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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: For the cause, mine!
City/Area: Ne'Haer
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards: None
Knowledge:
  • Investigation: Be aware of the dangerous groups being investigated
  • Intelligence: Information comes easier when it fits where you are
  • Leadership: Use the experience of an underling
  • Blades: Repetitive thrusts to keep an opponent at bay
  • Ranged: Who cares about those not your allies?
  • Discipline: Etzos Black Guard protocol
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Being boss
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: -
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Thread Name: A Brisk Morning Stroll
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Not thumping someone when you really want to.
Endurance: Pain from battle.
Endurance: Psychological torture
Endurance: Travelling in the jungle when injured
Endurance: Sudden dip in cold water
Strength: Using momentum to pull someone into water
Strength: Swimming is good for building strength in your arms
Swimming: Lowering yourself into a pool
Swimming: Treading water
Swimming: Breath control underwater
Swimming: Using your hands to cut the water


Loot: +1 pretty shell
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Skill Knowledge:
Caregiving: Dealing with a difficult patient
Discipline: Dealing with an impatient individual
Discipline: Coping with boredom
Endurance: Sudden dip in cold water
Fieldcraft: Identifying spots to stay warm / safe
Fieldcraft: Consider the resources in your environment
Fieldcraft: Take samples of unusual stuff to learn what's safe
Fieldcraft: Determining what is, and is not, safe to drink
Medicine: Treating cuts and scrapes
Medicine: Treating bumps and bruises
Swimming: Treading water

Loot: +1 stone, some moss and a sample of the glittering colour-changing stone from the wall.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Raising spirits, or raising spirits?
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Nir'wei Knowledge:
Psychology: Embracing all your flaws
Psychology: Connecting with your other half
Endurance: Don't stop kicking until your heart stops beating
Kura Knowledge:
Animal Training: Trying to calm a panicky wolf
Detection: Recognizing when a wolf isn't a wolf
Becoming: Becomers can be trapped in their changed forms
Endurance: Withstanding nightmares
Etiquette: It's not polite to make your familiar wait
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: The Grander Hunt
City/Area: Scalvoris; Sweetvine Woods
Notes/Warnings: Gore
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Mount (Sohr Khal): Low-altitude flying.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Firing shortbows while riding.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Swooping charge.
Tactics: The element of surprise is a powerful tool.
Tactics: Always have a secondary weapon.
Tactics: Pick your most advantageous fight first.
Loot: +3 Oh-Deer corpses.
Injuries/Overstepping: Shallow scratches on elbows and knees; jagged stab wound in right forearm.
Fame: +2 Enforcing Law, whatever else is suitable
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Normalcy
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Skill Knowledge:
Fieldcraft: Protecting against wind and snow
Fieldcraft: Choosing the best place to set up camp.
Fieldcraft: Starting a fire for food and warmth
Fieldcraft: Gathering wood
Fieldcraft: Choosing the best wood for a fire
Navigation: Map-reading
Navigation: Working out time from scale
Navigation: Working from map to land
Navigation: Plotting a course over land
Psychology: Admitting feelings can be very tricky.


Loot: +1 set of armour
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Skill Knowledge:
Fieldcraft: Protecting against wind and snow
Fieldcraft: Choosing the best place to set up camp.
Fieldcraft: Starting a fire for food and warmth
Fieldcraft: Gathering wood
Fieldcraft: Choosing the best wood for a fire
Navigation: Map-reading
Navigation: Working out time from scale
Navigation: Working from map to land
Navigation: Plotting a course over land
Psychology: Admitting feelings can be very tricky.

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Give a gift (armour) +2
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Kali'rial
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Thread Name: Herbalism and It’s Theoretical Uses
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: n/a
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Skill Knowledge:
Medicine: Herbs act differently depending on the preparation
Medicine: Fresh comfrey root can seal wounds
Medicine: Sev’ryn circulatory system
Medicine: Biqaj circulatory system
Medicine: Belladonna can numb in small measured quantities
Research: How to take effective notes

Loot: - 3GN for 3 breaks with Callie (deducted from Ledger)
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: n/a
Devotion: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Brains and Bronze
City/Area: Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Gangui
Skill Knowledges:
Detection: Inspecting the layout of a room.
Detection: Inspecting items on the floor
Detection: Spotting copper and tin from a distance.
Leadership: Stepping up to help, even when not asked
Persuasion: Using humor to lighten the mood
Intimidation: Bursting into someone’s personal space
Negotiation: How to demand a quicker deadline
Persuasion: Showing can be better than telling sometimes.

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Location: Foster’s Landing: Gronnle’s Anchors and Anvils
PC: Jeryn
Jeryn: Apprentice Blacksmith
Jeryn: Takes spittle to the face without reaction
Jeryn: Has no sense of humor.
Jeryn: Stoic

Jeryn
Skill Knowledges:
Smithing: Bronze Ingredients
Smithing: Making alloys
Smithing: Temperatures for melting metals
Smithing: Working bellows
Negotiation: Over Extending Yourself to fullfill a promise
Mathematics: Measurements
Leatherworking: Investigating the quality of leather
Endurance: putting up with irritating people


Non-Skill Knowledges:
Location: Foster’s Landing: Gronnle’s Anchors and Anvils
PC: Gangui
Gangui : Loud
Gangui: Smells of Lilies
Gangui: Local mercenary and blacksmithing client


Loot: New high quality leather belt and scabbard for Gangui. Gold for Jeryn. Let me know what I need to deduct, or I can look it up myself once this is done being graded.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Positive for Jeryn starting a side job, assume Gangui will mention it around the pub.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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Thread Name: Duel of the fakes
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Oberan reveals his true self as a woman beater D: Summoning a great meteor from space, swathed in the blood of all the hogwarts characters Rowling killed in the last book, he batters Zip to near-death with it.
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Knowledge: Zipper

Skill Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Navigating your way deftly through a crowd
Acrobatics: Finding your balance and flexibility
Acrobatics: Safety Vault
Detection: Keeping track of your target in a crowd
Endurance: Taking a beating
Intimidation: Resting bitch face
Intimidation: The slasher smile
Unarmed Combat: Knee to the face
Unarmed Combat: Dodging a punch
Unarmed Combat: Engaging in a brawl
Unarmed Combat: Absorbing a body shot
Stealth: Ambushing your target

Non-skill
Etzos Bazaar layout
Etzos: alleys and streets around the bazaar
Oberan: Abandoned by mummy
Oberan: Not a complete joke
Oberan: Will be reckoned with the rest of the dirt

Bran

Skill
Unarmed: stomp to the shin
Unarmed: kidney punch
Unarmed: getting close to your opponent
Unarmed: putting your body weight behind a punch
Unarmed: wide swings are easily dodged
Acrobatics: dodging an attack to the face
Acrobatics: speed vault
Acrobatics: evading a sneak attack
Acrobatics: moving quickly through a crowd
Running: running fast tires you out quickly
Stealth: Moving with the crowd

Non-skill
Zipper: not worth much without her magic
Zipper: hit the nail on the head with her taunts
Etzos Bazaar layout
Etzos: alleys and streets around the bazaar

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Oh yes. Broke ribs for Zip, some bruising on the side
Fame: All da negatives. Make a scene, brawling in public, caught stealing for Oberan
Collaboration: Yup
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Two of a Kind
City/Area: etzos
Notes/Warnings: nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
-Climbing: Clinging to the side of a carriage
-Climbing: Hanging from your arms
-Acrobatics: Jumping from a moving carriage
-Acrobatics: rolling to disperse excessive momentum
-Stealth: dress like the people around you to be inconspicuous
-Stealth: stuck-up nobles purposefully ignore people who look like peasants
-Stealth: blend in by acting like everyone else
-Stealth: people don’t notice you when you’re around someone famous
-Pickpocket: don’t do it when watched
-Deception: if you are affected by your own abilities, you might not be suspected
-Detection: Studying a face
-Detection: searching a good spot to activate your abilities

NON SKILL
-Doran: Alchemist
-Doran: Keeps his cool in unexpected situations
-Doran: can replicate mortalborn powers
-Doran: the Hero of Oscillus
-Doran’s Blade: Xiur’s Bane
-Doran: Stabbed Xiur
-Doran: famous
-Doran: lives in the Tower of Ministers
-Doran: not just an ordinary human?
-Bran’s philosophy on why to use the Shenanigan Sphere
-Shenanigan Sphere: Effects can be replicated through alchemy?

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: Not really. A few scrapes and bumps
Fame: eh
Collaboration: Yes, with Doran
Magic EXP: nope
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Qit'ria
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Thread Name: I Never Axed for This Life
City/Area: Sweetwine Woods, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Field Craft: Using river rocks as hammer
Field Craft: Use brushes to provide cover for your tent
Field Craft: Original Stones can be found closer to the river's edge
Field Craft: Avoid porous stones if you need strength
Field Craft: Crafting a Stone Axe head from scratch
Stealth: Small wild life acting normally likely means the area is safe

Loot: Stone Axe Head
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)
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