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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Flights of Fancy
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: A very old dream thread.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none; dream thread
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: none
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: The Brothers Keeper
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Skill
  • Endurance: Being Rammed By A Goat
Generic
  • Elinora: Works Harder Than She Should
  • Elinora: Arranged For A Caretaker During Her Work Schedule
  • Elinora: Hopes You Are Good Boys
  • Goats: Vicious Evil Creatures
  • Goats: Have Weird Eyes
  • Goats: Smell Funny
  • Felissa: Mother To Elinora's Friend
  • Felissa: A Secondary Caretaker
  • Felissa: Lives With A Small Farm
  • Alexandra: Also Goes By Lex
  • Alexandra: Helps Out Her Grandmother
  • Alexandra: Laughed At You
  • Personal: Rammed By A Yearling Goat
  • Personal: Forevermore, Goats Are The Enemy
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Nurp
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Cat and Mouse
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Cute Kiddy Games abound
Requested Rewards:
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  • Endurance: Games of Chasing
  • Endurance: Running Even When Your Exhausted
  • Running: Avoiding Trouble When It Pursues
  • Running: Being Chased Off By Farmers
  • Deception: Avoiding Unsavory Subjects
  • Seduction: How To Kiss A Girl
Generic
  • Dominek: Likes Lexi A Lot
  • Dominek: Often Pulls Fast Stunts
  • Dominek: Always The Savior
  • Dominek: A Leader In His Own Way
  • Alexandra: Likes To Run Through The Fields
  • Alexandra: First Kiss
  • Alexandra: Likes You Over Dominek
  • Alexandra: Knows How to Test You
  • Personal: The First Kiss
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Nurp
Magic EXP: No
word count: 112
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Thread Name: The Murder Maid
City/Area: Etzos, The Broken Blade
Notes/Warnings: Drunk Ryder
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Strength: Arm Wrestling
Endurance: Falling through a table
Endurance: Ignoring the spinning room
Endurance: Withstanding physical and verbal abuse
Endurance: Smiling through humiliation
Endurance: Living with a bad nickname

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bit of bruising from the table, damaged ego
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Thread Name: The Etzori Chupacabra /viewtopic.php?f=263&t=10271
City/Area: Middlecleft, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: General Kovic MB powers nastiness. You know how it goes.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Stealth: Moving by the walls
Stealth: Making sure you're not followed
Climbing: Stepping on objects to gain height
Strength: Chin up
Acrobatics: Running jump
Acrobatics: Hanging from a rope

Location: Middlecleft
Middlecleft Layout
Middlecleft: People's Militia
Kovic: Plans his meals

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: *shrugs*
Fame: Haven't really done anything, but if you can squeeze some hate, I'd appreciate it
Collaboration: None. I wll continue this plot in a different thread for extra $$$$
Magic EXP: No.

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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: The Butcher's Cut
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language and violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Max:
Blades: Strike the Weapon Hand
Blades: How to Disembowel
Blades: Opponents' Backs are Vulnerable
Unarmed Combat: Uppercut to the Chin
Intelligence: Finding a Suspect in their Favorite Locations
Interrogation: Demanding Answers
Interrogation: Making Accusations
Interrogation: Giving a Chance to Explain
Investigation: Following the Clues
Intimidation: Threat of Powerful Partner
Detection: Body Position Before a Punch
Detection: Finding Something Missing from its Place
Endurance: Running Straight to Fighting

Lavana: Works at a Butcher's Shop
Lavana: A Good Ally in a Fight

Lavana:
Business Management; Honoring Promises
Seduction; Attempt To Steal A Kiss
Tactics; Waylay While Buttonholed
Tactics; Always come to a fight prepared.
Tactics; A fleeing enemy can potentially bring his allies.
Leadership; Trying to take care of a wounded allie.
Intimidation; Laughing While Vanquishing Foes Is Not Only Fun, Its Scary.
Blades; Blade Twisting
Blades; Using The Cross Guard Like A Warhammer.
Blades; Spearing Strike While Half Swording
Unarmed; Head Stomp
Unarmed; Basic Forarm Block.

Maxine, Badass Bitch
Maxine; Her Man Could Be A Fire Mage.

Loot:
Max receives Lavana's necklace

Deductions for Lavana:
Treasured Possession, Silver pendant with amethyst held by twine carrys raskalarns personal imperial seal.
Payment Of 1/2 Maxs Seasonal Expenses for Cylus; Its assumed Lavana is paying for food and not stealing.

Injuries/Overstepping: A minor slash on Max
Fame: Negative fame for killing
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: A Legacy Left Behind
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Sadness waits at the end
Requested Rewards:
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  • Field Craft: Kindling Fires From Embers
Generic
  • Elinora: Suddenly Sick
  • Elinora: Passed Away
  • Personal: The Death of Elinora Barnell
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Nurp
Magic EXP: No[
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Thread Name: Once
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Dream
Requested Rewards:
N/A
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: The Bickering of the Necromancer
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Lost souls and torture
Requested Rewards:
Zipper
Knowledge:
Attunement: Finding a name
Attunement: Note: Names
Attunement: Note: Biqaj
Business Management: Getting on the same page with a business partner
Business Management: The need for communication between stakeholders
Business Management: Trust is essential in business
Business Management: Setting goals
Intelligence: Using Attunement to skim for basic information
Transmutation: The Stinging Sensation of the Rhakros Strongjaw (Bullet ant)
Loot: “Good” quality set of full leather armor, 150GN
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: 5 Renown for torture and magic use

Neronin
Knowledge:
Business Management: Using business space
Business Management: Holding a prisoner in his cell
Business Management: Delegating intimidation
Necromancy: Revenant
Necromancy: Revenants hard to control
Business Management: Don’t let your anger show
NPC: Yoriq Javar
Thrall: Expert Revenant Yoriq Javar
PC: Zipper: Can gain information about people through Attunement
Loot: 150 GN, Revenant Thrall (Yoriq Javar), “Good” Longsword
Injuries: Bruises and scratches, heavy exertion
Renown Opt In: 10 Renown for Soul Theft!

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No. for both, lol
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Seeking Solutions
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Not really
Requested Rewards:

Linika

Knowledge:
Skill-Based Knowledges:
Detection: Identifying Someone by the Books They are Holding
Detection: Too Hasty of a Denial Shows You Know Something
Endurance: Guilt Can be a Truly Debilitating Force
Intimidation: Leaning in Face to Face With a Glare
Investigation: Book Titles Can Tell a Lot About a Person's Goals
Investigation: Unlawful Sources Often Have Rare Information
Persuasion: Blending Threats and Bribes With Your Argument
Persuasion: Good Cop/Bad Cop Rolled into One
Psychology: Recognizing a Friend, and Actually Wanting to Help
Sociology: Knowing When NOT to Add Unrealistic Optimism
Xypha: Identify: Accent Recognition Can Start a Chain of Memories
Xypha: Identify: Sensing the Geographic Origin of an Unfamiliar Word

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Directions to "Hyde and Seek" Shop in Almund
Echo Scrolls and How They Work
Faith's Husband, Pad, is a Man of Many Scientific Talents
Ksamknai: Some Kind of Eastern Sea Monster
NPC: "Knots" - Scalvoran Ex-Pirate, Living in Viden
NPC: Linus: Proprietor of "The Devil's Advocate"
Viden Location: The Library
Viden Location: "The Devil's Advocate" - A Tavern

Loot: +1 Echo Scroll
Loss: 30gn (Bribe for Knots)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive for helping Faith in a number of ways (answering the letter, getting Knots, bribing Knots etc)
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Faith

Knowledge:
Discipline: Whatever it takes for love
Endurance: Being driven by your emotions in pregnancy leads to exhaustion.
Psychology: Friendship is born in the strangest situations
Psychology: Admitting weakness can be hard.
Research: Obscure sources can provide obscure information
Research: Putting together facts and fables
Writing: Trying to convey a sense of urgency in a letter.

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Directions to "Hyde and Seek" Shop in Almund
Echo Scrolls and How They Work
Faith's Husband, Pad, is a Man of Many Scientific Talents
Ksamknai: Some Kind of Eastern Sea Monster
NPC: "Knots" - Scalvoran Ex-Pirate, Living in Viden
NPC: Linus: Proprietor of "The Devil's Advocate"
Viden Location: The Library
Viden Location: "The Devil's Advocate" - A Tavern


Loot: Echo Scroll PB points removed
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Don't think so
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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