Review Requests 2.2.5

[Rokas]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Edible
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence, some gore near the end, mention of privates, definitely not the best thing I've written.
Skills Used: Wilderness survival, strength: expert, intimidation, endurance, defiance: competent, detection: novice

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
-Defiance - Dancing: Fire Sheet
-Defiance - Dancing: Lash of flame
-Defiance - Caress: Stone Knuckles
-Endurance: Taking a blow to the groin
-Strength: Bashing a skull
-Detection: The sound of something snacking on your food

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: Pain.
Renown: Up to reviewer
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, defiance

[Vega]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: ~~Family Ties~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings:

Vega

Skills Used:
Needlecraft (Competent)
Psychology (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Needlecraft: Sewing small garments
Needlecraft: Making sewing stitches even
Needlecraft: Keeping tension even in the fabric
Needlecraft: Keep stitches neat
Needlecraft: Small stitches have small gaps between them
Psychology: How people perceive themselves is often very different to how you perceive them.



Loot: +1 tunawa sized scarf imbued with optimism

ability

The Favored has the unique ability of being able to pluck a shimmering, silvery hair from their head, regardless of whether or not they have actual hair. This hair may be tailored into anything that the Favored might make from Needlecraft. While the tailoring, as a whole, is being done, the Favored may focus on a memory or strong emotion, and weave it into the object. Once it is finished, the silvery hair will change color and appearance to fit the object made. Following that, anyone who makes contact with the object will either be able to see the memory as a vision or feel the emotions as strongly as the Favored imparted into the object. These things can be resisted easily if so desired by those who touch it.

Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion.
Wealth Points: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Vega]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: ~~ Small Furry Dweebs ~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings:

Vega

Skills Used:
Detection (Master)
Hunting (Master)


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Exploring tracks
Hunting: Know which size of track you're looking for.
Hunting: Footwear is an important consideration when tracking
Hunting: Start where you know the tracks begin
Hunting: Different kinds of movements have different kinds of tracks
Hunting: Sometimes, hunting is about decision-making, not tracks.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion.
Wealth Points: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Goku]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Bowman's first day
City/Area: scalvoris town
Notes/Warnings: NA
Skills Used:
Ranged: unskilled
Strength: competent
Endurance: competent
Resistance: unskilled

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Ranged (Shortbow) x4
Strength x1
Endurance x1

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: arm and abs pain for a few days
Renown: -
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

[Oram Mednix]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Customer Review: Dyrgen(tm) Masterwork Crossbow
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: No warnings, I think. This is a thread in which Oram decides to take his new toy out for a spin. The monkey that appears is from a modnote to this post, from a thread taking place on the same trial.
Skills Used: Discipline, definitely Discipline (Expert). Also Perception. (also Expert); Strength, Stealth (both Competent); Acrobatics, Deception (both Novice). ETA, and Combat: Ranged. Durrrr!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

[Acrobatics] It is easier to control body movements if you can watch yourself doing them.
[Combat:Ranged] Crossbow draw mechanics are…mechanical. Draw consistency should be automatic.
[Combat:Ranged] A crossbow user controls the weapon’s aim mainly by pointing alone.
[Combat:Ranged] Crossbows take longer to reload than bows.
[Stealth] Loading a crossbow makes more noise than loading a bow and arrow.
[Stealth] Minimizing silhouette movement makes your motions harder to detect.

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: Reviewer’s Discretion
Wealth Points: No.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience?: No.

!	Message from: Pig Boy
	I will review this

[Vega]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: ~~Feeding the Masses~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nurp

Arlo

Skills Used:
Caregiving (Novice)
Cooking (GM)
Fieldcraft (Master)
Detection (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Caregiving: Not asking until they're ready to talk
Caregiving: Reassuring someone that, whatever happens, it'll be ok.
Cooking: Lamb stew for the masses
Fieldcraft: Settlement cooking setups
Fieldcraft: Working in a large camp
Fieldcraft: Using locally fished produce
FIeldcraft: Minimise the number of dishes used!
Fieldcraft: Feeding a crowd

Vega

Skills Used:
Animal Husbandry (Novice)
Discipline (Master)
Endurance (GM)
Fieldcraft (GM)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
None requested, thanks


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion.
Wealth Points: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

[Oram Mednix]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Don’t know why there’s no sun up in the sky
City/Area: Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: This thread was written for the purpose both of acknowledging the storms of 30 Ashan described here, and narrating Oram’s acquisition of a signature item described here
Skills Used: Detection, Discipline, Endurance (all Expert). Leadership, Logistics, Strength (all Competent); Animal Husbandry, Animal Training (both Novice). Musical instrument: Wind (Untrained).

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

[Acrobatics] Keeping one’s footing in high winds is difficult.
[Animal Husbandry] Animals sometimes panic during thunderstorms.
[Leadership] Assess an urgent situation quickly before making decisions.
[Leadership] Having a clear chain of command in place is important because one may suddenly become indisposed.
[Logistics] A firefighting plan may involve organizing teams that don’t normally work together.
[Strength] Doors and window shutters are hard to manhandle shut in intense winds.

Loot: Eagle-bone Whistle of Valor. Described and approved here
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Reviewer’s Discretion.
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Yeva]

Review Request

Thread Name: Seeing Red
City/Area: Storm's Edge, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: This place takes place after Yeva's revival. She seeks out Vega to personally thank her for approaching Ziell and having her ressurrected. After a chat, Vega helps Yeva come to terms with her new life and what that means.
Skills Used (Yeva): Mount (Untrained), Socialization (Untrained), Etiquette (Untrained), Detection (Expert), Discipline (Expert), Psychology (Untrained), Deception (Untrained)
Skills Used (Vega): Etiquette (Untrained)

Requested Rewards (Yeva):

Skill Knowledge

Deception
x1

Psychology
x4

Mount
x1

Etiquette
x2

Storytelling
x1

Requested Rewards (Vega):
N/A - Player only seeks experience points for this thread.

Loot: Vega gets a new hat and scarf made by Yeva.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Up to reviewer.
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience: No

!	Message from: Pig Boy
	I will review this

[Doran]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Chemistry of Metals
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Study thread for Doran's Charter in Chemistry. Might be dull. Taelis is a Personal NPC.
Skills Used: GM Chemistry (100x/109k), GM Research (250x/118k), Master Meditation (155x/68k), Expert Detection (76x/67k), Competent Writing (30x/32k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Chemistry: The physical properties of metals
Chemistry: The chemical properties of metals
Chemistry: Mercury is liquid at room temperature
Chemistry: Definition of an alloy
Meditation: Going for a walk can help redirect your focus
Writing: Writing an collaborative essay

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

[Woe]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Golden Rule
City/Area: Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:

Woe

Knowledge:
Leadership: x 4
Intelligence: x 3
Investigation: x 3

Loot/Losses: 1 echo scroll with Perdita (deducted from point bank), 4 bespoke frames for Perdita's drawings.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Yes if you see something worth awarding!

Skillplay

Novice: Nothing Used.
Competent: Detection, Leadership, Intelligence, Deception.
Expert: Investigation, Persuasion, Tactics.
Master: Nothing Used.
GM: Psychology

Perdita

Skills Perdie Used:
Drawing (Expert)
Intelligence (Novice)
Investigation (Novice)
Research (Competent)

Knowledges I'd like to claim:
Investigation: Use a legitimate cover-story during investigations
Investigation: Report back clearly.
Investigation: Separate fact from belief
Investigation: Identify next steps
Investigation: Clear communication is key

Intelligence: Secure a confidential means of gathering information

Research: Present your findings clearly.
Research: Utilise lists to prioritise topics.

Loot: 1 echo scroll with Woe
Renown: Yes if you see something worth renown.

Hart

Knowledge:
Etiquette: x 3
Discipline: x 3
Detection: x 2

Loot/Losses:
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Yes if you see something worth awarding!

Skillplay

Novice: Etiquette.
Competent: Discipline
Expert: Detection, Politics.

Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No