Review Request 2.1.1

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Sewing the Distance.
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread.
Requested Rewards:
No knowledge rewards for Faith, please.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

[Velaine Krome]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Troubling Nights Ahead
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: First time writing about magic so some pointers would be nice
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:

• Psychology: Manipulating Sympathy
  Psychology: Using a Common Enemy
  Empathy: Slate Blue as Sympathy
  Empathy: Tangerine as Worry
  Empathy: Knotting to Bury Emotions
  Empathy: Usage During Conversations

Non-Skill Knowledge:

• Cormag: Servant of House Krome
  Cormag: Fighter at the Pits
  Krome: Fighting Pits Hidden as Villages
  Krome: Plagued by Mysterious Disappearances
  Jersey Krome: Locks Himself in the Study and Does Nothing
  Jersey Krome: Thinks You're Useless

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Mild headache for using Empathy, maybe?
Fame: None that I could think of.
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Yes, please!

[Gangui]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Outsider (pt. 2)
City/Area: Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: Pg 13 so far
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Gangui:

Skill Knowledge
Running: Jogging to the town square.
Tactics: Taking the high ground in a crowd.
Intelligence: questioning state messages.
Leadership: Not falling under the rule of another sellsword.
Persuasion: Sometimes honesty is the best policy.
Leadership: Making decisions for others.
Etiquette: Walking a girl home at night.
Strength: Carrying heavy objects up a staircase.
Discipline: Avoiding the primal sexual urges.

General Knowledge:
Ellen’wyn: Avriel
Ellen’wyn: Cute when she is exhausted
NPC: Administrator Enitaplap
Administrator Enitaplap: Sends words of welfare and pacifism.

Ellen’wyn
Skill Knowledge:
Ettiquette: Don’t Interrupt
Ettiquette: It’s Rude to Make Assumptions
Investigation: Pressuring for Answers
Investigation: Simple Questions, Simple Answers
Linguistics: Struggling with Language Barriers
Running: Keeping Up with Tall Folk
Endurance: Recovering from a Jog
Endurance: Battling Drowsiness
Intelligence: Suspicion of Strangers

General Knowledge:
Gangui: Likes to Presume Things
Gangui: Probably A Nice Guy
Gangui: An Exotic Man
NPC: Administrator Enitaplap
Vhalar 6, 717: The State Makes an Announcement About Treasure
Nightshade Eld: Avriel
Nightshade Eld: Possibly the Most Noble Warrior In Etzos


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Yrmellyn Cole]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Alma in the bath
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:

Skill knowledge
Leadership: To make it clear that you take the decisions
Leadership: To treat people under your leadership with respect
Leadership: To give instructions and tell people what to do
Leadership: To take on the leader role when others obviously expect it of you
Leadership: To pretend to be in charge by approving fait accompli
Persuasion: To persuade people to be motifs on a decadent painting

Other knowledge
NPC: The cat Webster
NPC, Rynmere: Alma, a beautiful slave girl
NPC, Rynmere: Bianca, a bath house servant
Rynmere, Location: The Bath House of Andaris
Rynmere, Culture: The social role of women in Rynmere

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Perhaps. At the reviewers discretion.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Yrmellyn Cole]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Painted Lady of Blacksmith Arms
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge
Business Management: To point out the financial benefits of a suggestion
Persuasion: Explain why your ideas are best by referring to theoretical knowledge
Persuasion: Persuade peopleby giving them some of the things they want
Persuasion: Persuade people that dry oil crayons is as good for painting as wet colors
Persuasion: Persuade people by showing them a good work in progress
Persuasion: Persuade people by showing how things work in practice

Other knowledge
NPC, Rufus Hemlock: A man of bad taste in art
NPC, Rufus Hemlock: Stubborn as hell
NPC, Rufus Hemlock: Generous with big beers

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Perhaps. At the reviewers discretion.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Zip]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Felicia & Finn
City/Area: Etzos - Outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: Robin made Zipper cry and he was very mean and he probably tripped her later
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Zipper

Skill Knowledge
Transmutation: Absorption
Transmutation: Absorption: Preemptively Absorbing to weaken a spell
Transmutation: Absorption: Not as efficient against a mage of equal caliber
Discipline: Keeping information to yourself
Discipline: Holding back an insult
Intelligence: Sometimes a name is all you need
Intelligence: Faking bigotry to get the information you need
Intelligence: Digging up deeply buried information

Non-Skill knowledge:
Robin Stark: Has a sister called Felicia
Robin Stark: Made you laugh and cry
Robin Stark: Bisexual
Robin Stark: First kiss since the necromancer boy
Robin Stark: Seeking a Defier’s Revelation
Robin Stark: Hates people too

Robin

Skill Knowledge:
Defiance: the Elements Can Feel
Defiance: Gale
Defiance: Gust
Discipline: Breaking a kiss
Discipline: Not Throwing a Tantrum
Discipline: Restraining from Answering
Intimidation: Using Magic
Intimidation: Threatening with Actions

Non-Skill knowledge:
Zipper: Finn’s Sister
Zipper: Desperate to Reveal
Zipper: Kisses Like Hans
Zipper: Doesn’t Listen

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Only my heart
Fame: Negative - violence, open screaming in public, displays of magic
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes for both

[Zip]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Pupils of the trade
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Eyes. Kaboom.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Yana

Skill Knowledge:
Deception: stalling for time
Deception: inconspicuously reaching for a weapon
Tactics: getting the first strike
Tactics: using your opponent’s mistakes in your favor
Tactics: always have a plan B
Tactics: don’t underestimate your opponent
Tactics: forcing an opponent into a melee fight
Unarmed: tackle
Unarmed: crushing the windpipe
Unarmed: hitting the same spot over and over

Non-skill Knowledge
Zipper: Caster of the Etzori Army
Zipper: Transmuter
Zipper: More powerful mage then expected
Zipper: Prone to aggression
Zipper: Has a brother named Finn
Zipper: Former wingmate
Zipper: Likes to collect information too
Zipper: Contact in Etzos
Zipper: Destroyed Yana’s eye
Zipper: Has Yana’s last remaining notebook

Zipper

Skill knowledge
Transmutation: Bolstering
Transmutation: Shapecraft
Transmutation: Pathway
Transmutation: Pathway: Forging a Pathway to the bottom of a river
Transmutation: Ether Missile: Using the Missile in Melee Combat
Endurance: Staving off Overstepping
Endurance: Taking multiple punches to the face
Endurance: Enduring the backlash of an Ether Missile
Endurance: Getting choked to near-death
Intelligence: Keeping a log of information
Intimidation: A threat backed by imminent magic force

Non-skill knowledge:
PC - Rayna (Yanahalqah)
Rayna: Bow of the Etzori Army
Rayna: Wingmates
Rayna: Not human
Rayna: Not made of flesh
Rayna: Not a Sesser
Rayna: Not a Becomer
Rayna: Driven to seek out information
Rayna: Knows everyone’s secrets
Rayna: Keeps logbooks of gathered intelligence
Rayna: A spy
Rayna: Contact in Andaris, Rynmere
Rayna: Practically pen pals

Loot:

Zipper

Rayna's Notebook:
The covert pride and glory of Rayna's long-time intelligence gathering efforts in Etzos. Inside the notebook is an astonishingly detailed number of entries on Etzori army officers and soldiers alike, both in and outside Rayna's wing of the army. There's even a section on the four Marshals of Etzos, though the findings in that segment are superficial at best. Although more than a few seasons out of date by the arc 717, with more than several of the entry members having either died, retired, or moved on to less hazardous vocations, the notebook continues to provide surprisingly accurate information where it counts. Zipper occasionally updates it to better reflect current intel, but her intense personal annoyance at the unacceptable stylistic clash of Rayna's handwriting and her own has left the notebook mostly unaltered.

The contents of the notebook seem to also extend to before Rayna's time in the military, containing her formative thoughts on how children respond to stimuli both positive and negative, rigid tips on how to socialize with other children, a trial and error checklist on which lies worked on which childhood peer, an objective assessment on the best ways to dispose a body in Etzos, in-depth notes on a variety of dissected animals, and a whole load of other innocent childhood musings.

Injuries/Overstepping: A lot, but it's a memory thread. *strokes Yana's eye* I didn't do it D:
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes for me, no for Yana

[Linika]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Where Credit is Due
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Nah, nothing serious
Requested Rewards:15 xp and knowledges, based on # of posts

LINIKA:
Skill-based Knowledge:

• Acrobatics: A One-hand Vault Over a Table
• Cosmetology: Actually Has Aspects That are Similar to Chemistry
• Cosmetology: Covering Bruises
• Cosmetology: Evening Out Skin Tone
• Cosmetology: How to Apply Foundation With a Brush
• Deception: Faking an Attack to Expose Surveillance
• Detection: When Your Own Mark Doesn't Account for an Incident
• Discipline: Learning Viden's Library System
• Endurance: Suffering Through Someone Else' Bad Memories
• Persuasion: Acknowledging Your Part to Promote Trust
• Politics: Immortal Enemies Often Use the Same Tactics
• Psychology: Why Do I Have Such Trouble With Emotions When NOT Spying?
• Storytelling: Augiery's Betrayal, Abandonment, and Assassination Attempt
• Storytelling: What Led to Sending the Warning Message to Augiery
• Xypha: Will be able to pull "Incoming" thoughts as well soon

Non-Skill-Based:

• Faith: A Woman of Considerable Abilities
• PC: Faith: A Human of Courage and Fairness
• The Truth About Events in Oscillus

Loot: The truth about many things.
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Probably negative, for making a scene in the library of Viden
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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FAITH:
Skill-based Knowledge:

• Combat: Unarmed: Defend and attack in one move
• Combat: Unarmed: Maintaining balance whilst moving from sitting to standing
• Cosmetology: Covering bruises
• Cosmetology: Evening skin tone
• Cosmetology: How to apply foundation with a brush
• Endurance: Holding another's memories can be physically painful
• Endurance: Feeling another person's torture / branding
• Storytelling: What happened in Treid
• Surgery: Issues with Naerrick blood
• Surgery: Naerrick surgery different if the naer is in Augiery?
• Tactics: Prepare a punch to the nose to incapacitate
• Teaching: Use diagrams
• Teaching: Consider using a mirror when teaching make up
• Teaching: Explain, define, give examples
• Xypha: Padraig May be Able to Read Minds Soon

Non-Skill Based:

• Linika: Has Yvithia's Mark
• Linika: May Become a Videnese Intelligence Agent
• Location: Viden Academy
• Location: Viden Library
• PC: Linika: Naerikk Exile

Loot: Just the satisfaction of helping a poor tortured soul. (In other words, no.)
Injuries/Overstepping: Psychological trauma which is buried at the time, due to the nature and will surface in Vhalar 717 when she will remember it.
Fame: Facing down an Intelligence agent. Good deeds done for Linika
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Homecoming
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: Just two people in love getting shot down by Kali’s only surviving family member—her grandfather. Nothing but a lot of feels.

Requested Rewards:

Kali’Rial

Skill Knowledge:
Endurance: Surviving twenty eight trials on a giant bathroom less moth
Discipline: Controlling one’s impulsive urges
Discipline: Finding your dignity and being the bigger person in an argument
Meditation: Forcing yourself to calm down

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Flutterbus: It’s a long flight to Desnind on a bug
Location: Kärshẹ
Location: Dyn’rial’s House
Dyn’rial: Has not softened over time
Dyn’rial: Is racist towards Biqaj
Ingredient: Sweetened condensed milk

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Probably not. Reviewer’s discretion.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Pash Raj’oriq

Skill Knowledge:
Detection: Signs of nervousness
Detection: Expressions of disapproval
Discipline: Not getting too carried away with emotion
Discipline: Stop talking when you’ve said enough
Endurance: Emotional conversation after a long flight
Persuasion: Neither forgiveness nor permission
Persuasion: Being convincing in a foreign language
Seduction: How about that bath?

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Flutterbus: A giant moth mode of transportation
Flutterbus: Has great views
Flutterbus: Is still gross
Location: Desnind
Location: Kärshẹ
Location: Kali’rial’s family home
Dyn’rial: Doesn’t like you or your people
Dyn’rial: Didn’t give you permission for anything

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Probably not. Reviewer’s discretion.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Nir'wei]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Grand Hunt
City/Area: Scalvoris Surrounding Area (Sweetvine Woods)
Notes/Warnings: Violence against animals
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): The first shot is the most important one.
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Shoot unsuspecting targets, when they move less.
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Holding the quiver at the hip is easier to draw.
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Shooting from underneath.
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Sometimes sacrifices must be made for the perfect shot.
Hunting: The more you know about what you hunt, the more chance you have to take them down.
Loot: 4 complete Oh-Deer carcasses
Injuries/Overstepping: Injuries to left arm and to Greyhide.
Fame: Not applicable.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.