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Theo Nji'Ryn
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Thread Name: Mending
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Sexual / Mature Themes
Rewards Requested: Theo
Skill Knowledge (4 posts total = 9 maximum):
Business Management: Look after your girls
Business Management: Managing an argument with the boss
Business Management: Capitalize on your strengths
Business Management: Long term planning is vital
Deception: More difficult with Biqaj eyes
Detection: Listening to the tone of voice
Logistics: Working out clients for girls you handle
Logistics: How to maximise security for your girls
Psychology: Admitting vulnerability can be a sign of strength

Zana: Will work for you when you leave the Lap
Zana: Doesn't want Peter to touch her
Zana: Wants to help in the new business

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: +1 Good deed (staying with Zana after the attack), +1 (checking on Zana), +1 (checking on Billie), +2 (gift of bow + bolts), +2 (offering both girls a place to live) = +7
Devotion: NA
Collaboration: Yes (with Zana)
Magic EXP: No.
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Zana
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Profession: Living a libertine lifestyle.
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Thread Name: Playing the Parts
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Sexual / Mature Themes
Rewards Requested: Zana
Skill Knowledge (4 posts total = 9 maximum):
Business Management: Sex sells
Cosmetology: Dressing to draw attention
Cosmetology: How to keep clothing in place
Cosmetology: Consider what clothing shows and what it promises
Seduction: The importance of a good build up
Seduction: Keep them wondering, keep them entertained
Socialization: What do grooms parties want?
Socialization: Looking at the bigger picture of a whole event

Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: NA
Devotion: NA
Collaboration: Yes (with Theo)
Magic EXP: No.
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Mal
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Joined: Mon Sep 12, 2016 11:15 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Thief
Renown: -92
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Thread Name: Exhyxtential Crisis
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Lots of Gore, Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Lots of negative fame for getting dozens of gruesome, monstrous murders pinned on him, from a beast terrorizing the people of Etzos.
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Theo Nji'Ryn
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Thread Name: Playing the Parts
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Sexual / Mature Themes
Rewards Requested: Theo
Skill Knowledge (4 posts total = 9 maximum):
Acting: Erotic sketches as part of a grooms party
Acting: Supporting roles
Acting: Props are important, but meaning is vital
Business Management: Hosting events
Business Management: Variety for grooms parties
Business Management: Supply and demand
Logistics: Organizing supplies for events
Logistics: Considering supply and demand in the stocking of the bar
Socialization: Considering all age ranges for events


Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: NA
Devotion: NA
Collaboration: Yes (with Zana)
Magic EXP: No.
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Kali'rial
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Joined: Fri May 19, 2017 9:49 pm
Race: Qi'ora
Profession: Hunter for Cally's (Expert)
Renown: 167
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Thread Name: Glasshouse
City/Area: Scalvoris Town (Glass Temple)
Notes/Warnings: n/a
Requested Rewards: n/a
Knowledge:
Business Management: Be clear on limits of a business deal
Business Management: Accepting a job offering

Faith: Owner of Cally's
Faith: Chef and Healer
Faith: Has been to/lived in Rynmere
Faith: Can see souls of the dead

Vri: Immortal of Death, Sorrow, Love and Remembrance
Famula: Immortal of Servitude, Blood, Resurrection and Souls

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: n/a
Devotion: I'd like to say Pray to Moseke +1 but Kali never quite got around to it!
Collaboration: Yes
Points: 15
Magic EXP: No
Comments: Mostly a conversational thread that ended up with Faith hiring Kali. :)
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Aeon
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Thread Name: A helping hand
City/Area: Eastern Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: A Scython-Ur dies, nothing really graphic
Aeon
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge (7 posts = 12 max.):
Hunting: Doesn’t solve every problem
Hunting: Avoid extremely territorial animals
Ranged Combat: Aiming for the bigger target for a bigger chance of success
Ranged Combat: Proper breathing technique
Ranged Combat: Shooting at a moving target
Becoming: Allows a person to become an animal with the use of a totem
Becoming: Totems are made of skin, blood and bone
Rupturing: Allows a person to rip open the fabric of reality and teleport
Rupturing: Very useful
Necromancy: Raising dead men as servants
Abrogation: All about shields
Animal Husbandry: How to carry a kitten

Domain Magic: Initiation
Domain Magic: The spark
Domain Magic: There are limits
Domain Magic: Overstepping
Domain Magic: Corruption isn’t half as bad as you thought.
Domain Magic: Becoming
Domain Magic: Rupturing
Domain Magic: Necromancy
Domain Magic: Abrogation
Fridgar: Really big and really strong
Fridgar: The thunderous punch
Fridgar: Heavily scarred
Fridgar: A mage
Fridgar: Has the urge to kill whoever he looks in the eyes.
Malcolm Krome: A Becomer?
Lotharro: Most of them are mages?
Scython-Ur: Giant fang-cats

Loot: +1 Scython-Ur cub
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Saving Fridgar?
Devotion: Never!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP:No
Fridgar
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Aeon: Good with a bow
Aeon: Some human in Gauthrel
Aeon: Heroic
Aeon: Saved you from a Scython
Bestiary: Lurkers of the plains
Lurkers: Huge
Lurkers: Live in Eastern Gauthrel
Lurkers: Wield colossal weapons
Lurkers: Intelligent

Loot: + 2 Scython-Ur cubs
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Killing a moderate monster +3
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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Aeon
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Thread Name: Gotta Go Fast
City/Area: Northern Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: There's an eww moment, but it's all PG13
Aeon
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Hunting: Hunting a Sohr Khal
Endurance: Walking for long periods of time
Endurance: The fangs of a giant snake
Becoming: The ability to completely regenerate all wounds
Discipline: Doing what needs to be done
Rupturing: Loud
Blades: Decisive stab through the brain

Location: Northern Gauthrel
Northern Gauthrel: Not many trees
Fridgar: Wants you to join his pack
Fridgar: One of the more mutated mages
The Jegers: Monster hunters of Gauthrel
The Jegers: One of three Lotharen paths
The Jegers: Trials
Sohr Khal: Wings and tail are the weak points
Scalv Ziemia: Weak from the inside

Loot: Loss of armour and a sword, and probably a shirt
Injuries/Overstepping: Yes. Just yes.
Fame: +6 for killing a high-level monster
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Fridgar
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Aeon: Quiet
Aeon: Perceptive
Aeon: Fucking crazy
Aeon: Might die saving the both of you
Aeon: Fearless
Bestiary: Scalv Ziemia
Scalv Ziemia: Colossal snakes
Scalv Ziemia: Northern gauthrel
Scalv Ziemia: Incredibly fast
Scalv Ziemia: Swallowed a human whole with ease
Scalv Ziemia: Sensitive to daylight
Besitary: Sohr Khal
Sohr Khal: Feathered dragons
Sohr Khal: Live in the North
Sohr Khal: Mount

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Aeon
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Thread Name: Survivor: The beginning
City/Area: Kaer Jeger/Eastern Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Hunting: Choosing your weapon
Hunting: Water means animals
Fieldcraft: Arrows aren’t good for cutting rope
Fieldcraft: The basic needs
Fieldcraft: Everything can be useful
Discipline: Going through hunger and thirst

Location: Kaer Jeger
Location: Eastern Gauthrel
The Jegers: Three Trials
The Jegers: Ranks
The Jegers: Weaponry
The Jegers: Mutagens
The Jegers: Trial of the Survivor
Eastern Gauthrel: Forests and rivers

Loot: A bow, a quiver with 6 arrows, a bag, and a meter long length of rope
Injuries/Overstepping: Hunger and thirst
Fame: N/A
Devotion: Never!
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Theo Nji'Ryn
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Thread Name: [Dust Quarter] Acquisition, Logistics and Happy Accidents
City/Area: Rharne - Dust Quarter
Notes/Warnings: mild violence, sexual references
Requested Rewards: Theo

Knowledge:

Acting: minor details can enhance believability
Acting: choosing the best role for the occasion
Stealth: blending in in plain sight
Stealth: using shadow play to your advantage
Negotiation: appearing to yield the upper hand can yield a greater return
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: using the element of surprise to land a blow

Other Knowledge:
Rharne: Dust Quarter: smells like poverty and hopelessness
Rharne: Dust Quarter: forgets those who die or move on
Rharne: Lightening Knights: they avoid the Dust Quarter at night
Rharne: Lightening Knights: they patrol the outskirts of the Dust Quarter
Brandi (npc): prostitute in the Dust Quarter
Brandi (npc): has a lot of fight in her
Brandi (npc): needs polishing and has potential
Camus (npc): old man and childhood friend
Camus (npc): taught you a lot of things
Camus (npc): out of the Dust Quarter for unknown reasons

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruised hand
Fame: Good deed-ran off an attacker +1. Gave a gift (10 gn) +1
Devotion: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
(10gn deducted from coin ledger)
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Alistair
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Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 6:12 pm
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Profession: Wanderer
Renown: 1000
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Thread Name: Deconstructed (Job Thread)
Alistair
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Profanity
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Keeping on long-term customers for consistent revenue
Business Management: Taking jobs from wealthy patrons
Business Management: Delegating your workers to prevent a violent situation
Medicine: Taking a patient's details
Medicine: Gauging whether a patient is physically or mentally ill
Medicine: Yithnai-borne illnesses
Medicine: Taking on a patient with an immortal-borne illness
Persuasion: Using an argument based on personal experience
Negotiation: Alleviating a negotiating partner's concerns

Yithnai: Strange Eyes
Ren: Yithnai
Ren: Sadistic
Ren: Capable of manipulating bugs
Ren: Profane for the sake of causing discomfort
Fridgar: Doesn't think Ren is sentient
Fridgar: Wary of Yithnai

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: +1 General Good Deed (Taking on a difficult patient)
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Fridgar
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Profanity
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Using your anger to resist other urges
Intimidation: Remain cold, show no empathy
Intimidation: Backing up orders with verbal abuse

Plague Bearer: Strange eyes
Plague Bearer: Commands insects
Plague Bearer: Possess insect-like weapons
Ren: A liar
Ren: Fucking creepy
Ren: Wants to sleep with you
Ren: Masochistic
Ren: Not sentient
Ren: Sick?

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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