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Thread Name: Reunion
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Children *shudders*
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Zipper

Skill Knowledges
Deception: Feigning manners
Deception: Playing nice when you need something
Deception: The art of building rapport
Deception: Giving a non-answer
Deception: Playing a good role model
Discipline: Tolerating inadequate living conditions
Discipline: Resisting arson
Discipline: Curbing profanities

Non-Skill Knowledges
Location: The Etzori Orphanage
Finn: Employed by the Hero Doran
Finn: In Love?
Finn: Baby brother
Finn: Corresponding with Robin in secret?
NPC - Mr. Barnelby
Mr. Barnelby: Dull bureaucrat

Finnegan O’Connor
Skill-related:
Persuasion: Remember The Good Old Days?
Discipline: Staying Your Hand.
Discipline: Avoiding Bursting Into Laughter.
Acting: Pretending To Be Robin.
Acting: Feigning Innocence

Non-skill:
Zipper: Insists on Fi.
Zipper: Mean To Old Fred.
Zipper: More Bark Than Bite.
Zipper: In Love?
Mr. Barnelby: A Formal Man.
Location: The Orphanage’s Attic.

Loot: nu
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Fame: Nuh
Collaboration: yeah
Magic EXP: No
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thread Name: To hear it sung upon the sea
City/Area: Beach near Ne’Haer
Notes/Warnings: Nah. I wrapped this up with an extra post of stressing Laiken out about replying. It’s just a little fun day on the beach with a bunch of Biqaj kids.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge (8 for collaborative):
Climbing: Finding fingerholds in rock
Climbing: Watching the movements of others for clues
Lute: Building a song from scratch
Persuasion: Inviting a complicit party to keep your secret
Swimming: Belly flops hurt
Swimming: Diving properly involves looking out for danger
Swimming: Holding your breath
Swimming: Keeping your form tight to accelerate with a kick

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope.
Fame: Nah.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
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Last edited by Pash Raj'oriq on Wed Nov 01, 2017 2:46 pm, edited 3 times in total. word count: 123
Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Yanahalqah
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The First Step
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
-Leadership: Complementing your subordinates
-Leadership: It's easier when people don't rebel against you
-Intelligence: Paying for information
-Intelligence: Visiting an Information Broker
-Intelligence: where to look for information
-Investigation: Gathering information is the first step

-Andaris: Waterstreet - the WIA
-WIA: Information brokers
-The WIA might be keeping tabs on you

Loot: -50gn
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: idk
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: (no)
Last edited by Yanahalqah on Mon Nov 06, 2017 5:36 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 80
"Speaking" - Thinking - "Others speaking"
Sarafaynha
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Thread Name: GOOD FOR WHAT NAILS YA
City/Area: Etzos, Sauncraft
Notes/Warnings: Existential discussion of the value of Nails and swords
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Smithing: Making a Nail.
Smithing: Hammer and tongs, tools of the trade
Smithing: Heating the metal
Endurance: Keeping the mind busy to ignore the body
Strength: Hammers are heavy
Psychology: The Nail is Mightier than the sword

Loot: Just doing my job
Injuries/Overstepping: Sore muscles
Fame:No?
Magic EXP:Nah
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Tio Silver
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Profession: God of Curses
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Thread Name: Day of the Exploding Rabbit
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: A cute little bunny gets blown up. Don't read if you like rabbits.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Alchemy: The basics of strength potions
Alchemy: Using muscles as reagents
Alchemy: Animal testing
Alchemy: "Bunny Blaster" potions
Chemistry: Lisarra's Blight Chemicals
Chemistry: Separating chemicals with water


Loot:
2 Jars of Lisarra's Blight Leeches
Lisarra's Blight chemicals
5 "Bunny Blaster" potions: potions that increase your strength but make you explode soon after.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Tio Silver on Tue Nov 07, 2017 4:17 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 96
Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thread Name: I'll always keep a lantern for You
City/Area: Ne’Haer
Notes/Warnings: Motherly love and antiseptic.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Rhetoric: Always tell your mother the truth
Medicine: An herbal tincture as antiseptic
Medicine: Packing a shallow wound with salve
Medicine: Bandaging with cloth
Surgery: Removing glass from a wound
Surgery: Determining whether stitches are necessary

Loot:
N/A

Injuries/Overstepping:
A faint jagged scar from elbow to mid-wrist on his right forearm from a glass bottle.

Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.
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Last edited by Pash Raj'oriq on Wed Nov 01, 2017 4:51 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 93
Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thread Name: Sea life isn’t always the best life
City/Area: Orm’del sea
Notes/Warnings: Pash stitches his own wound and whines a bit.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Endurance: Treating your own wounds
Medicine: Slow or stop bleeding with pressure
Medicine: Alcohol (rum!) as an antiseptic
Medicine: Wrapping a leg wound for movement
Surgery: Removing foreign objects from open wounds
Surgery: Running locked suture

Loot:
N/A

Injuries/Overstepping:
Really ugly scar on the outside of his right thigh from his terrible stitching job.

Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.
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Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thread Name: Just another night in Bayward
City/Area: Bayward
Notes/Warnings: Pash and Torim drunkenly get themselves out of trouble and treat their injuries after a bar fight. My only warning is I've used lots of Rakahi pidgin in this thread, which some words are perhaps understandable via context. Each post has an OOC at the end with translations, so fear not!

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Caregiving: Not punching your patient
Medicine: Prioritizing injuries by location
Medicine: Assessing the severity of a head wound
Medicine: Evaluating a concussion
Surgery: Cauterizing a wound to stop bleeding
Surgery: Cleaning a cauterized wound to prevent infection

Loot:
N/A

Injuries/Overstepping:
Pockmarked scar on his right bicep from a cauterized knife wound.

Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.
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Last edited by Pash Raj'oriq on Thu Nov 02, 2017 3:10 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 131
Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Nir'wei
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Thread Name: What's wrong with eating horses?
City/Area: Scalvoris Surrounding Areas.
Notes/Warnings: This thread is going to be reviewed by Pegasus! Also, warning of blood and violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Nir'wei:
Hunting: Hunting by yourself is much more difficult than hunting in packs.
Hunting: Fast hunting prevents prey from escaping.
Hunting: Injured prey become weaker the longer the hunt is drawn out.
Hunting: Scent-hunting using a canine companion.
Hunting: Hunting humans is much more difficult than hunting animals.
Tactics: Forward thinking is the backbone of a good strategy.
Tactics: Knowing your weaknesses is paramount to building your strength.
Tactics: Mounting an unceasing offensive.
Tactics: Intimate knowledge of the field of play gives significant advantage.
Tactics: Anticipating ambush positions.
Tactics: Making predictions based on your environment.

Qit'ria:
Stealth: Using Tall Grass to conceal yourself
Throwing (Javelin): aim at the broad side of a creature
Hunting: Retrieve your ammunition while on the run
Throwing (Javelin): Skipping while running into a throw
Running: Zigzag when being shot at
Throwing (Javelin): Aim ahead of targets in straight line motion
Fieldcraft: Water can be found downhill
Fieldcraft: Game trails usually lead to water
Stealth: Using blood scented items to create false trails
Stealth: Avoid open areas when dodging flying enemies
Stealth: Using decoy clothing to throw enemies off your track

Loot:
Nir'wei: Gained a blouse belonging to unknown woman, and a blood-soaked cloth strip belonging to unknown woman. Lost an arrow.
Qit'ria: Gained an arrow. Lost a blouse, trousers, and a javelin.

Injuries/Overstepping:
Nir'wei: Light exhaustion from long periods of time hunting.
Qit'ria: Shallow arrow puncture to the back of the shoulder. Shallow gash up the outside of left thigh.

Fame: At reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yes

Magic EXP: No
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Victor Amielle
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Thread Name: The Scientific Method
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Warning! It's a job thread!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Linguistics: Translating with the help of a dictionary
Research: The Scientific Method
Research: Characertistics of a Hypothesis
Research: Null hypothesis and alternative hypothesis
Research: Qualitative Studies
Research: Quantitative Studies

Alison Jeeve: Fraternizes with her subordinates
Ancient Language: The language of the Eidisi
Ancient Language: Nearly all Eidisi research documents are written in it
History and Theory of Magic: Awakenings differ between different kinds of magic

Loot: No.
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: No.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.
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Appearance

Due to one of his Awakenings, Victor's eyes glow with a soft silver light.

Items

Victor owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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