Review Requests 2.1.0

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Everything Counts in Large Amounts
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Suggestive themes at the end, FTB
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
(4 posts = 8+1 Knowledges, but this is more fluff anyway)

• Rhetoric: Sharing your blessing story with enthusiasm
• Musical Instrument: Lute: Playing sad songs is sad
• Musical Instrument: Lute: Changing your tune on the fly
• Seduction: That blessing glow, though
• Seduction: Wandering eyes

Elithem Mark Knowledge:

• Musical Enchantment (Minor): Playing emotional songs makes others emotional
• Eye of the Beholder (Minor): Just a little more irresistible

Non-Skill Knowledge:

• Kali’rial: Will stick an arrow in intruders
• Kali’rial: Dangerous when surprised
• Kali’rial: Looks good all the time
• Kali’rial: Always glad to be excited with you

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bump on head.
Fame: N/A
Devotion: +2 (or +3, I was confused how to categorize this … lol) devote act of seduction to Zanik
Collaboration: Yes, with Kali’rial
Magic EXP: No.

[Celeste Andaris]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Pillow Talk
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Following the first time they sleep together, Xander and Celeste discuss their future. Celeste describes an attempted rape

Celeste

(6 posts = 11 knowledge max)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Apologise to the servants for making messes.
Etiquette: Avoid scandal wherever possible
Politics: Sometimes, you create a scandal by fearing one
Politics: Own your actions
Politics: You can not reason with an unreasonable man
Politics: Use witnesses to back up claims
Politics: Pull in those above you in order to solidify your story
Psychology: Speaking the truth can be hard.
Psychology: Emotions are difficult.
Psychology: Impacts of trauma
Psychology: Telling someone you love something which will hurt them.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Don't think so
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Xander

(5 posts =10 knowledge max)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Not showing your emotions
Discipline: Holding on to your rage
Etiquette: It's not really the done thing to wreck the dining room then carry her upstairs
Politics: Sometimes, you create a scandal by fearing one
Politics: Own your actions
Politics: You can not reason with an unreasonable man
Politics: Use witnesses to back up claims
Politics: Pull in those above you in order to solidify your story
Psychology: The feeling of laying in bed with your lover
Psychology: Emotions continue to develop even in adulthood
Strength: Carrying the lady upstairs.


Celeste: Always right. You said it!

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Don't think so?
Devotion: Prayer to Ethelynda (+1)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Celeste Andaris]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Fit for Purpose
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: FTB at the end.

Celeste

(6 posts = 11 knowledge max)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Keeping hold of a weight with outstretched arms.
Endurance: The pain of continued effort.
Endurance: Breathe evenly to increase endurance
Endurance: Pushing yourself to continue, even when already in pain
Seduction: Looking under your lashes
Seduction: Speaking suggestively
Strength: Holding on to a weight with outstretched arms.
Strength: Maintaining a hold increases muscles
Strength: Keep your breathing steady
Strength: Lifting a weight above your head to build strength
Strength: Repetition helps build muscle tone


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Don't think so
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Xander

(5 posts =10 knowledge max)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Don't give in to a whining woman
Discipline: Don't be distracted by attempted seduction
Etiquette: Avoid talking about weight with your wife-to-be
Teaching: Explain why doing something is helpful
Teaching: Demonstrate what you want done
Teaching: Explain whilst demonstrating
Teaching: Physically help when needed
Strength: Demonstrating exercises requires control
Strength: Control focused on core strength
Strength: Identifying areas of weakness


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Don't think so?
Devotion: Prayer to Ethelynda (+1)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Noth]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: In Fear of Difference
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Man is stabbed, other man gets beaten. Nothing too graphic.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: The Face Someone Makes When They Know They'll Die
Medicine: Stomach Wounds Hurt
Torture: Stomach Wounds Hurt
Leadership: Keep Calm to Keep Others Calm
Leadership: More People Calm, the Better.
Leadership: Caring for Lackeys
Leadership: Dead Lackeys Can't Work

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Negative... maybe -4/-5 for it being a very public act of killing
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: No.

[Alistair]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Hound's Graces

Fridgar

City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Graphic Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
x

Loot: +1 Sohr Khal Egg
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: 2x Kill a Moderate-High Beast (+8)
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Alistair

City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Hunting: Sohr Khal
Animal Husbandry: Sohr Khal Eggs
Running: Jogging through intense heat
Running: Jogging a mountain
Endurance: Dealing with fatigue in the Saun heat

Jegers: Dance of the Graces, Complete
Alistair: Enhanced reflexes
Alistair: Received a genetic mutagen

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: 2x Kill a Moderate-High Beast (+8)
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Degrees of Separation

Faith

City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope. Just Faith being geeky. Study thread.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Persuasion: Explaining the impossible
Persuasion: Persuading your mentor to support you
Research: Parts of blood
Research: Differences in blood between races
Research: Putting together information
Research: Using a range of sources

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: New medical breakthrough (+2)
Devotion: Famula: +2 (2x prayers), Vri +2 (2 x pray to Famula)
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: No

[Zana]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Tea & Cakes

Zana

City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Singing: Projecting your voice
Singing: Warm up exercises
Singing: Practice with an instrument
Singing: Tell a story with a song
Singing: Performing for a small group
Socialization: Working a crowd.


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Public Performance: +5
Devotion: Delroth: (Took over an hour getting ready: +3, pray +1 = +4) Zanik: (Pray +1, Devote 3x song to Zanik +9= +10)
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: No

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: This isn't Rocket Science, It's Brain Surgery
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Medical/ deals with terminal illness. But he gets cured!

Nir'wei

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Not crumbling in the face of a terminal diagnosis.
Discipline: Holding on to the shred of hope.
Endurance: The pain of the Rot
Endurance: The final moments before unconsciousness
Endurance: Emotional torture
Meditation: Keeping calm when it's impossible to
Meditation: Preparing for death
Meditation: Accepting the options, stepping forward bravely.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Don't think so
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Faith

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Standing for breaks
Endurance: Battling exhaustion
Endurance: Maintaining focus
Surgery: The treatment for the Rot
Surgery: Techniques for accessing brain areas
Surgery: Careful measurement can be the difference between life and death
Surgery: Can not cut corners

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: She created a new procedure, saved a life and performed a surgery that is completely groundbreaking. Reviewer's discretion.
Devotion: Vri: +1 (prayer), Famula +2 (prayer to Famula, prayer to Vri), Moseke: ? (+1 prayer, but I wondered if "Spare a Life +5" might also count here? )
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Thank you for the review!

[Yanahalqah]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Learning by Crystal Light
City/Area: Uleuda
Notes/Warnings: A bit of punching. Some wacky dialogue. Genuvah mentions Ulehi in his first couple posts, but it's actually Qa that's being spoken.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

1. Unarmed Combat: Sucker Punch
2. Detection: Locating a sound's source
3. Linguistics: Qa
4. Qa: sounds like nonsense
5. Qa: coded language
6. Investigation or Intelligence: Recognizing the signs of a cult
7. Rhetoric: dramatic voice
8. Endurance: Bracing yourself
9. Acrobatics: Roll to disperse impact from falling
10. Endurance: leaning on someone to walk

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises, I think? Also a damaged leg.
Fame: Probably none
Devotion: None
Collaboration: (Yes)

[Neronin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Bonemaker: Flame
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Shadow violence? Home burning down, and Necromancy
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Necromancy: Link: Tracking mages via the Link
Necromancy: Sap: Disrupts Haunts
Discipline: Not letting the smoke get to you
Discipline: Resisting the urge to control undead
Deception: Distracting with money
Endurance: Fighting through the effects of smoke inhalation

NPC: Gavrel: Hiding out east of Etzos

Loot: So Neronin didn't gain anything, but his house and most of his possessions burned up, lol. I made a note in the last post.
Injuries/Overstepping: I put in Gravetouch in the thread, but it was subtle so I'm stating it hear. This is one part of the story and Neronin has been minority overstepping this whole time, with a major overstep in the next and final installment.
Fame: No idea
Devotion: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes