Musical Instrument (Piano): Syncopation - the emphasis on a rest of beat in a composition
Musical Instrument (Piano): Minor and major chord groups
Musical Instrument (Piano): Sharps and flats
Musical Instrument (Piano): Key signatures and the relationship to meters
Medicine: Negative reactions to mixing medications
Resistance: Recovering from a drug induced seizure

Loot: -5GN for a vial of Sunshine (pending drug approval).
Injuries/Overstepping: Overall muscle aches (lasting 2 trials), Migraine (lasting 1 trial), Lingering mild head pain (lasting one ten trial).
Fame: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 108
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Celeste Andaris
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: Sisters to Be
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Velaine

Knowledge:
Politics: Trust No One
Politics: Don’t Forget the Treacheries of Nobility
Politics: House Krome and House Andaris Joined Through Marriage
Politics: Need All the Help You Can Get
Politics: Everyone is Out for Themselves
Politics: Prepare for the Betrayals
Etiquette: Addressing a Baroness
Etiquette: Apologizing for the Wrong Dresscode
Psychology: Noting When Someone Avoids a Question

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Celeste Andaris: Xander’s Bride
Celeste Andaris: Baroness of Astedia
Celeste Andaris: Conquered Xander’s Unconquerable Heart
Celeste Andaris: Pregnant



Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Maybe?
Collaboration: Yes

Celeste

Knowledge:
Politics: Everyone is hiding something
Politics: Prepare someone for not meeting the dresscode
Politics: House Krome and House Andaris Joined Through Marriage
Politics: Line up alliances
Politics: Tell people what they want to hear
Politics: Family should, but doesn't, matter
Etiquette: Greeting a sister in law
Etiquette: Putting people at their ease on your wedding

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Velaine Krome: Xander’s sister
Velaine Krome: Potential ally

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Maybe?
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 185
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Thread Name: Newman
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?) Only against tiny barbie doll people
Requested Rewards:
Non-Skill Knowledge
Immortal: Aelig
Aelig: The Faceless one
Immortal: Ilaren
Ilaren: Worshipped in Rharne
Immortal: Lisirra
Lisirra: The Plaguedaughter
Immortal: Syroa
Syroa: The Queen of Masks
Rharne: The city of booze and bass
Rharne: Central Idalosian port of commerce
Rharne: Has irregular working trials for its citizens
Loot: Nu
Injuries/Overstepping: Nu
Fame: Nah
Collaboration: Nu
Magic EXP: Nupe
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Valeria Burhan
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Thread Name: A Blessed Voice
City/Area: Burhan, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Could Pegasus review this please
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Solo - 2 posts=6 skill knowledges
  • Skill
    • Singing: Need to concentrate on breathing
    • Singing: Warming up the vocal cords by humming
    • Singing: Emulating instruments through a capella
    • Singing: Practice makes perfect
    • Deception: Kissing another's cheek to hide true emotions
    • Elithem - Musical Enchantment (Minor): Making others feel the music as you do
  • General
    • NPC Ulyna: Childhood tutor
    • NPC Ulyna: Can be trusted
    • Kiss From a Rose: Song about the Venora
Loot: Um... devotional things maybe? Nah, it's very minor, I understand if that doesn't count.
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: I don't think there's anything but you can check. An audience of one is hardly a public performance
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 137
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Thread Name: The Citrus Deception - Part 1
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Bad wonky dream fanfiction ahead
Requested Rewards:
Nope
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: Traditions
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Carpentry: Mark wood before engraving into it
Carpentry: Score wood to prepare for engraving into it
Carpentry: Fine chisel engraving looks unfinished
Carpentry: Tools for sanding in grooves.
Carpentry: Using the grain in engraving wood
Discipline: Not talking about emotions

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Don't think so?
Collaboration: No
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