Review Request 2.1.1

[Padraig]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Nestled in the Trees.
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Detection: Peripheral vision can lie
Detection: The difference between what's there and what isn't
Endurance: Pregnancy: A long haul

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: NA
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

Padraig

Caregiving: Looking after a pregnant woman
Caregiving: Keeping an eye out to protect a loved one
Caregiving: Making a loved one feel secure
Detection: Reading fear in the face
Detection: Seeking out a reason for spotting movement
Detection: Considering the overall ambiance of a place

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: NA
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Game.
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Noth: Prince of Eternal Mercies.
Padraig: Got a really long name in dreams.


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: NA
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

Noth

Faith: Slave No Longer
Padraig: Curator

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: NA
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

Padraig

Noth: Prince of Eternal Mercies
PB: Part of Faith?

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: NA
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: At loose ends
City/Area: Ne’Haer
Notes/Warnings: Nah. We didn’t make it any farther than some innuendos. Cassandra is a retired PC now, so I’m just submitting this for points and skills as it was about 2-3 posts away from being finished.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge: (8+2=10)
Deception: Sweeten deception with good deeds and kindness
Medicine: Checking for infection
Medicine: An adequate light source is always useful
Persuasion: Love your mother
Rhetoric: Playful banter
Rhetoric: Magical honesty
Seduction: Can we use your room instead?
Seduction: I’ll show you mine if you show me your … magic
Surgery: Removing stitches
Surgery: Disinfecting a wound before removing stitches

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Domain Magic: Transmutation
Transmutation: Brilliance, making light from nothing
Transmutation: Borrowing qualities

NPC: Cassandra
Cassandra (NPC): Is a Transmuter
Cassandra (NPC): Green cloak at the Order of Adunih

Loot: Djinn has given me permission to keep and use Cassandra as a permanent NPC because he has retired her as a PC. Since we had two threads together and implied a friendship, she is now free for me to enjoy in more memories and possibly the present. Teehee. So, I gain a sexy nurse/Transmuter friend. Thread is here.
Injuries/Overstepping: Boo boos all better. Just a nice scar left behind.
Fame: Nah.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

Reviewed by GanguiThank you!

[Kali'rial]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: How Is It This Hot??
City/Area: Scalvoris Surrounds
Notes/Warnings: Some minor gore with wolfy animal chomping
Requested Rewards:

Kali

Knowledge: (8 for collab minimum)
Skill:
Hunting: Knowing prey moments in varied weather conditions
Hunting: Everything needs to drink
Hunting: Spotting tree-dwelling prey
Hunting: How to detect a stampede
Hunting: A stampede doesn't give you much time to react
Socialisation: Inviting a new friend to hunt with you
Socialisation: Offering a gift as an apology
Xanthean: Miu audev (my apologies)

Non-Skill:
Sev'ryn Culture: Acknowledging another's familiar is a huge offence
Nir'wei: Is Sev'ryn
Nir'wei: Has a wolf companion called Greyhide
Nir'wei: Wants to start a Cally's in Rynmere

Loot: nah
Injuries/Overstepping: nah
Fame: nah
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Nir’wei

Knowledge:
Ranged Combat: Anticipating situations where a bow might be best utilised.
Ranged Combat: Aim for the legs and shoulders to incapacitate enemies.
Ranged Combat: Sacrificing quality for quantity against large numbers of enemies.
Ranged Combat: Maintaining a prepared stance to shoot at a moment's notice.
Hunting: Working in tandem with other hunters.
Hunting: Working in tandem with animal companions.
Hunting: Corralling herds into bottlenecks for traps and ambushes.
Hunting: The more you know about an area, the better your chances of success in hunting its grounds.

Loot: 1 x aye-aye, 1 x young hafrein
Injuries/Overstepping: nah
Fame: nah
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Something Old, Something New
City/Area: Scalvoris Harbor
Notes/Warnings: It’s not what you think.

Requested Rewards:

Kali’rial

Skill Knowledge (8+6=14):
Caregiving: Helping another to safety
Discipline: Defying the elements and facing your fears
Endurance: Keeping the tension even when your aching
Seafaring: How to use storm anchors
Seafaring: Preparing for a storm
Seafaring: Wet canvas can tear skin
Seafaring: Tying a towline so you don't drown
Strength: Pulling with everything you've got
Medicine: Treating ones own wounds with salve
Medicine: Healing Injuries can be hampering
Medicine: Bandaging minor wounds
Rhetoric: Pondering the intricacies of names
Rakahi Pidgin: Ipi Noch (child)
Socialization: Loosing your composure with relief

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Pash: Changed his last name
Pash: Is full of lovely words
Biqaj Culture: Biqaj New Arc
Biqaj Culture: Name changing
Idalos Weather Phenomenon: U'frek's Lights

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Torn up hands. Bruises.
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Pash Raj’oriq

Skill Knowledge (8+6=14):
Endurance: Not drowning
Endurance: Finishing the task at hand
Seafaring: Using a proper storm anchor
Seafaring: Dealing with a down jib sail
Seafaring: Tethering yourself in a storm
Seafaring: Overboard!
Medicine: Caring for rope burns with salve
Medicine: Bandaging minor wounds
Swimming: Catching a breath in stormy seas
Swimming: Swimming while tethered
Swimming: Maneuvering near a boat
Swimming: Coordinating movements in rough seas
Seduction: Casual nudity
Strength: Hauling yourself over the side of a ship from the water

Elithem Ability:
Steadfast (as requested in the PSF)

Elithem Ability Knowledge:
Words of Empowerment: Help others help you
Steadfast: Strength from within

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Kali’rial: Seaworthy Lover
Sev’ryn Culture: Naming conventions
Biqaj Culture: Biqaj New Arc
Biqaj Culture: Changed your name
Idalos Weather Phenomenon: U’Frek’s Lights

Loot: A new name!
Injuries/Overstepping: Torn up hands. Bruises. Probably a sore throat.
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Doran]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Lab rat
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: No

Doran

Alchemy: Cleaning your equipment is important
Detection: Noticing that a lock has been tampered with
Detection: Signs that somebody is nervous
Detection: The smell of acid
Detection: Spotting a lie
Deception: Hiding your true thoughts
Intimidation: Threatening somebody with punishment
Tactics: How to make sure that somebody "agrees" to work for you

Finn O'Connor: A little criminal
Finn O'Connor: Twelve, not ten!
Finn O'Connor: Why he broke into my laboratory
Finn O'Connor: My new little helper
Loot: One little helper
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Positive because Doran might have saved Finn and forced labor is better than death!
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

Finn

Negotiation: Negotiating payment for a job
Acting: Feigning Innocence
Stealth: Move when the guard is distracted
Acting: Attempt to flatter someone
Acting: Pretending to be a budding alchemist
Alchemy: Using litmus Strips & indicators
Persuasion: Offering An Ultimatum.
Tactics: Surrendering To Rise Another Day

Location: Etzos Underground
Location: Etzos Tower of Ministers
Doran: The Hero of Oscillus
Doran: Master Alchemist
Doran: Stoic
Nance (NPC): Works for the Curly Hare
Robert (NPC): Unscrupulous employer
Loot: Set of decent clothes.
A vial of stinging acid.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: NA
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

[Warren]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: For Freedom!
City/Area: Krome, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Violence, Cursing

Warren

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Detection: The Sound of Approaching, Armored Individuals
Discipline: Know When To And When Not To Kill
Endurance: Dealing With The Aftermath of A Fight
Endurance: Using Adrenaline To Run Longer/Faster
Final Moment (Mark Ability): Reaching For The Power Paralyzes The Body
Intimidation: Promise Death To Get Information
Intimidation: Sealing Promises With Threats
Melee Combat (Battle Axe): Hit Harder With Strength Behind Momentum
Melee Combat (Long Sword): Basic Swinging
Negotiation: The Best Deal Is One Struck During Crisis
Unarmed Combat: Headlock Maneuver

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Fighting Pits: Blackmailing Guards To Work In Them
Fighting Pits: Built Underground
Fighting Pits: Decorated For The Wealthy
Navyri: Afraid of Fire
Navyri: An Ally, For Now…
Navyri: Doesn’t Think Before She Acts
Navyri: Has An Invisible Friend Protecting Her
Navyri: Killed Prisoners For Disrespecting Her
Navyri: Knows How To Fight In Close Combat
Navyri: Murdered A Slew of Guardsmen
Navyri: Owes 300 GN To A Shady Man
Navyri: Spared Warren To Use Him

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Slash marks from fights - 20 Trials to heal, Bruises from Fighting - 10 Trials
Fame: Rescued Navyri (+3), Killed A Bunch of Guards (-5), Swore Oath of Protection (+3)
Collaboration: Yes (15 Points)
Magic EXP: No

Navyri

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: How to Focus Past Intense Fear
Lockpicking: The Raking Method
Lockpicking: Breaking a “Pick”
Pickpocketing: Scavenge from the Dead
Unarmed Combat: How to Tag Team an Opponent
Unarmed Combat: Paralyze Your Opponent For Easy Kills
Blades: Killing a Man with His Own Weapon
Intimidation: Submit to Your Instincts
Endurance: The Repercussions of Gift of Shadows
Endurance: Breaking a Nail
Persuasion: Keep Your Requests Open Ended

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Kade: A Tank
Kade: Not a Man to be Trifled With
Kade: Emotional Over the Dead?
Kade: One Moment Weak, The Next Strong
Kade: Offers Mercy Before Killing
Krome Fighting Pits: Blackmails Its Workforce
Curio: A Loyal Defender

Loot: Some gold coins & a favor from Warren
Injuries/Overstepping: Used 'Gift of Shadows' - Exhaustion for 'x' number of days.
Fame: Killed A Bunch of Guards (-5), plus anything else you want to give.
Collaboration: Yes (15 Points)
Magic EXP: No

[Navyri]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Second Chances
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Slight nudity?
Requested Rewards: 15xp each

Noth:
Skill Knowledge:
Intimidation: Showing Up Unannounced
Intimidation: Mentioning Others You’ve Killed
Intimidation: Stroking Deadly Instruments
Leadership: Showcasing Power by Placing Yourself in a Precarious Situation
Leadership: Offer Support to Promote Loyalty
Logistics: Do Not Start an Enterprise until It’s Been Discussed
Discipline: Not Flinching in the Darkness
Discipline: Business before Pleasure
Detection: Noticing Irregularities
Detection: Irregularities Mean Things Have Changed
Non Skill Knowledge:
Navyri: Has Seen Otherworldly Things
Navyri: Sought by Immortals
Navyri: Can do Strange Things in the Dark
Navyri: Embodies Naer Beauty
Navyri: Possesses Wings

Navyri
Skill Knowledge
Meditation: Remain Completely Still if Possible
Meditation: Clear Your Mind
Miirduk - Dualism: Triggered by Meditation
Miirduk - Dualism: Takes Concentration
Miirduk - Dualism: The Different Forms Change Your Appearance
Appraisal: Understand The Value of People
Intimidation: Casting a Room in Darkness
Persuasion: Don’t Shoot the Messenger
Stealth: How to Slither Within the Shadows
Discipline: Duirkek Form Maintains Emotional Control
Non-Skill Knowledge:
Prince of Eternal Mercies: Intimidating, Terrifying
Prince of Eternal Mercies: Leader of the Al’Angyryl
Prince of Eternal Mercies: Hates Delroth (and other Immortals)
Prince of Eternal Mercies: Willing to Aid You if You Return the Favor
Etzos: Hates Things Not Easily Understood

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Negative, maybe? Noth recruits Navyri for illegal activities, and Noth finds out Navyri has wings (which he and Etzos sees as a bad thing. lol)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Kirei Qe'Azour]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: First Lessons Revisited
City/Area: Athart
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge

Cooking: Technique; Frying is is the cooking of food in fat. Despite using liquid oil, frying is considered to be a dry cooking method because water is not used in the cooking process - ideally the cooking oil will not be absorbed by the food, so no moisture will be added by cooking. The methods of frying in order of how much oil is used are deep frying, or immersion frying, which uses the most oil, pan frying, stir-frying, and sautéing, which used the least amount of oil.

Cooking: Deep frying involves fully immersing food in hot oil. It is an extremely fast cooking method.

Cooking: Pan frying involves frying food in a pan. When pan frying, the amount of oil in the frying pan can range from absolutely no oil (especially when the foods to be fried contain fat or oil), to as much as covering the bottom 1/3, up to 1/2 in oil. One might distinguish pan frying from sautéing, stir frying, and deep frying in that, in pan frying, the food is not necessarily intended to be frequently stirred around, or turned repeated, but, rather, turned only once or twice during cooking.

Cooking: Stir-frying involves frying food in a special slope-sided pan called a wok quickly over very high heat, while stirring it constantly. An open flame heat source works best when using a wok.

Cooking: Sautéing is cooking food in a shallow pan, with a small quantity of fat, or oil. While being cooked, the food should be turned frequently but not constantly as is required in stir-frying. This method also takes less time and uses less oil than pan frying.

Linguistics: puzzling out the meaning of words through context


Non Skill Knowledge


Dehasin: cooking terms

Kirei: doesn't want others to be hurt because of her

Slaves: unasked for questions only bring trouble


Cooking with hot cooking oil is dangerous, and one should be very careful in order to avoid fires and/or severe burns.
Fried foods are not as healthy for you as other foods are.


Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: Moderate to severe bruising on her right shoulder that will take several trials to heal.
Fame: none
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Arlo Creede]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Trial and an Arc.
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Bladed Combat: Sword: Overhead arc
Bladed Combat: Sword: Recovering from an unexpectedly ineffective attack
Bladed Combat: Sword: Upward thrust
Detection: Overgrown paths
Endurance: All over impact
Endurance: Holding on to something as you're hit
Endurance: Regaining consciousness and forcing yourself to move
Fieldcraft: Quickly packing up camp
Fieldcraft: Cutting your way through the jungle
Fieldcraft: Jungle survival
Ranged Combat: Bow: Tracking movement through trees
Strength: Holding yourself ready for impact
Strength: Maintaining a strong grip


Loot: Chest & Contents (between the two of them)
Injuries/Overstepping: She's covered in cuts and bruises, some deep cuts and a number of very unpleasant bruises. It'll take a good 15 trials to heal completely.
Fame: Give a gift: Domain Bag (+2)
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

Arlo

Acrobatics: Acrobatic dodge
Acrobatics: Rolling away from combat whilst keeping hold of your weapon
Acrobatics: Rolling onto your feet, into the ready position
Detection: Badly overgrown path
Detection: Noting changes over time
Detection: The difference between natural and man made
Detection: Movement in peripheral vision
Medicine: Checking everywhere for cuts and bruises
Medicine: Recognising head trauma
Ranged Combat: Bow: Tracking movement through trees.
Ranged Combat: Bow: Keeping aim for an extended period
Ranged Combat: Bow: Nerves make you trigger happy
Ranged Combat: Bow: Moves become instinctual

Loot: Contents of the chest (between them)
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: NA
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.