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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Abnormality
City/Area: Outside Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned. Didn't know how to wrap it up, so here it is.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 15xp
Flying: How to Limit Wind Resistance
Flying: How to Use Currents to Control Flight Speed
Detection: Keep Your Eyes Peeled for the Unusual
Detection: How to Tell if It Doesn't Belong in Nature
Linguistics: How to Switch Between Languages
Stealth: Moss Silences Footfalls
Intimidation: Deimatic Behavior
Intimidation: Imply Your Otherworldly, Out of Reach
Persuasion: Give a Little, Get a Little
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Aberration: What is a Harvester
Aberration: A Trade of Power

Loot: A unique stone in the shape of a lotus.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's choice.
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 122
"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Meet the Monsters
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Scented Candles. Abandoned.
Requested Rewards: 15xp
Knowledge:
Nav:
Trapping: How to Set up Trip Wires
Trapping: The Different Types of Alarms
Trapping: Determining Where Traps Will Be Most Effective
Trapping: How to Make a Spiked Board Booby Trap
Stealth: When to Reveal Yourself & When to Hide
Tactics: Consider Physiology of Enemies
Pickpocketing: How to Decide What Items Will Go Unnoticed
Etiquette: Acknowledge the Effort of Others

Noth
He just wants 15XP, no knowledge.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 98
"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Thread Name: Gaze of the Mistress
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned when Kovic retired. He's back I think, but this thread is dropped.
Requested Rewards: 15xp
Knowledge:
Socialization: How to Introduce Yourself
Seduction: Just Exist, Apparently
Seduction: Flash 'Em a Little Wing
Etiquette: How to Address "Superiors"
Deception: Looks are as Deceptive as Words
Deception: Lie When They Don't Know Any Better
Intimidation: How to Throw Your Weight Around
Intimidation: Be Unapologetic
Business Management: The Social Hierarchy of Co-workers

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's Choice
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 98
"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Honor Among Thieves
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: I had to leave ST for a period of time, and sadly this was one of the threads that was abandoned. Oberan wrapped it up and I wanted to get some rewards too.
Requested Rewards: 15xp
Knowledge:
Lockpicking: Pin Tumbler Lock
Lockpicking: Don’t Push the Key Pins Past Shear Line
Lockpicking: Line Up Pin Gap to Shear Line
Lockpicking: How to Use a Tension Wrench
Lockpicking: Applying Tension to the Cylinder
Stealth: Using High Vantage Points to Hide
Stealth: Stick to Shady Alleys
Stealth: Check for Guard Animals

Loot: Small wooden bird figurine
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's choice.
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 116
"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: The Call of the Void
City/Area: Etzos Underground
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned, my fault. Kasoria finished it, but I don't know how to add on my end.
Requested Rewards: 15xp
Knowledge:
Gambling: How to Throw Dice
Gambling: Keep Your Focus
Detection: The Feeling of Fingers in Your Pocket
Intimidation: Hurt Them When they Displease You
Intelligence: Ask The Right Questions
Investigation: How to Analyze Presented Information
Tactics: Careful When Talking to Strangers
Disguise: How to Conceal Your Wings with Clothing

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 97
"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Dead and Deader
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Honestly thought I already submitted this for review, but I guess not. Whoops. Here it is now. Neronin is retired but I think this was at a good stopping point.
Requested Rewards: 15xp
Knowledge:


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's choice.
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 59
"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Thread Name: Hunting Them Bootays
City/Area: Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: An abandoned thread. I think Nauta is gone.


Ellen’wyn


Detection: Watch where you're going
Detection: Finding an obstacle with your face
Intimidation: Making a kid cry
Intimidation: It's not always intentional
Investigation: Use your sense of smell
Persuasion: Trying to relay sincerity
Persuasion: Reasoning with the unreasonable
Strength: Pushing people aside with your wings
Tactics: Find an opening and take it

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: n/a
word count: 94
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Devils in Disguise
City/Area: The Oceans south of Yaralon... "then run"
Notes/Warnings: violence, drugs, and deep pyschology
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Pushing through intense hallucingens in a storm
Strength: Grabbing a chain
Strength: Pulling up anchors
Acrobatics: Sliding across a slippery deck
Acrobatics: Fighting on a rocking ship
Blades(Dirks): Killing Mer

Non-skill knowledge
The Seas South of Yaralorn
Yari Sauns Have No Suns.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: *cries* couple turkey deaths
Renown: none
Collaboration: No
word count: 83
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Trial and Error
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Probably boring. This was supposed to only be one paragraph of a thread, but before I knew it I had already written a whole page, so I just made it its seperate little thread. It's an info dump.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Maths: using time in calculations
Discipline: Waiting patiently for multiple breaks

Rupturing Orb: the maximum lifespan of a portal is probably 8 breaks
Rupturing Orb: Needs to charge in order to work
Rupturing Orb: Opening a portal, as well as sustaining it drains the orb’s charge
Rupturing Orb: after depletion, it takes five breaks to be able to create a portal
Rupturing Orb: the lifespan of a portal can be extended by five bits in return for two and a half breaks’ worth of charge

Renown: IDK
Collaboration: No
word count: 144
Just because I shouldn't doesn't mean I won't.


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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: A Window in Space
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: recognizing when one forest is not the same as another
Detection: spotting the difference between portals
Detection: noticing when something in your periphery changes
Detection: seeing exotic flora
Detection: seeking signs of a pulverized pebble
Stealth: just because you're being looked at doesn’t mean you’ve been noticed

Rupturing Orb: How to close portals
Rupturing Orb: Scrying
Rupturing Orb: Scrying portals look different
Rupturing Orb: Do Scrying portals go both ways?
Rupturing Orb: Scrying portals are not for transportation
Rupturing Orb: Commands for accessing different locations
Rupturing Orb: Commands for registering different locations

Renown: IDK
Collaboration: No
word count: 118
Just because I shouldn't doesn't mean I won't.


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