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Qit'ria
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: I'm Pregnant
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Not really
Requested Rewards:

Qit'ria
Knowledge: Detection: The stench of people with poor hygeine
Discipline: Sitting patiently without fidgeting
Discipline: Refusing to steal food when hungry
Discipline: Using pain to contain one's rage
Etiquette: Using the word please excessively
Etiquette: Paying when you take someone's lunch
Etiquette: Apologizing after acting foolish
Etiquette: Sharing food
Etiquette: Giving gifts after receiving them
Socialization: Asking about a person's friend
Socialization: Sticking to nicer subjects
Socialization: Sometimes its okay to ask the tough questions

Nightshade: Noth's other lover, an Avriel
Noth: A murderer
Noth: Supposedly a mate with Nightshade
Faith: Once cried because she lost, then found, a shoe
Faith: Used to be a slave
Faith: Healed by Moseke
Faith: Watched Noth murder Aeon
Faith: A strong mother
Aeon: A friend of Faith's, murdered by Noth

Loot: +1 Echo Box (Connected to Faith)
+1 Box of chocolates,
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small, for making a scene
Collaboration: (Yes/
Magic EXP: (No)



Faith
Knowledge: N/A per her request, just wants exp

Loot: -1 Echo Box,
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A, Maxed out
Collaboration: (Yes/
Magic EXP: (No)
word count: 204
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Kyreen
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Stone Soup, part 3
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Much food. Part of a multi-thread starter quest
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cooking: Hot Radish Cheese
Cooking: Peeling eggs
Cooking: Deseeding peppers
Cooking: Cutting crudites
Baking: Sweet millet balls
Baking: Using chopped nuts as a decorative coating


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)
RYNATA TO REVIEW
word count: 69
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Lessons in Life & Love
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nah, introspective, probably a bit dull.

Requested Rewards:
Faith
Knowledge:
No knowledge.


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: None
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: N/A
word count: 40
"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."

~ Rharne HQ
Dust Quarter Satellite Clinic ~ Order of the Adunih~Soup Kitchen & Community Center
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Quiet
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Unpracticed and Unknown
City/Area: New Haven, Quacia
Notes/Warnings: This is a bad thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Acrobatics: Watching Your Step
  • Acrobatics: Mind the Environment
  • Acrobatics: Disturb as Little as Possible
  • Meditation: Keeping Quiet Helps
  • Acrobatics: Speed Isn't Everything, but it Helps
  • Acrobatics: Avoid Obstacles
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Probably N/A. Maybe 1 or 2 fame if you're being generous.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 77
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William Dovecraft
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Mindful of a Bigger World
City/Area: Yaralon, Temple of Chamadarst
Notes/Warnings: Cutesy-sappy-boring. Ashan.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meditation: Taking a mental snapshot of your surroundings to visualize.
Meditation: Relaxing the mind with the comfort of a familiar
Meditation: Pleasing scents help with focus.
Meditation: The sound of rain helps to drown out distractions.
Meditation: On a goal.
Meditation: Thinking to the past.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 82
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William Dovecraft
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: The Future of Yaralon
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Child kidnapping, people eating gross food
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cooking: For a Famine
Chemistry: Grinding ingredients into a paste
Leadership: Wrapping people up into a noble cause
Leadership: Asking the group for information
Leadership: Bringing someone to the fore
Leadership: Briefing the group
Sojourn: Journey's Meal can be used to make things edible
Sojourn: Journey's Meal can make the distasteful tasteful, with a story

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Slight. ( Feeding hungry children during a famine )
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 98
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Devin
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Clothed in Finery
City/Area: Scalvoris.
Notes/Warnings: Part 2 of 2. I linked the first part in my thread.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Strutting like a peacock
Deception: Assuring her that you haven't forgotten
Endurance: Going shopping is exhausting
Seduction: Giving compliments helps
Seduction: Giving gifts helps
Tarouz Ability: Clothed in Finery: Only works on your own clothes

Loot: Perhaps a Tarouz ability?
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Yes. Devin buys a really fancy robe and gives it to Raine as a gift!
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
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word count: 93

Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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Rynata
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Remains of Filliman (Pt 3)
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope. Slight language.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Cryptography: Revisiting a mystery
Cryptography: Using your sense of touch
Cryptography: Piecing together a message
Investigation: Working against a deadline
Investigation: Brushes with the underground
Tactics: Make someone operate under a false assumption

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 68
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William Dovecraft
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Wild Child
City/Area: Rynmere, Venora, Father's Home
Notes/Warnings: Cutesy Brat Learns Math & Religion
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Mathematics: Order of Operations
Mathematics: Graphing
Mathematics: Getting Things Wrong
Mathematics: Adjusting the Curve of a Line
Mathematics: Plotting Points
Meditation: Imagining Flight

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 59
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Hikaru
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Third Spark
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Link to approved mentor NPC
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Meditation: Counting breaths
Meditation: Giving in to find peace
Endurance: Surviving an initiation
Attunement: Initiation is excruciating
Attunement: My eyes have changed
Attunement: My own frequency

Loot: nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Shock - 2 days
Renown: None
Collaboration: (No)


Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: Yes - Attunement
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: 0 (Initiation Thread)
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:No
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