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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Fast carriages and Beautiful ladies
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Vigilante justice
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
1)Those listed by Nymph.

2)Skill Knowledges:
Persuasion: Offering evidence for a claim.
Seduction: Using a soft voice.
Seduction: Using Background music.
Seduction: Coming to the defense of a lady .
Persuasion: A mob sometimes works better than words.
Politics: Taking justice into your own hands.

3)Non-skill
Masterwork Etzorsian Carriages have many functions.
To love and lost so quickly is beyond sorrowful.


Loot: Rewards given listed by Nymph.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Positive fame for publicly approaching and "flirting" with Tanvi. Some positive fame for enacting justice on a known criminal and drug addict.
Collaboration: Technically yes, but it was a one off by Nymph, so I'd say just grade it like a solo.
Magic EXP: No
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Kayleigh
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Thread Name: Seeker of the Tune
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Nuuuun
Requested Rewards:
Skill Related
  • Singing: Appealing to A Crowd
  • Singing: Matching the Rhythm of a Tune
  • Singing: Changing Octaves
  • Instrument (Harp): Playing Uplifting Tunes
  • Instrument (Harp): Carrying Out Emotions Into Music
General
  • Tune: Song of the Exile
  • Uthaldria: Cultural Differences
  • Uthaldria: Changes With the Seasons
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Busking perhaps??
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Kayleigh
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Thread Name: Blessed Be
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Nuuuun
Requested Rewards:
Skill Related
  • Etiquette: Apologizing For Mistakes
  • Etiquette: Tending the Needs of an Injured
  • Childcare: Helping Out a Wounded Child
  • Strength: Lifting A Child
General
  • Finn O'Conner: Looks Like Higan
  • Finn O'Conner: Is From Etzos
  • Finn O'Conner: Has an Older Sister
  • Location: Temple of Thetros
  • Thetros: Immortal of Reincarnation, Passion, and Sanctuary
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Good deed for the day; helping the young and injured at that!
Collaboration: Yes, with Finn
Magic EXP: No
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Kayleigh
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Thread Name: Saun Ascension Festival
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Nuuuun
Requested Rewards:
Skill Related
  • Acrobatics: Weaving Through a Sea of People
General
  • Thetros: Appears at the Ascension Festival
  • Uthaldria: The Ascension Festival
  • Silv: An Ellune
  • Robin Stark: Acquainted
  • Anakol: Another Lotharro
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Attending a Public Event
Collaboration: Yep, Open Thread
Magic EXP: No

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Kayleigh
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Thread Name: Minimal Danger
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Nuuuun
Requested Rewards:
Skill Related
  • Blades (One-Handed): Jabs
  • Blades (One-Handed): Gripping the Hilt Firmly
  • Intimidation: Threatening A Becomer In Lurker Form
  • Climbing: Scaling A Lurker's Form
General
  • Personal: Lurker Hunting Cut Short
  • Location: The Forests of Eastern Gauthrel
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yep, Fridgar
Magic EXP: No

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Kayleigh
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Thread Name: Retracing Steps
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Nuuuun
Requested Rewards:
General
  • Personal: Disembarking From Uthaldria
  • Personal: Goodbyes Are Difficult
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Nurp
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Augury
City/Area: Rharne Arc 706
Notes/Warnings: No. Yrmellyn is being a cold hearted golddigger in a gambling house, until she meets her fate.
Requested Rewards:

Skill knowledge

Acting: To dress to look richer than you are
Acting: To lie about one’s true feelings and hide them behind fabricated smiles
Acting: To play for the galleries to attract customers
Acting: To act to seem honest
Business management: To analyze and gauge the value of business opportunities
Seduction: To walk seductively by subtly wiggling the hips more than average

Other knowledge
Rharne, Location: The glass quarters
Rharne, Location: The dust quarters
Rharne, Culture: The poor skills at money management of the poor in Dust Quarter
Rharne, Culture: The life conditions of courtesans
Behavior: To carelessly spend money instead of saving and investing
Behavior: To give in to the temptation of gold and do things against better knowledge

NPC, Mariuz Arbin: First meeting in a gambling house in Rharne
NPC, Mariuz Arbin: Has nice smokey blue eyes
NPC, Mariuz Arbin: Saw you as a person, not just a toy
NPC, Mariuz Arbin: Made a bit on the spinning wheel for you
NPC, Mariuz Arbin: Gave you the winnings of a bet and the promise of a portrait

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: No. It's personal memory for the PC.
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: In the magic painter's atelier - 1
City/Area: Rharne Arc 706
Notes/Warnings: No. Yrmellyn has a closer look at a painter's atelier and tries some seduction tricks on the painter.
Requested Rewards:

Skill knowledge

Seduction: To take off a cloak in a seductive way
Seduction: To give a brief glimpse of leg when shaking out a skirt
Seduction: To draw attention to one’s hips by smoothing out the skirt over them
Seduction: To make the upper body sway in a graceful and sophisticate way when walking
Seduction: To spread out a skirt beautifully when sitting on a chair
Acting: To act unaffected when alone with a stranger in a quirky situation

Other knowledge
Location: The Atelier in Mariuz Arbin’s house

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: No. It's personal memory for the PC.
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: In the magic painter's atelier - 2
City/Area: Rharne Arc 706
Notes/Warnings: No. Yrmellyn speaks with her mentor to be while she sits on a chair and he works at her portrait.
Requested Rewards:

Skill knowledge

Seduction: How to smile a perfected come hither smile with style
Acting: To act like you don’t care when people are staring at you
Painting: It’s important to arrange the motive exactly as you want it before you start to paint
Painting: Adjustments to a painting afterwards can distort the whole picture.”
Painting: The left side of the face look better than the right side, on most people.
Painting: It is better to paint people the way they want to be seen than to strive to make them lesser

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: No. It's personal memory for the PC.
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: One for the Money (pt1)
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Some swears
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Lockpicking: Feeling around in the Cylinder
  • Lockpicking: Counting pins
  • Lockpicking: Applying torque to the cylinder with a tension wrench
  • Lockpicking: Subtlety and precision are key
  • Stealth: black clothes stand out against the night sky
  • Stealth: Moving from shadow to shadow
  • God Key: Sensing nearby Keys
  • God Key: Can open doors
Loot: None!
Injuries/Overstepping: none!
Fame: prolly not
Collaboration: nein
Magic EXP: (nope)

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