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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Mirror, mirror on the wall
City/Area: Foster's Landing, Etzos region
Notes/Warnings: Language. Zipper is a bully.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Zipper

Skill Knowledge
Transmutation: Ether Missile: Shooting to kill
Transmutation: Ether Missile: Firing consecutive Ether Missiles
Transmutation: Shapecraft: Twisting wood and stone
Transmutation: Pathway: Striking blindly far out of personal range
Intelligence: Getting a tip-off from a Foster’s Landing innkeep
Intelligence: Gathering available intel on a target before a confrontation
Intimidation: Inflicting harm to coerce obedience
Intimidation: Shouting down your attacker


Non-Skill Knowledge

Mortalborn: Children of the Immortals
Mortalborn: Flesh and blood
Mortalborn: Possess their own personal Domain of power
Immortals: Reproduce the old fashioned way
PC - Oberan
Audrae: Immortal of Shadows
Oberan: Son of Audrae
Oberan: Mortalborn of Mischief
Oberan: Hasn’t met his mom in decades
Oberan: Possesses a a Mischief-derived power with randomized effects
Oberan: A Mortalborn of many unreliable powers
Oberan: Possesses the ability to supernaturally escape bindings
Oberan: Uncertain limitations to his power
Oberan: Cunt
Oberan: Has a very polite mirror clone
Oberan: A drunken scoundrel


OBERAN

Skill Knowledge

Unarmed: Punch to the jaw
Endurance: Walking with a scorched leg
Acrobatics: Dodging an ether missile
Acrobatics: Jumping from a window
Acrobatics: Roll to break your fall
Acrobatics: Walking after a night of drinking
Endurance: Enduring a hangover
Deception: stalling for time
Stealth: disappearing in a crowd

Non-skill knowledge

Zipper: Abrasive Mage
Zipper: very angry
Zipper: Wants to know about Immortals
Zipper: Her clone seems nice
Zipper: foul mouth
Zipper: Can shoot ether from her hands
Zipper: can turn the wall into bindings
Odessa: Vice Queen of Augiery
Odessa: the name sounds vaguely familiar
Shenanigan Sphere: Not an offensive or defensive ability
Shenanigan Sphere: Random
Shenanigan Sphere: Not really helpful
God Key: Loosens binds
Oberan Clone: Will answer questions truthfully

Loot: An annoying clone (for 3 trials)
Injuries/Overstepping: Bran has a bit of a burn on his leg
Fame: Prolly negative for both of us
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes for Zipper.
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Thread Name: The hold up in the Bank of Ne’haer
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: There's some violence. I made an attempt to let Yrmellyn discover Schism magic (by attunement) in an altered state of mind in the end of the thread and have proposed one skill point in Schism. If you don't find that possible, it could maybe be replaced with Discipline: To stay composed when being threatened by armed enemies and Odd Memory: The vague backfire memory of meeting your own spark. At your discretion.
Ilinis
Skill Knowledges: 7 posts : 12 knowledge
Detection: Even being the most observant does not help with the unexpected
Deception: Lying to make yourself trusted
Deception: Buying time for a plan
Deception: Pretending you’re doing something
Psychology: Signs of Agitated Behavior
Psychology: Signs of Mental Stress
Psychology: Dominance in Groups (Who the leader is)
Acting: Committing to the role
Mathematics: Multiplication under pressure
Interrogation: Threats are motivation
Interrogation: Painting a Picture of their fate
Thrown Weapons: How to palm a blade, concealed

Other Knowledges

Ne’haer: Bank of Ne’haer (Vault has defenses)
Ne’haer: Bank of Ne’haer (Vault lock is ridiculously complicated)
Ne’haer: Bank of Ne’haer (The Ledger)
Misc: You don’t mess with people who haven’t planned well
People: Yrmellyn Cole (Strange ability to pick locks by sound)
People: Yrmellyn Cole (A few screws loose)

Loot: -25GN from being robbed
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor concussion
Fame: Probably minus for getting one of his bosses knocked out and failing the Bank of Ne’haer
Collaboration: (Yes/No) Yes
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) No
Yrmellyn
Skill knowledge 8 posts : 13 skill knowledge
Acting: To play dead
Business Management: To ask potential clients to pay via a bank account
Common Sign: The shorter the better, when you are a novice
Common Sign: To read short and easy sign messages from another person
Common Sign: To give simple answers of one or a coupe words
Attunement: To open up attunement slowly and cautiously to avoid shocks
Attunement: To let the impressions of the environment stream through you awareness
Attunement: To dampen the full impression in favor of singling out the vital few keys
Attunement: Tuning in to crafted items of metal
Attunement: Attunement backfire effects can feel like being struck by lightning
Attunement: To turn attunement inwards to your own mind and the impressions from inside
Attunement: To randomly discover another magic by attunement in an altered state of mind
Schism: Vague invisible impressions of the spark

Other knowledge
Ne’haer Location: The Bank of Ne’haer
Ne’haer NPC: Deimos, a banker
PC: The blue banker
Ne’haer NPCs: The three bankrobbers (“Eagle, Wingnut, Peasant”)
Ne’haer NPCs: The hostages in the robbery (Fat man, Tall woman, Small girl named Sybil)

Loot: - 9gn 5 sn from being robbed
Injuries/Overstepping: Major migraine attacks for eleven days (36 Saun - 6 Vhalar) due to attument backfire ? At your discretion.
Fame: Probably none
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Letters from Home
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This thread deals with grief, loss of a parent.

Requested Rewards:
Arlo
Skill Knowledge:
Cooking: Bite sized pieces cook quicker
Cooking: Wild hen
Cooking: Keep your broth
Discipline: Giving bad news calmly
Discipline: Not giving in to emotions
Discipline: Considering others even when in shock
Discipline: Reading into what is meant, not what is said, and reacting to that.
Fieldcraft: Coaxing coals back to life
Fieldcraft: Cook to stop items spoiling

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Vega
Skill Knowledge:
Caregiving: Trying to comfort a bereaved individual
Caregiving: Do what they want you to do, not what you want.
Caregiving: Be clear about what you're offering
Cooking: Uniform cutting
Cooking: Bite sized pieces
Discipline: It isn't all about me.
Discipline: Reacting to shock


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 161
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Thread Name: Boundaries
City/Area: Etzos, Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: Political talk and murder
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Gangui
Skill Knowledges:
Politics: Knowing the reach of your influence.
Negotiation: Bringing things back down to reality.
Politics: Sellswords cost money, good ones need a motive
Discipline: Withholding anger from stupidity
Negotiation: Contracts need to be explicit
Discipline: Upholding one’s personal honor.
Intimidation: Uttering a single word for terrifying emphasis
Politics: People are users or the used
Leadership: Demanding action from a superior

Non-Skill Knowledges
PC: Oberan
Oberan: Great magician
Oberan: Turned Gangui’s sword to grass
Oberan: A whore-monger and opportunist Zip says
Zipper: Zapper is a clone begotten from Oberan’s magic.
Zipper: Wrathful at Oberan
Zipper: Wants revenge against a Oberan
Zipper: Shows a lack of experience
Zipper: Desires power and influence.
Zipper: Shows her motives openly
Zipper: Killer



Zipper

Skill Knowledges:
Politics: Coming to terms with an unfamiliar political landscape
Negotiation: Asking for service beyond the contract
Intimidation: Sudden, uproarious laughter
Intimidation: A sudden act of violence
Intelligence: Every local information network begins with the first contact
Intelligence: A friend of a friend of a friend
Discipline: Withholding anger from annoyance
Discipline: Staying awake for trials because a magical clone borne of Deific halfbreed sorcery is stalking you and may or may not slit your throat in the night and may never ever disappear
Blades (Dagger): A straight stab to the throat
Blades (Dagger): Consecutive stabbing to ensure death

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Oberan: Made a clone of you call Zapper
Gangui: A big fan of Zapper
Gangui: Open to help you get acquainted with the locals
Gangui: Pig-headed stubbornness before contracts
Gangui: Not yet a lost cause for the project in Foster’s
Gangui: Has mercenary friends who could help - for a good price
Gangui: Unwilling to move too far beyond the terms of the contract
Gangui: Demanded a kill as a test of character
Gangui: Oberan turned his sword to a literal blade of grass

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP:No
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Thread Name: The Real Gold Prospector's of Etzos
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Business "meeting" of a sorts
Requested Rewards:
Gangui
Skill-Knowledges
  • Business Management: Hiring another professional
  • Investigation: Stopping a random passerbyer for questioning.
  • Etiquette: Don’t grab random people.
  • Etiquette: The ‘proper’ way to negotiate
  • Investigation: Greasing palms for answers.
  • Detection: Noticing the key points of a room.
  • Deception: Keeping conversations discrete.
  • Business Management: The necessity of finding specialized help
  • Resistance: Knocking back a stiff drink.
  • Persuasion: Get to know them before making a demand.
  • Negotiation: Undercutting
  • Discipline: Denying a gut reaction from taking action.



Non-skill Knowledges
  • Location: Sunnyslope
  • Location: The Goldmine
  • PC: Toan
  • Toan: Rogue
  • Toan: Regular at The Goldmine
  • Toan: Thinks he is funny
  • Toan: Somewhat eccentric
  • Toan: Hired by Gangui
  • Toan: Reluctantly swears oaths.
  • Toan: Does not hold moral superiority
Toan
Skill Knowledges:
  • Negotiation: Bartering for More
  • Navigation: Guiding ‘Tourists’ to their Destination
  • Deception: Indirectly Promising Things
  • Deception: Avoiding Full Commitments
  • Intelligence: Determining Value in Information
  • Intelligence: Everybody ‘Talks’
  • Negotiation: Concept of Haggling
  • Negotiation: Striking An Accord
Non-Skill Knowledges
  • Location: Sunnyslope
  • Location: The Goldmine
  • Gangui: A Moustached Twat
  • Gangui: Looking To Hire a ‘Rogue’
  • Gangui: Might Have Wooing Problems
  • Gangui: Determined To Get Back A Pendant

Loot: Minor payment for locating the Goldmine for Gangui
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Up to you mate
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP:No
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Thread Name: Supply Routine
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Already halfway graded by Jade, my half is just late for the party
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges:
  • Etiquette: Leaving 'Smelly' Baggage at the Door
  • Business Management: Meeting With Proprietors/Business Owners
  • Business Management: Determining Price Ranges With Stock
  • Negotiation: Making Business Propositions
Non-Skill Knowledges
  • Location: Cally's
  • Faith: The Owner of Cally's
  • Faith: Shorter But Also Noticeable
  • Faith: Already Has A Romantic Partner
  • Faith: A Good Sense of Business
  • Faith: Struck A Deal For Fish
  • Personal: Deliveries for Faith Exclusively

Loot: Job Thread so no need
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Up to you mate
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP:No
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Thread Name: Saoire Soiree
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Nah. This is an old one from last year's holiday event.

Requested Rewards: Linika
Skill-based Knowledge: 12, per # of posts.
  • Alchemy: Burned Ice Worm Skin an Inhibitor in "Frostbite" Process
  • Alchemy: Ice Worms "Boil" in Room Temperature Water
  • Alchemy: Ice Worm Mixture, Boiled Dry and Scraped, Yields "Frostbite"
  • Chemistry: Recognizing Brightfern Spores When Frozen
  • Deception: Citing Storage Requirements, to View All Facilities
  • Deception: Claims of Harmful Effects on Flora, from Some Greenhouse Glass
  • Endurance: Delivery Jobs in Viden in Zi'da
  • Intelligence: Small Talk with a Slave to Learn of Master's Standing
  • Investigation: Opening a Tied Bundle Without Leaving a Trace
  • Persuasion: Citing Special Herbal Care Needs, to Get inside Gated Estate
  • Sociology: Are Videnese Human Slaves' Status Higher than free Naerikk?
  • Teaching: Explaining Germination to a Slave
NON Skill-based Knowledge
  • Aranaz Estate has Seven Greenhouses
  • Offered a Position in the Viridian Wing
  • NPC: Tobren Aranaz, Master of the Estate
  • PC: Tasar: Aranaz Family Slave
  • Viden Location: The Aranaz Estate
Loot: A small vial of frozen Brightfern Spores / LOSS of 3 vials of Frostbite
Injuries/Overstepping: NA
Fame: Negative, I suspect
Collaboration: Yes, but Tasar did not come back.
Magic EXP: Nope, none o' that sissy stuff.

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Thread Name: Horse Fever
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Job Thread.

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Skill Knowledge
Discipline: Force yourself to get up and work despite being ill
Discipline: Complete a job despite having fever
Leadership: Take lead when a situation derails and others give up
Persuasion: Persuade someone to participate in a pragmatic solution
Painting: To use a "look alike" as model for a motif that is harder to get access to
Painting: To paint a horse

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: At your discretion
Collaboration: No. 10 points.
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Frostbound
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: nupe
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Transmutation: The Freezing Chill of Cylus
Transmutation: The Heat of Fire
Transmutation: The Warmth of Wool
Transmutation: The Slipperiness of Ice
Endurance: Withstanding the Cylus cold
Medicine: Understanding the causes, symptoms, and preventive measures of frostbite and hypothermia
Loot: Nuh
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Noe
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: A Little Mouse with Clogs On!
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

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Arlo
Skill Knowledge: 7 posts = 12 knowledge max
Cooking: Venison and berry parcels
Cooking: Using honey to bind food together
Cooking: Preparing and storing snacks
Detection: Movement in the leaves.
Investigation: Explanations for contrasting accounts
Investigation: Tracks as clues to mode of transport
Persuasion: Clearly stating when someone else can be boss, when you are.
Ranged Combat: Shortbow: Taking aim for a debilitating shot
Ranged Combat: Shortbow: Relax, let instinct take over
Ranged Combat: Shortbow: Vantage matters
Ranged Combat: Shortbow: Eye shots for flying prey
Stealth: Using bushes for cover

Loot: 1 x Pantheon corpse.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Vega
Skill Knowledge:
Ranged Combat: (Bow) Preparing for prey
Ranged Combat: (Bow) Breathe in to aim, out to fire
Ranged Combat: (Bow) Consider where you'll strike if you miss
Ranged Combat: (Bow) Take as much time as the shot demands
Storytelling: The song of dragons
Storytelling: The tale of the dragon and the volcano
Tracking: Identifying specific animals
Tracking: Identifying hybrids
Tracking: Determining direction of flight
Tracking: Determining when a creature is carrying another.


Loot: 1 x Pantheon corpse
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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