Review Request 2.1.1

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Flutter Bye
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge
Baking: Preparing goods for a journey
Baking: Drying and preserving
Detection: Spotting when someone knows what you're talking about
Discipline: Not just blurting out good news.
Etiquette: People touch the belly when you're pregnant
Etiquette: It is acceptable to hug friends
Investigation: Working out who has blessed a mortal
Rhetoric: Explaining specific circumstances

Loot: Nurp
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Give a gift (food!)
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: No.

Pash

Skill Knowledge
Detection: Listening between the lines
Detection: Drawing conclusions based on previous experiences
Discipline: Doing scary things for those you love
Discipline: Keeping a secret for just a moment longer
Endurance: Standing in line after a rough night at sea
Etiquette: Touching baby bumps is not always appreciated
Persuasion: You’re a toucher
Psychology: Sharing is caring

Non-Skill Knowledge
Faith and Padraig: Expecting a baby!

Loot: Nurp
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: No.

Kali'rial

Skill:
Discipline: Standing calm in the face of phobias
Socialisation: Hugging is appropriate when it comes to pregnancy announcements

Non-skill:
Faith: Is pregnant
Faith: Gave you a gift - important emotional step
Faith: Wants traditional Desnind baby songs
Faith: Can hide from spirits including familiars
Faith: Can see Sarkis
Faith: Is a twin
Pash: Is a nervous eater
Pash: Is a terrible tease
Flutterbus: Is a big gross moth

Loot: Nurp
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: No.

[Nightshade Eld]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Master of the House
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Abuse, very violent abuse. Nondescript nudity. Implied rape. Nothing is detailed as in actually describing bodies or wounds and the last one is just an implication and a rumor. This is what happens when I realize I need some whip knowledge and nothing to do during my English class. I feel ashamed and proud of this piece at the same time.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge-
Dicipline: Being able to sit and watch injustice
Deception: It's hard to lie to someone who sees thorugh everything
Whips: Splits and bruises skin, doesn't typically cut
Whips: Often good at inflicting pain
Whips: The flick of the wrist
Whips: The arc of the arm

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Blessed be, not this time
Fame: Not really
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Yrmellyn Cole]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Alchemy Safety Rules
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:

Skill knowledge
Alchemy: How to dress appropriately for safety in the lab.
Alchemy: You must always locate safety equipment before starting lab work.
Alchemy: It’s essential to behave seriously in the lab, it’s not a playground
Alchemy: You must never eat anything in a chemistry lab,
Alchemy: You must always dispose of chemicals in a safe way for people and nature
Psychology: To interact with a teacher while learning new things

Other knowledge
NPC: Laurits Verran, brother of Luther Verran
NPC: Laurits Verran knowledgeable in chemistry and alchemy
NPC: Laurits Verran a physically fit person
NPC: Laurits Verran a very systematic teacher
NPC, Laurits Verran: Told you they are careless with chemical waste in Rhakros

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Nightshade Eld]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: We've Been Here Before
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Nope.

Requested Rewards(Night):
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: I don't think so, but if you see any positive I'll take it. No need to try and look for it though.


Requested Rewards(Noth):
Knowledge:
Deception: Making Educated Guesses
Deception: Letting Them Do The Talking
Detection: Using Emotions to Determine Subject
Detection: Excessive Giddiness Equals Delirious Joy
Seduction: Massaging Under Wings
Seduction: Kiss Until You Can No Longer Breathe
Seduction: Leave Them Wanting More
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A



Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

[Yrmellyn Cole]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Alchemy Lab Equipment
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:

Skill knowledge
Alchemy: The essential equipment of a laboratory for chemistry or alchemy
Alchemy: There’s safety clothing equipment in a good chemistry lab
Alchemy: Containers made of glass and other resilient materials are essential equipment
Alchemy: The basic tools for measurement and manipulation of materials
Alchemy: The basic equipment for heating and cooling chemicals
Research: Boundaries between disciplines can be constructs, made for practicality

Other knowledge
City, Rhakros: A city you don’t know much about
NPC, Laurits Verran: Has been to Rhakros
NPC, Laurits Verran: Told you Rhakros is an insect infested pestilence hole
NPC, Laurits Verran: Told you the food in Rhakros is disgusting
NPC, Laurits Verran: Firmly adviced you to never go to Rhakros


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Reviewed by Gangui

[Yrmellyn Cole]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Special Alchemy Safety Rules
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:

Skill knowledge
Alchemy: Dangerous substances must be handled with utter caution and care.
Alchemy: Alchemic processes can produce dangerous gasses to beware of.
Alchemy: You must identify substances 100% correctly or else not use them
Alchemy: You must check that the substances are fresh enough.
Alchemy: The glass and ceramic used in alchemy must be of high quality.
Psychology: To build up trust before asking questions

Other knowledge
NPC, Granny Anne: Warned you vaguely for the Verran brothers

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Yrmellyn Cole]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Special Alchemy Lab Equipment
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:

Skill knowledge
Alchemy: The basic special lab glassware for alchemy are alembics, pelicans and retorts
Alchemy: How to handle, prepare and use glassware and ceramics properly
Alchemy: The reflux condenser is a complex apparatus used for distilling
Alchemy: How to label your containers correctly
Alchemy: How to calibrate a mercury thermometer
Psychology: To make a friend by sharing a common interest

Other knowledge
NPC, Laurits Verran: Warned you for the attitudes towards alchemy in Rynmere going south
NPC, Laurits Verran: Offered to be a helpful friend and support you if you need to leave

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Padraig]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Politics & Weddings.
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nurp
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Endurance: Pregnancy tired is unlike any other
Endurance: Pushing self to the limit when already tired
Leadership: Being bossy with friends
Persuasion: Letting friends know they are cared for
Socialization: Emotional reunions
Socialization: Trying not to get in the way

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: making Cally corporeal? (Good deed?)
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

Padraig

Etiquette: Speaking to the already-dead
Leadership: Being bossy with loved ones
Leadership: Being clear when it's time to leave
Persuasion: Asking why not
Persuasion: Considering own wants and wishes
Persuasion: Plans to pamper
Socialization: Emotional reunions
Socialization: Trying not to get in the way

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: NA
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

Kura

Endurance: Training in hot weather
Endurance: Withstanding power drain
Archery: Rapid-fire training
Archery: Endurance training
Discipline: Controlling ones own power
Socialization: Talking to your dead friend
Medicine: Long training in hot weather is a bad idea

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Some exhaustion, please.
Fame: NA
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Saltwater Contemplation
City/Area: Beach outside of Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nah.

Requested Rewards:

Nir’wei

Skill Knowledge:
Teaching: Everyone learns at their own speed.
Teaching: Everyone learns in their own style.
Teaching: How to adjust techniques to suit individuals.
Meditation: Doesn't always need sitting down to perform.
Meditation: Performing active meditation.
Meditation: Can be done without thought.
Meditation: Easiest to slip into during calm.
Meditation: How to first slip into the trance.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: M/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Pash

Skill Knowledge:
Detection: There’s the spot!
Gardening: Salt buoys make fresh water out of the sea
Logistics: Planning a beach party
Logistics: Finding the perfect spot
Meditation: Introspective exploring of your Tangle
Meditation: Smoothing out the tangles
Meditation: Doesn’t always need to be done sitting still
Meditation: Opening your mind so your body can follow
Persuasion: Sailing’s not for everyone

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope.

[Quio]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Bailey Peninsula] Deliverance I.
City/Area: In the wilds outside of Etzos. Probably 12 or so days' walk away from the city.
Notes/Warnings: Not really. Mention of the parts of an animal (bones, muscles, blood, etc) as part of a lesson for a young Quio.

On another note, this thread was horrible for me to write and took days upon days. Mostly because I wrote it once and then my computer died and I had to rewrite the whole thing, boo. So sorry if the writing comes across as too technical or rushed or anything. If I didn't post it I would have continued editing this forever.

Requested Rewards:
SKILL KNOWLEDGE (6 b/c it's a solo)--
Hunting: Picking up an animal's trail
Field craft: Making a simple stone knife
Field craft: Making a bow drill
Field craft: Using a bow drill to start a fire
Field craft: Dry wood is imperative to starting a fire
Field craft: Dry wood is found on dry ground

OTHER KNOWLEDGE--
Common: Biology vocab, words for parts of the body (ex: vertebrae)
Fauna: Coyotes
Coyotes: Habitat
Coyotes: Behavior and social structure
Coyotes: Diet and methods of hunting
Coyotes: Biology
Coyotes: Predators, competitors, and prey
Coyotes: Vocalizations and body language
Coyotes: Mating and stages of life
Location: Bailey Peninsula
Yludih: Yludih bodies are simpler and stronger than flesh-things'
Yludih: First animal form: Coyote knowledge

Loot: A simple stone knife, handmade. A simple bow drill good for multiple uses, also made by hand.
Injuries/Overstepping: None. Quio is in pretty bad shape in this thread but these are all previous injuries from another thread, nothing new.
Fame: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.

Thanks for reviewing!